AarYa OS : Loving You Endlessly ! ❤️ Final Part Page 51 !

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Awesome dear! Thank you for sharing a beautiful story with us the ending was romantic.

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Beautiful OS with perfect ending. The story had every ingredient that readers want - be it - conversation, emotion, humour, love, conflict, song, tease, lover's tiff, bonding of loved ones -- with the backing of railway platform/compartment to add the visualization effect for readers ... and ofcourse your write up. Well done ISYA 👏 Loooved it !!😊

Looking forward for another treat from U. 😃

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tleshni

@tleshni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Hey Isya..I read ur OS at one go.. and I liked it 👏👏... Great job!...

Urghh.. So Yash forgot Aarti temporarily and started to love Aarpita instead... Hmm men will always be men... quickly can jump from one to another😆.. and women like Aarti is the one who will pine for the love...😭...

But Im glad u made Yash realise that Aarti is his true love and not Aarpi.. Loved the whole reunion in the train and somehow it reminded me of a scene from a Tamil movie😉...

great job once again and hope to see similar stuffs from u dear..👏

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rachna1970

@rachna1970

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Awesome update Isya ,,,n a perfect end of this beautiful story

Great job

Thanx for the pm

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RIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

really isya darling arpita n prateik they are rockstars who actually put sense in lost n gonne cases our aarya😛

n yes finally this dump selfish yash kind off finally found who true n love aarti do to him endlessly😃

Isya i like new flavor with perfect songs you know how much i like songs 😳

really the new style is also cool like your darling😎

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RIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

isya wow Prateik tried his best but was not able to stop aarti but destiny or i shud say you had made her dizzy

n then yash running make me rermmber aarti running for her love in FOV

aww yash again lost in his lady love beauty n charm n aarti ka joz ka jhatak in sudden unplanned kiss😉

haaye yeh aarya bhi naa so filmy n madly in LOVE

yash on his knees even knowing how badly injured it is n then aarti cant see him in pain aww n you naughty gal dint let aarti heal yash bleeding lips with her

but thn i blv aarti anger is justified but stupid yash give lot of torture to our aarti hai naa finally they meet to be ter for each other forever n ever

n the married n both devils teasing wow

n then yash cant take this torture session so dare to take his bride on his shoulders n gone to meet her n be with her n she always thr just for him only him n then they unite and the true love win for eternity

bearthtaking brilliant isya👏👏