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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey Nikki! As per your note, don't be sorry for giving the update late. What I read now is worth waiting for two weeks.

Coming to update, thanks for giving a long update. Today, I can't say it's superb, it's not because I didn't like it, but because it's really heart-wrenching 😭😭😭 to read those words. The revelation is horrible, even if it's only Gayatri's side of truth. I am afraid how will I read when Aarti will tell her side of truth. It's a roller coaster of the revelation of truth.

Gayatri feared of Yash about is he okay. She called him and asked him why he did what he did. She didn't expect this type of behavior from Yash. Yash said when he heard Aarti saying to Aakash that she love him and then she dance with him, that all make him lose his temper. All what Yash did was to make her his so that she can't go away from him. His ego hurt that she loved Prashant and now she love Aakash and not him. I liked the way she scold Yash for hurting Aarti, even though Yash didn't know the truth but this is not the way to hurt a woman.

What Yash did was wrong, but he is scared to know the truth. He realized seeing Aarti's condition that something really really bad had happened with her in the past, and he is dreading to hear the truth.

Gayatri started telling everyone about what happened in the past. Gayatri told that she and SP got impressed by Aarti in their first meeting with her. Loved the bond formed between Gayatri and Aarti of Ma and daughter in their first meeting.

What Gayatri said jokingly to SP, that Rekha Bhabhi was teasing me the other day, she said 'I think you're so desperate to make Aarti your bahu, that if Yash says No, then I won't be surprised if you get Aarti married to Prashant' and I laughed at her comment". Ammaji made that joke to be true. She didn't like Yash and after hearing about praises of Yash from Gayatri's mouth the two devil minds, Ammaji and Prashant make the plan of snatching the happiness from Yash, that is snatching Aarti from him.
At last Prashant is able to succeed in his dirty plan.

I just loved the character of Gayatri. I really feel bad for her. How she had felt as a mother and as a woman when he saw Prashant like that and Aarti sobbing near him? How she had believed that her son can do such thing? The way she stood with Aarti, not as a MIL but as a real mother would be to support her daughter in such type of situation.

I don't know why she didn't tell anybody about that incident, especially Yash. I just wanted that she has to tell Yash about that incident. Yash would have accepted Aarti after knowing what had happened with her. But it's yet to reveal what happened after Gayatri saw Prashant and Aarti in that condition.

Aarti would have told Yash what happened with her, but I think she didn't want to hurt Yash by saying all that. Waiting for Aarti's side of truth... take your time, I will wait, because I know it's worth waiting...

Shashi to tell you the truth as the moment for the whole truth to come out in the open is approaching, even I'm scared. I'm scared to write those scenes, scared to think what if is doesn't come out right? What if I don't do justice to the character, to the scene and ultimately to the whole story.
I guess that's why it took me two weeks to write chapter 19 . Lets see how much time the next chapter takes.
Gayatri knows Yash like the back of her hands. She knows him too well to feel exactly what he's feeling and going through. That's why as it dawned to her why Yash was angry and hurt she immediately called out for him.
Before asking him of his behavior the first thing that she asked was wether he was ok. And yes ever in her wildest of dreams could she have imagined that Yash could also almost end up doing what Prashant did to Aarti. And that's why she later reprimands him. And also questions his true love for Aarti,

In Yash's defense, he was scared with the fact that Aarti was about to leave him, reject him for someone else, once again after making a place in his heart, after so much difficulty. And that's how he ended up doing that.

And when later Aarti had screamed in front of him, he knew that something horrible, terrible had happened to her in the past. And that's why now he's scared to even find out what it could be, because deep down he knows that whatever it is, it'll be heart breaking and life changing for him.

Gayatri was already impressed with Aarti, even before she met her, as she had heard so many nice things about her from Rekha Bhabhi. And even SP was impressed with her when he met her, so SP also started dreaming of getting Aarti married to Yash.
But now that one joke from Gayatri changed everything. Ammaji asked her that stupid question and Prashant heard Gayatri's answer, which resulted in that horrible incident.

OMG Shashi Gayatri not only once but twice saw Aarti in that exact same situation, in that exact same pose.

And regarding why Aarti didn't tell Yash about him, well that part will come only when Aarti starts to tell her side of the story and not before that.

So all I can say is that we all will have to wait for the whole truth to come out.

And Shashi you didn't read my new OS, which is very light and different from this and is romantic also.

But thanks for this beautiful comment for showing your love and support for me and this FF. ❤️








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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nan0102

very nice update..will be wAiting for the next update,,and sorry like is not working for me due to my slow internet connection..thanks for the pm..

Thanks Nan
And it's ok if like is not working. Your comment also means a lot. 😊

Thanks Pretty 😳

Originally posted by: radhika786ify

very nyc upadate di...love the whole story and become senti for aarti's condition...😭


Thanks Radhika. 😳
So sorry to make you so senti and to make you cry like this 😭

Thanks 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update as usual nikki

tnx for clearing the flashback😉...i understand now...
waiting for aarti side...

So shobha know abt aarti...but why she hate aarti?🤔
really prashanth 😡😈

poor yash, he will be sad and he will die with guilty...
so aarti loved yash ? and she sacrificed her life for yash?
and she acted like she hate yash because she wanted yash move on 😭

so ture :
Love means to, not to snatch something. Love means to keep the other one happy, to give them all the happiness in the world, not to hurt them like this. Love means respect, not to insult the one whom you love so much. Yash if you truly loved her you wouldn't have done what you did today. Not even in your dreams you would've thought of hurting like this.

i have one request , i think,it's better aarti say all the past story only to yash...better they clear misunderstanding between them not front of the family...

update next part soon nikki..

Thanks for finally understanding Aarti's character. I know that lately how much you had started to hate her and I repetitively kept on asking you to wait for the truth to come out. So now I'm glad that your opinion for Aarti finally changed.
Shobha's character will come out in the next chapter.

And yes Aarti sacrificed her life for she also loved Yash and this'll break Yash even more, knowing what and how much Aarti suffered because of him 😭


Leevi Aarti will tell the truth in front of the whole family, as the whole family had cursed and blamed her and are responsible for her condition at one point or the other. So now she'll finally defend herself in front of all.

And thanks for liking, what I wrote about true love. ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05


2nd comment 😆


why gayatri accused yash ? ...i dont understand her...it's her fault not tell the truth to other...i mean yash...we know abt yash...he will be aarti side i remember the scene after prashanth and aarti marriage...he had discusion with aarti and he asked if prashanth forced her why she was silent ?
i feel aarti and gayatri are stupid...i dont understand why she maried with prashanth because he raped her ? ...what the reason to marry with the evil ?😭

why gayu didnt tell to SP? now she is accusing yash , he was wrong like prashanth what the hell oups sorry

if i will be aarti place...now prashanth will be in jail 😡
it s silly to marry with guy like prashanth...he did because he wanted take revenge..and aarti and gayu was prashanth side...
they are acted like nothing happened front of yash 😡
i remember the scene where yash in the hall and aarti was close with prashanth 😭 why she acted like that? thats mean she was in prashanth side...

if she really loved yash...maybe she loved yash but not trusted him...

if he know abt prashanth he will punch prashanth and will marry aarti then flashback scene "when aman and yash talking abt the marriage and yash doubted abt prashanth and he wanted marry aarti"...

For me yash is gentleman...and he is ready to loves her and marry her...even if she was prashanth wife ...Somewhere his mind it's right...he never trusted prashanth and he felt prashanth forced aarti...It's also true loves for me...And he really loved aarti that's why after prashanth death...he married aarti and he wanted to move on ...it's not his fault , he thougth aarti loves akash...it's all because of prashanth...then of course because of gayu and aarti, arbita and aman...they never trusted yash...

they hide full story...
and now gayu said it's not true love...and he is wrong... what the hell 😡


it's killing me ...she is accusing yash...😭😭

now aarti had nightmare...before she acted like nothing happend between prashanth and her...and one day yash wanted kiss her she was sillent 🤔 why why why? where the nightmare gone that day?

sorry for my bad comment abt gayu...but it s only my side...i didnt liked the way she is accusing yash...i know she is yash mom anyway...they didnt trusted yash in past and now too...she wanted protect aarti but it's failed...Poor Aarti...

and it s killing me why she tell the flaskback front of the family now how they will treat aarti...it's will be affect aarti 2...poor aarti 😭

okay i dont hate aarti...i think she did because she loved yash...and she wanted he marry with someone other...there we can talk abt true love and sacrifice... "love means sacrifice"

only person i hate it's gayu...again sorry for bad comments abt her...she said she loved yash but i think she loved prashanth 2...thats why she was his side and not tell the full truth abt aarti ...and she is yash mom and she know abt him..why she didnt tell 😭

Poor aarti , poor yash😭

sorry for my comment,it's only my side...as girl i will never trust prashanth and i will never marry man like him...and i will never support him with his crime...Thanks god he is gone to hell...

I dont like...the way yash suffre poor guy...now he will die with guilty...😭

sorry nikki...i know u like Gayu but i wanted to share my opinion

waiting for aarti side...maybe there is some reason

Big hugs🤗

Leevi just as you formed an opinion for Aarti before knowing the truth, you are doing the same with Gayatri now.
So like all the times all I can say and ask from you to wait till the whole truth comes out and then after that you can blame any character as much as you want, cause then it'll let me know what wrong I did and where and with which character.

But I'd like to give my POV on one thing that you've mentioned above.

Why did Gayatri accused Yash and why did she compared him with Prashant?

Well Gayatri is Not Wrong here. If anybody has told her that Prashant could do such heinous thing she'd have believed that person immediately, cause she knows what kind of a person Prashant was.

But if anybody had told Gayatri they Yash Could end up doing the same heinous thing, she'd have slapped that person there and then, cause she knew and trusted Yash that he'll never ever do such a thing even in his wildest of dreams.

But yet Yash ended up doing the same thing that Prashant did. They both wanted to hurt Aarti to satisfy their male ego. And that's why Gayatri compared him with Prashant

I hope that helps you a little. 😳




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sb1410

Hi Nikki, Firstly let me say congrats on another brilliant chapter 👏 👏 👏 you showed to us the state of mind of all the individuals be it dazed confusion, helplessness, sadness, anger, hate, disgust, written so good that we as the readers can identify with them 👍🏼. G3ma reaction to Aman and Akash understandable 👍🏼 if Aman had tried a bit more to explain to Yash about Akash and Aarti relationship then your story MTB would of been different this way Yash and the entire family learns about the ugly, dark hidden truth from the [horses mouth] G3ma/Aarti after all they both lived it and suffer for it. Akash entry brilliant adds more drama and questions as to where was he , who was behind him leaving, why did he not keep in touch, how could he do that to his sister when she needed his support and love all the answers will be given by you in the following updates in details which will leaves us the readers or shall I say fans/friends in awe , or at a momentary loss for words. G3ma and Yash scene [mother and son] ⭐️ much needed. what I admire about G3ma Is she knows her children their strengths, weekness all the good and bad qualities. Here we have a mother faced with a good son, and a bad son one her stepson, one her blood son, because of situation forced on her she had to make a choice something no mother wants to do and only they know the pain of doing this, her love for Aarti/yash/prashant[yes] and their family forced her into doing/saying things that lead to regret, pain, and saddness.

Nikki your writing skill have made us feel all the emotions of the characters in MTB 👍🏼 👏.
The flashback love it ⭐️. Aarti and Yash both developed feelings for each other in their brief meetings so much so that it would of lead to marriage had not the evil Ammaji 😡 stuck her nose in and her darling grandson Prashant 😡🤬 with his lustful, drunkard, hateful, spiteful, jealous evil, sinful ways in Aarti life. Both g3ma and yash father liked and approved of her as their dil a good match for yash but evil lady aamaji 😡 had to push in her pet 😡 if yash or aarti disagreed with the match. I hope she has the good sense too feel shame and disgust at herself when she and the family learns the truth about her pet 😡..The last scene great description 👏

Sharlene I was having a rough day yesterday. As I was about to call it a day, I saw your comment and believe me it lifted up my spirits.
Not because you complemented me and praised my writing and MTB. But because you caught the nerve of this chapter.

Actually most of the readers too had caught the essence of this chapter, but when I read their comment I was already happy.
But when you posted your comment that time I was really down. So that's why I'm saying that you lifted up my spirits ❤️

And I'm amazed the way you've understood Gayatri's character and pointed out exactly the same things that I wanted to point out (and I did) in this chapter, so hats off to you 👏 and a big hug also 🤗

Yes if Aman had succeeded in telling Yash who Aakash was then the FF would have turned out differently 😆. And maybe Aarti's past wouldn't have come out at all.

Yes Aakash's entry has added more suspense to the story. And his story will be revealed after Aarti's side of story ends. I know I know there's a lot of confusion going on in here 😕

OMG Sharlene G3- Yash scene is my personal favorite in this chapter. 😳

But, What an irony isn't it? That the one whom Gayatri gave birth to turned out to be a devil in disguise. And the one with whom she had a relation in name only, turned out to be an an almost perfect son. I said almost, because Yash also almost did what Prashant did to Aarti. 😲

Even Aarti fell in love with Yash within whatever little time they had spend together. But fate had something different planned for both of them.

Prashant came and ruined everything for everyone. And his partner in crime was non other than Ammaji 😡

And Sharlene you also made me blush with you compliments for me. ☺️

Love you dear for all the encouragement, love and support you've given me and MTB 🤗 ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
you started thread 3 😲
i dont know about it
i have read many updates in thread 2 nikki
you are a expert in writing sad ff..!
i am in love with your ff lovely_nikki ...!
muahh love you and update soon
dont forget to p.m me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

Nikki, u are the best of the best...👏

👏👏

Anu 🤗. I know that you had reserved the spot, so I was waiting so eagerly for your comment. That's why I kept checking the page again and again.



when i read that update, i couldn't actually comment as i'm completely sunk in ur story...so now i felt that i could comment but still no words...

I understand very well what you must be going through as I go through the same thing again and again while replying on everyone's comments 😭

so now i came out of my hibernation period

And I'm so happy that you came out before the next update 😳 🤗

the trauma that aarti, G3 n yash are going through is unimaginable ...

I know dear we can't even imagine that 😭



as i'm a girl, personally my heart is crying out for aarti for what she had gone throughout this entire period...after that dreadly incident...and just want to her...n assure her that nothing bad gonna happen again...

Anu being a girl it was difficult for me also to write it. And the worst part is I'll have to write the actual scene later, when Aarti tells her side of the story. 😭 😒




that prashant😡 n that ammaji.😡...chi ...what persons they are ...i'm sorry..they are not humans...they are most cruel n worst than hyenas which feed on dead bodies...

Don't won't to talk about the spineless creatures 😡




i can only wish one thing...may god make yash n aarti cry out their hearts😭..comfort each other in each others arms...and start a fresh beginning to their journey where there'll be no prashant😡 ...

Anu they'll cry and cry and cry to their hearts content in each others warm and supporting embrace 😭 🤗

But then after that there'll be ONLY HAPPINESS AROUND THEM ❤️



i know it would be very difficult😳 to come out of that situation...but nothing is impossible for true love❤️...it has the power to heal any type of wounds...n moreover the bright n blissful future should not be clouded in the shadow of a dark past

Yes it'll be difficult for both of them. For Aarti to come out of it and for Yash to bring her out of it, but they'll come out and then there will be no turning back.

There will be only bright and happy future ahead of them ❤️


P.S.: I'm very sorry for the late comment😭...

P.S: .It's Ok I Understand 🤗




My answers in highlighted part 😉
Anu after a long long long time I finally got a long comment from you and that also so beautiful ❤️

Thank you and love you sweety 🤗 ❤️


Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aaryan1234love

you started thread 3 😲

i dont know about it
i have read many updates in thread 2 nikki
you are a expert in writing sad ff..!
i am in love with your ff lovely_nikki ...!
muahh love you and update soon
dont forget to p.m me

Wow you are new here in MTB

First of all welcome to "Meant To Be" 🤗

Yes we've reached thread three 😳

And thanks for complementing me ☺️

Love you too 🤗

Ok sweety first of all what should I call you? 😳

And second, if you want a PM, please hit the Like Button and add me to your buddy list. Cause I only send PMs to those who've hit the Like Button or who are in my buddy list 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
so sad update,
but, loved it
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