Aarya FF (PV - Umeed Se Bhari Zindagi) updated pg 113 (7/7)

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Good one. It was quite funny how Yash and Arti were using Palak as a medium...the kiss part was the cutest part. ...the character Ishita sounds good and hope it remains that way... Arti's past was a bit emotional and Yash felt it too...and he is slowly getting attracted towards Arti and they are slowly comfortable with each other...looking forward towards how your story is going to unfold...

Was quite surprised by your delay in your update...hope U r fine and cheerful...well written dear.

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

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jayshu17

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

I am enjoying this story, love the fact that Aarti and Palak went with Yash. Well written the communication between Aarya eagerly looking forward to what happens next.

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Sdaren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Good one. It was quite funny how Yash and Arti were using Palak as a medium...the kiss part was the cutest part. ...the character Ishita sounds good and hope it remains that way... Arti's past was a bit emotional and Yash felt it too...and he is slowly getting attracted towards Arti and they are slowly comfortable with each other...looking forward towards how your story is going to unfold...

Was quite surprised by your delay in your update...hope U r fine and cheerful...well written dear.

Thanks Chitra for your comments. 😊

Glad that you liked the kiss part ... yeah Yash is attracted to Aarti and when will Aarti feel differently about him?

I delayed my update partly because I realised I did a bad job for the earlier updates and also I wanted to write a bit longer update than before.

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Sdaren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: jayshu17

Thanks a lot for taking interest in the story.

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Sdaren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: sb1410
I am enjoying this story, love the fact that Aarti and Palak went with Yash. Well written the communication between Aarya eagerly looking forward to what happens next.

Thanks Sharlene.

Glad you are liking the story, I thought the story is too boring.