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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

I am back again to be amazed by your awesome update and make you feel bore by my lenthy comment.😆😆😆
But seriously Ishu I am following your writing for a long time.What you alz write just makes me alz amazed and think how great you are as a writer.But in this update yu have put something that I just cant express in words but it's still echoing in my minds.I am just lost in your writing dear.In your other works I find light hearted and fun loving ishu who loves to be naughty through her characters...who loves to write romantic moments.But in this update I have found a very mature Ishu who is very much able to portray the pain..the agony..the turmoil the clash of emotion...I cant express it properly what you have actually done Ishu...👏👏👏👏
The way you have portrayed the pain and sufferings of yash and his mental state is just...👏👏👏
The way you have portrayed Arti's love for her love is...👏👏👏👏.
Actually you know something Ishu when love crosses all the limits man faces the lack of words to express it and this is what happened to me.I am literally having lack of words to express how much I loved this part...so will say only that till now what I have read written by you this was the best given by you dear...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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COLOGY

@COLOGY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Sawwrryyy i replied for first part...😆 just now finished second part also...

Yash ji is struggling so much...😭 oh plz bring much needed flashback😳

Edited by COLOGY - 11 years ago

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lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Loving you endlessly wow super excited about the story and really a big hug for you thanks for the PM.

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: roserosey
isya i dont know what to say its like i m on roller-coaster ride all the emotions flooded at the same time 😳 angry pity sadness happiness i m feeling every emotion now and also confused to some extent😕

i loved ur thought of keeping aarthi in arpithas and arpitha in aarthis place...⭐️

but isya here as u showed yash first loved aarthi but when he was forced to marry arpitha he did it and couldnot forget aarthi but time healed that and slowly he noticed arpitha as a caring loving woman and started loving her...means he moved on from aarthi right😳till there it was perfectly showm by u and i m very well connected to it too😃😃 but the point bothering me is when yash said to pankaj that he loved aarthi andwill loveher endlessly and just a while before he confessed to aarthi that he loved arpitha and will love love her endlessly ... this i couldnot get it how can he love both of them...😕😕 sorry isya pls dont mind me just i felt like that😊

aarthi was pushed away once again i felt bad for her...😭😭 she came to yash only to love him ans have his love for her...but again destiny played here...😭

i wonder who is the person gonna stop aarthi to go away is he prateek😉 why i m feeling that he likes aarthi too...😕

now waiting for the yashs step...
indeed u did a great job dear⭐️⭐️⭐️ its difficult to put all emotions in this way and u rocked in that👏👏

waiting eagerly for the next part

Thank You Rosey for your wonderful comment !! Hmm.. I'm glad you loved some thoughts of mine and that you are quite well-connected to the story !!

Okay... Your confusion sounds natural to me.. Maybe my sentence confused you and some others in a certain portion of the part ! 😛

He told to Panku that he had started loving Aarti when Aarti admit that Yash is still everything for her which means Yash was very well informed in his mind that Aarti is still single and has not moved on with her life ! Further sentences which I wrote can clear your confusion.. Like she had admit to him that she realized Arpita is everything for him, she had forgive him for his 'betrayal' towards her and blah blah.. 😆 (Try to read it again after you understood what I'm trying to tell you..) 😳

When Aarti left him behind, he broke down since he can't tell her how much he loves her too.. And in his mind, it is fixed that he doesn't want to ruin Aarti's life and it is enough for him to have Arpita's memories for him to continue living a life... He also doesn't want anyone including Panku or any other members to know about her real feeling towards Aarti or else, they would go to any extent just to unite two of them which is what they are doing right now.. (Panku and Pratik) 😆 😳 !! And this made him to shout at Panku that he still loves Arpita and he will do all along his life !

I hope you got into your mind what I'm trying to tell you !! 😆 😳 Don't hesitate to ask me more !! 😆 😳

Hmm... Right, it's Pratik ! 😆 Oh my Rosey ! Why such thought ?? 😆 😛 He is there just to stop Aarti ! 😆 😳

Thank you so much !! It was hard for me to put all in one but I guess I've made it somehow !! 😆 😳

Thanks Rosey !! 🤗 Next one.. tomorrow maybe !! 😉

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Zetter
Awww my heart was breaking for both Aarti and Yash 😭 😭 😭...Yash so wanted to hold Aarti in his arms but he refused cause he doesn't think that he has any rights to ask anything of her when he betrayed her trust even when she told him that she forgave him and still wants him and that she loves him deeply...Even if she goes away she will still love him cause she breathes and lives only for one person and that is her Yashji 😳 😳
The flashback was well done 👏 👏...Yash telling Pankaj that he still loves Aarti was awesome, I'm glad that Pankaj took it upon himself to try and stop Aarti even if it was through a third party 😃

Hmmm I think I know who is at the train station the Scindias' chote beta Pratik the one who thinks he can be a smooth talker like his dad and Yash 😛 😆...Awww he's singing AarYa's song and Aarti will have flashbacks 😃 😳

Can't wait for what comes next behain 🤗

Awwwnn Di !! By reading your comment, I always wondered how is that you easily get well connected to the story ?? !! You are truly amazing reader !! ⭐️

Can't tell much because you have actually concluded this second part of the story in the first paragraph.. 😳

You're right.. Yash is still everything for her and she could go any extent to do anything for her Yash... And that's the reason she left him behind when she found out the poor soul sort of still rejecting her in his life and that is still in love with Arpita ! It's time for Yash to come out from his 'world' and jumps into Aarti's world.. 😳

Glad the flashback was well done !! 😆 😛 I was trying my best to give the perfect one to all of you !! 😳 Yes, Panku and Pratik are good souls.. 😳 Let see how Pratik handles her till Yash arrived at the railway station.. Guess it's gonna be fun because it will of course take time for Yash to realize what he's doing by letting Aarti to go back !

Yeah, Hope I can write a very nice part for the next one !! Hmm.. Hoping too that FB scene will be a beautiful scene !! 😳

Thank you !! Awwnn your hug !! 🤗 ❤️

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: kratzyfan
Isya, an update full of different feelings👏👏⭐️...
i felt really bad for aarti😭😭...angry on yash😡...then again pity on yash for his condition😭...n got really confused about yash's feelings😕...can a person love two people at the same time😕...

but one thing...i couldn't see this condition of yash n aarti😭😭..it's breaking my heart💔😭...

pankaj good job man👏...n who is that someone😉..is he prateek?..i don't know why but i'm feeling that he prateek n he too have feelings towards aarti😳😕...

so finally our queen of aarya romance is succeeding in making us cry n confused😉.👏.👏...great job dear⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️...

just can't get enough ..though it's quite long update😉...so update soon...

Thank you Anu !! 😃

Hmm... your confusion about Yash's feelings !! 😆 Check the previous reply if mine to Rosey... Read it and try to get the points.. If you didn't get it, please do ask me !! 😊

Yeah.. definitely it's heartbreaking !! After all, two people who are separated just because of their love will be painful na ??

Yup.. It's Prateek !! 😳 LOL.. What does make you said so ?? 😆 😳

LOL... Your queen of romance is still gearing up for some romances in next update ! 😛

I know.. You have the intentions to know more !! The update will come tomorrow !! 😳

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha
Great👏 👏 and emotional😭 update isya...

Felt sad for both yash and aarti...😭😭
Yash monologue was painful.💔..Yash want to hold aarti but he feels that he deceived her faith😭😭..Yash so much in guilt🥺
Aarti confession was emotional 😭😭...the way she confessed that she will still love him endlessly was heart touching one❤️

Aarya flashback scene was awesome...👏
Yash-Pankaj conversation superb👏...Liked the way yash confess that he still loves aarti ⭐️
I am so happy that finally pankaj decides that he make aarya together..👏

Last part is interesting...
Who is that unknown person stopping yash😉..I think its prathik😎...wow he is singing aarya song😛 where aarti hears and thinking about their flashbacks😳
nice song⭐️
Precap sound interesting
Wow romantic update😃..then eagerly waiting😛
Continue soon😊
Thanks for pm dear🤗

Thank you Radha dear !! 🤗

LOL.. Glad to found your comment was without any confusion or questions !! 😆 You are right.. Guilt and scared to be loved are the only reason he refused to exit from his world !

Yes, he admits that he's still in love with Aarti as he could feel and understand that Aarti hasn't moved on in life and that they are everything to each other !! 😉 😳 Panku as usual, one good soul who couldn't see his brother suffering in life ! 😊

Exactly.. our very own Pratik !! 😆 There will be flashback.. I hope it will come as a beautiful one !! 😳

Happy that you liked the song !! 😆 😳

Next one will come tomorrow !! 😉

Most welcome !! 🤗

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: caller123
Love it. So nicely written. Love the flow of the story. Love how Pankaj wants to unite these two. Waiting to see that someone.😉
Thanks for the Pm and sorry for the late reply.

Glad you did !! 😃 !! Thank you so much !! 😃

Yes, Panku is all sets for his plan !! 😉 Hmm... someone has already started the game !! 😆 Let see how it ends !! 😉

Welcome and it's okay !! Do take your own sweet time in reading and commenting !! I won't mind !! 😳

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Anuraksha
Awesome...waiting...

Thank you !! 😊 !! Coming.. 😳

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: chitsri65

ISYA...the sky is clear now 😆 loved this Arti in Arpita and Arpita in Arti's place...'Love can happen only once' played in my mind of PV's Yash...Your Yashji loves Arti but marries Arpita thinking he won't fall in love but her good nature changed his feelings into love and the sudden death broke him and his fate meets his first love Arti but Yash's promise to Arpita stops him or rather handicaps him...help is needed for him to come out from that circle...now dear ISYA...the cycle of confused love 😆...will be sorted out if it is peddled well by Arti...cycle break is in your hands ISYA...now dear how is my confusion...jokes apart...

One word - 'Fantastic'...you may not be aware but let me tell you honestly - you are too good in handling emotion and believe me - you can do much much better with ranges of emtoion. Am surely waiting eagerly for your next move and ah! yes...the cheer song is too good...now who is that man...prateek?

😆 !! Truly loved your understanding on the story cycle so far !! 👏 Finally, I'm very much relieved that the sky is very much clear now except for the cycle of confused love which will get the resolution soon !! 😉 😆

Me too.. I hope I will handle it well with my own idea !! 😆 😳

Thank you for the word of 'fantastic' written there for the way I handle the emotions !! 🤗

Glad you loved the song !! 😳 Yes, he's Prateek !! 😆 😉

Next one will come tomorrow !! 😉