My Write-Up on AarYa's 'Abhi Abhi' on their Anniversary - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Nikki, sorry this was a late reply.. was on vacation. This write up was simply perfect. It was as though I watching the episode all over again. Fantastic job as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
o wow di,,it was so amazing and and very passionating..i visualized the whole sequence again as if i was watching this..thank you di..
will wait for ur FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesome work Nikki.Cant say how good you are in writing and presenting Arya romance.When I watched that Epi what I felt was precious and what you wrote was more than that.Coz now PV is over but you are taking us in that divine world again and again through your work...👏👏👏👏👏.
I know I am very late in giving you feedback but what to do yaar...sometimes life becomes so tough to live and ...any way leave all these.Just enjoy each and every moment of your life dear coz your happiness is much needed for us.😳😳😳😳.
And once again wanna say that you are such a flawless writer that I have seen and I find myself fortunate to be your friend...coz it makes me proud to think that you are my friend..my elder sis...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Nikki - hola, how are you? Seems like forever...

One year since the loveliest "uss raat" on Indian tv?? Wow - doesn't seem like it - its still so clearly etched in all our minds!! (Gutter-minds 😉).

Confession - just about that time (2-3 weeks ago) i was struggling with a chapter in DJH. Bohut critical point tha - Arti's realization of her love. I just couldn't get the inspiration for it. So guess what i did? But of course - played and re-played and re-re-played Abhi-Abhi. And problem solved!

This is such a beautiful song and these two breathed life into it. Its as if each line, each word was written for Yash and Arti and for GC and KS playing them. For me, this song will always belong to these two characters and to PV. (The original picturization does not even make much sense).

Aisa kyun karte ho aap? Now i have to go find the video... or maybe i will just re-read your write-up...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: princess121993

Nikki di...

What did u do...u took me in the world of aaryaland...again...n killed me...but i m happily dead..

when i was reading this...i felt that i was watching this episode again...it gave me butterfiles in my stomach in the same way...when i had watched the episode

starting from their cute masti and teasing session...i rememeber..yashu looked really funny when he was trying to see his nose...n i loved the way he tries to cut his nose...only because his aartiji thinks...that his nose id aakdi...lol...more then funny..i found this scene very cute

love the way...aarti kicks aman out of the house..for no mistake of his..poor aman...i so wished he had more to do in pv...but sigh...

and then starts the actual romance session...what i love the most about aarya romance..is nothing is over...everything is natural...with a touch of perfection

i literally imagined every scene while reading ur write up...and u wont beliee it...but i wanted to keep reading it as it kept giving me different feeling all the time...

thanks for sharing with us ur wonderful write up di/...love u for taking me to aarya land again

Charmi for this song I'm also ready to die happily a thousand times 🤢
Now also I can close my eyes and visualize the whole song sequence.
AarYa's cute naughty nok-jhok and then cute Aman's comments and then Aarti throwing Aman out, poor fellow.

And then the light goes off and NIKKI died at that very moment. 🤢


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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Abie10

OMG Nikki❤️ This is so beautiful! its like watching the episode all over again.☺️

Their little nok-jok was so cute! And how Aarti was like his nose is pointed..yash trying to see his nose at that instant.😆 Poor Aman thrown out for listening hubby-wife talks. Each and every scene that followed was so dreamy with love and passion written on yash face for his beautiful wife who's oblivious of his presence.😳 With Aarti saying sorry recalling how yash hates rain to his surprising confession I don't hate rain anymore..then sprinkle the water on her. She later tried to walk off but nope not that night.☺️ Ahh, such an unforgettable episode. Thanks for this dreamy write-up Nikki..just fab!👏👏

i've started my day listening to Abhi Abhi song thanks to you!🤗

Yes Abie it's like watching the episode all over again. And dying again 🤢

Yes poor Aman was thrown out for listening to a drunk hubby-wife talk. 😡. Love the way Aarti calls him besharam 😆

And Uff I died when Yashji huskily says "I don't hate rain anymore" and then look at her with his killing bedroom eyes 🤢


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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: roserosey

nikki di wow such a lovely surprise 🤗❤️ reading this write up is like each and every scene in that uss raat episode was playing in my mind...☺️ its just beautifully written ...so dreamy...going through it again yash-aarthis silly talk abt the pointed nose😆 and yash is trying to have a look at his nose😉😆 and admitting it is pointed and saying thats why u r always saying i m rigid😉😆😆 ...hilarious... poor aman was thrown out of the house by aarthi😆...

aawwnn...yash admiring aarthi passionately when she is playing in rain☺️🤢...and then they both played throwing water at each other after yash confessing that he dont hate rain anymore...☺️ ...and then aarthi hugging yash🤢...

rest was history which was carved in our heart and mind...never to forget sequence ...abhi-abhi☺️...

beautifully written di and thank u so much for this surprise🤗
happy abhi-abhi anniversary to all pvians🤗

enjoy ur vacation di🤗


I'm happy Rosey that you loved my surprise 🤗

AarYa can talk on Any topic and can make it HOT AND SENSUOUS, just like them 🤢

And them playing in the rain 🤢
Uff what to say to the rest of the part except for ☺️



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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: caller123

Nikki. I visualized everything and I love it.

their noh- jokes and rain scene simply amazing. Unknowingly I went down the memory lane and now I can't stop dreaming.
Just love it dear!❤️

Happy Abhi Abhi anniversary to you all.🤗

Kate you went down the memory lane unknowingly and I went down knowingly again and again and again 🤢

And am willing to go there million more times 🤢

Happy Abhi Abhi anniversary to all. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
nikki its really deserves a great round of applause and praise for eye to each detail 👏👏
two songs which click to me while reading is

rim jhim rim jhim rum jhum rum jhum
pitter-patter...

bhigi bhigi rut mein tum ham ham tum
in the wet, wet season, you and i, i and you...

chalte hain chalte hain
we walk, we walk.


bajtaa hai jaltarang par ke chhat pe jab
the harmonica plays, while on the roof,

motiyon jaisa jal barasaaye
water pours down like pearls.

buundon ki yeh jhadi laayi hai vo ghadi
the drops of this rainshower have brought that moment

jiske liye ham tarase
for which we have yearned.

bajataa hai jalatarang par ke chhat pe jab
the harmonica plays, while on the roof,

motiyon jaisa jal barasaae
water pours down like pearls.

buundon ki yeh jhadi laayi hai vo ghadi
the drops of this rainshower have brought that moment

jiske liye ham tarase
for which we have yearned.


baadal ki chaadarein odhi hain vaadiyaan
sheets of clouds have wrapped around the valleys;

saari dishaayein soyi hain
the world sleeps.

sapanon ke gaaon mein bhigi si chhaanv (chaao) mein
in the damp shadows of dream villages,

do aatmaaein khoyi hain
two souls are lost.

baadal ki chaadarein odhe hain vaadiyaan
sheets of clouds have wrapped around the valleys;

saari dishaayein soyi hain
the world sleeps.

sapanon ke gaaon mein bhigi si chhaanv (chaao) mein
in the damp shadows of dream villages,

do aatmaaein khoi hain
two souls are lost.


aayi hain dekhne jhilon ke aayine
they have come to see the mirrors made by the pools;

baalon ko khole ghataaein
the lowering clouds open cracks (in them).

raahein dhuaan dhuaan jaaeinge ham kahaan
paths of smoke, smoke; where shall we go?

aayo yahin rah jaaein
come, we shall remain here.

aayi hain dekhne jhilon ke aayine
they have come to see the mirrors made by the pools

baalon ko khole ghataaein
the lowering clouds open cracks (in them).

raahein dhuaan dhuaan jaaenge ham kahaan
paths of smoke, smoke; where shall we go?

aayo yahin rah jaaein
come, let's remain here.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Aankhon Se Toone, Yeh Kya Keh Diya Dil Ye Deewana, Dhadakne Laga Tanhai Mein Hum, Mile Is
Tarah Baarish Mein Shola, Bhadak Ne Laga Tu Tadap Ne Laga, Maein Machal Ne Lagi Boond Tan Pe
Giri, Jaan Machal Ne Lagi Chha Raha Hai Ajab Sa Nasha... Thodi Sardi Bhi Hai Thodi Garmi Bhi
Hai Thodi Hai Bebasi Thodi Marzi Bhi Hai Aise Mein Hum Bhala Kya Karen Tu Bata Jo Bhi Hota
Hai Woh, Hone De Dil Rubaa Aankhon Se Toone ... Paas Aaun Jo Maein Dil Yeh Darta Hai Kyun Door
Jayega Tu Aisa Lagta Hai Kyun Maine Waada Kiya, Maine Li Hai Kasam Umr Bhar Na Kabhie, Pyar Hoga
Yeh Kam Aankhon Se Toone ...

well the aboves one's for aarya❤️ n here this one for us too rock n roll🥳


ek ho gaye ham aur tum to ur gayin nindein re
When you and I became one, our sleep went winging away,

aur khanki paayal masti mein to kangan khanke re
and in pleasure your anklets and bangles clashed.

hamma hamma...

ae pahali baar mile tum pe dam ye nikale
Since we first met, I haven't been able to catch my breath.

tum pe yeh jawaani dhire dhire maddham machale re
This youth slowly grows fractious for you.

khili chaandani jaise yeh badan jaana mila tumko
The body you've been granted is like blooming moonlight.

man mein socha tha jaisa ruup tera aaya nazar hamko
The beauty I'd imagined in my mind appeared before me in you.

sitam khuli khuli yeh sanam gori gori yeh baahein karti hai yuun
Your fair, fair beauty wrecks me when you take me in your embrace.

hamein tumne jab gale lagaaya tab kho hi gaye ham to
When you took me in your arms, I became lost to the world.

hamma hamma...

khuli zulf mein teri aankhon mein madhosh ho gaye
I've grown drunk on your flowing locks, in your eyes.

gore gaal pe bhige honth pe yaara fida ho gaye
I sacrifice myself to your pale cheeks and moist lips.

sanam pyaar mein bhigi raat mein pyaas jagaate rahe
Beloved, I thirsted ever more for our love-drenched nights.

khatm na ho sanam pyaar ka mausam chaahatein barhti rahein
May this season of love, may our desires never cease; may they only keep increasing!

hamma hamma...

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