Originally posted by: chitsri65
Nikki, you are slowly and steadily emerging as a writer⭐️demonstrating the right expression, tone and content with natural conversation that relates to readers.
Involvement of characters, creating an atmosphere to give a flashback is well said. Detailing too is very important and you have worked on this very beautifully without repeating any emotions to get the right flow. Again...well done.
Coming to the story...it is a painful past...Waiting is painful, forgetting is painful but not knowing what to do is the worse kind of suffering...and G3 has gone thru this and continues to (am not applying now for Arti...for it is still worse).
'Anger ventilated often hurries towards forgiveness and concealed often hardens into revenge'. Prashant's anger on Yash and G3 Ma's opinion of him...took the worst side of him. Wish G3 Ma kept the opinion of Prashant to self...for I feel it may not have ended this worst (& more) ...probably a shade less. The less we talk of this character - the better - for even 'The Dictionary' would refuse to add a word to its list.
Thanks for the kind words dear and don't be sorry - just would like to say - your effort has paid off.
Current Affairs
