OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

AMAZING!!! Is all I can say about the whole story!
Honestly, the way you wrote it right from the beginning was just wonderful. I loved reading all the chapters! It has been a pleasure reading hence thank you so much for the PM.
I am sorry, I did not comment earlier, I had thought I will when you update the last part, but now, I don't know what to say:(
All I can say is that you are a brilliant writer and I love reading all your works although I must confess I hated Yash in the start in this one and felt awful for Aarti:( Ishita was such a... Grrr.
Loved how you showed the change in Buaji's character! Prateik, Paridhi, Viddhi and Pankaj's naughtiness. LOL
Will miss reading it, but I am glad you had a happy ending and that you are and (hope) you will continue writing:):)
Best wishes:)

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: RA17

yup even i rejoiced our chat nikki

well i also love this ourburst of aarti n welcome all her so keep blaming an drocking arre mein kahan last chapter abhi 6 baaki hai mere dost

CVs tumhari galti ki sazzaa hum bhugat rahe hai😛

shayari kehne se na bolne se bas 2 shabd dil se jo agar dusre ko chu jaye toh shayri warna khali alfaz reh jaate hai 😉😳

CVs ki Galti ki Sazaa hum last episode tak Bhugat rahe the 😡

Take your time to read, as I might not come online for the next few days.

Riya I loved the last line that you wrote. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
AMAZING!!! Is all I can say about the whole story!
Honestly, the way you wrote it right from the beginning was just wonderful. I loved reading all the chapters! It has been a pleasure reading hence thank you so much for the PM.
I am sorry, I did not comment earlier, I had thought I will when you update the last part, but now, I don't know what to say:(
All I can say is that you are a brilliant writer and I love reading all your works although I must confess I hated Yash in the start in this one and felt awful for Aarti:( Ishita was such a... Grrr.
Loved how you showed the change in Buaji's character! Prateik, Paridhi, Viddhi and Pankaj's naughtiness. LOL
Will miss reading it, but I am glad you had a happy ending and that you are and (hope) you will continue writing:):)
Best wishes:)

I can't thank you enough Avina for such a heartfelt comment. And please never apologize for not commenting earlier. You always hit the like button and I knew that you've read my update.

You are not the only one who hated Yash earlier.

Actually in my original plan I wanted to show that Yash was faking it, after Aarti's outburst and after she fainted. But the way everyone got angry with him, I changed my mind and showed before only that he's faking it, but had to hide it from Aarti for hers and Aayu's safety.

I always wanted to see a changed Bua and Paridhi giving back Aayu to AarYa, but sadly that never happened. So this was my way to make my dreams come true.

And I won't stop writing. I've got many one or two part OS and couple of FFs, in my mind, which I'll start to write (one by one) when I become free after few days. So get ready to be bothered by more PMs for my work.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish 😛

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palbhar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Lovely ending to a beautiful story!!! Sigh...wish our PV had all these!!!!! I loved Aarya's Be Imtihaan dance but this ending is so much better!!!!! Great job Nikki... looking forward to YAMR!!!!

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

This sure has been a memorable journey. Loved the last part and the way the family stuck together, giving the necessary explanations throughout. The Scindias sure stuck together and were supportive or each other throughout. Loved the teasing that Yash and Aarti endured from the family along with all their family and personal moments. Fantastic job as always Nikki and thank u so much for writing this

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tanubag

@tanubag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

Loved the way u end this story. At last Scindia home has become a sweet home.

AARYA scenes were cute.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: palbhar
Lovely ending to a beautiful story!!! Sigh...wish our PV had all these!!!!! I loved Aarya's Be Imtihaan dance but this ending is so much better!!!!! Great job Nikki... looking forward to YAMR!!!!

Thanks Bharthi.

Even I loved the BeImtihaan dance of AarYa, but the end track had still left a bitter taste in our mouth. Had they shown BeImtihaan, after a scene like I showed, BeImtihaan, would've become so much more memorable.

YAMR, will come after couple do weeks, as I'll be very busy for the next few days.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: saf24
This sure has been a memorable journey. Loved the last part and the way the family stuck together, giving the necessary explanations throughout. The Scindias sure stuck together and were supportive or each other throughout. Loved the teasing that Yash and Aarti endured from the family along with all their family and personal moments. Fantastic job as always Nikki and thank u so much for writing this

Thanks Saf.

Can't believe that it took me almost eight months to write just 7-8 chapters of this OS. In between I had completely lost interest in it, but when I started getting interest back, I was not getting time to work on it.

Now I've finally finished it. I too enjoyed writing it (after getting my interest back), especially when I had to write on the scenes that I so wanted to see in original PV. Like the family standing united, a changed Bua, and Paridhi returning Aayu back to AarYa.