OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Your honest introduction took my seriousness away. The characters that spoke at length -- am sorry I saw U😆..U truly have a sense of humour which must be used to the fullest potential. Hoping to get an OS based on humour.

Coming to update - I enjoyed the entire chapter. The way Aman conveyed the message thru text was a good one.Yash allowing himself to explore the depth of love towards Arti was well expressed ... more the importance of her and Arpita's place in his life. Am not going into detail - overall good update.

Nikki - every writer is different - sense of detailing need not necessarily mean - you lack to explain it in one sentence - it simply means your story / character needs description. What is important is using your imagination and allowing it to dictate the mood/feelings and keeping the reader engaged . You are doing just that.

Waiting for the final part. Take care 🤗

Edited by chitsri65 - 11 years ago

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jitupatole5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

it was nice.i think their are kids who came to meet aarti.

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Folla

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

thanks for the PM dear amazing update finaly yash confesse his love waiting the next update and who come to meet aarti

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Hi Nikki read the update and love it, Yash's confession ⭐️ he went all out that was very much needed 👍🏼 Aarti's reaction 👍🏼 I love reading long updates they way you write is unique, sometimes the little extra detail makes the story more interesting.

This Os has many scenes which we all wish was there in the show you give us the pleasure of experiencing the last days of PV as we all hoped the Cv would have explored the story but they rushed it and left us the fans disappointed.

Thank you for sharing eagerly looking forward to the next update

Ps sorry for the short comment but these days brain and fingers refuse to cooperate 😃

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saf24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Such a beautiful update Nikki. Yash is beside himself with worry while Aarti is scared to face him. Through Aman's help though Yash finds out that she is awake and he sets about telling her everything that he has kept hidden in his heart for her. It was an absolutely beautiful confession. The family then comes in with all the outstanding issues being sorted out and SP changing his stance on his daughters in law, now making them his daughters. Can't wait to see what is in store next.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: roserosey
u were absolutely right di as i felt the same this update is very short one according to me...but its ok i will forgive u coz u gave the loveliest update...wt i m craving since yashs confession of I LOVE U AARTHI JI ...in our PV...omg di i love u so so much ...for such a wondeful update...❤️...
just amazing marvellous fabulous job di...yes yash was the hero of the update...though aarthi is no less than angel as she is the reason for which yash has to be a hero😉

aapke ideas mashallah...di who guessed that amn will smartly convey to yash that aarthi is quite awake and pretending😉👏...omg that was amazing idea no:1⭐️...and then wt followed next was something i love the most u know that di😳...emotional confession on yashs part to romantic passionate moment b/n aarya ...which was so speechless...⭐️

for yashs confession(emotional wala)...says that he is man of true wordsand true love ⭐️...5 STARS for this...

that was much needed conversation to sooth our burning hearts forwt ishitha did to aarya and family...i m really glad whole family was now together and their love was beyond everything...such a beautiful and lovely family😃...

i give a damn abt that naagun...i just dont care still she is alive or not ...but i have to admit that being paralysed losing mental stability was something she deserves much ...(a small bhangra )...and a big hug🤗...

ofcourse i knewaarthi is not a woman who wishes anything bad even for her enemy👏...but then shoba maa is right...😊

and now who came ...guess aayu and bacha party...🥳...

tightest hug from me di🤗🤗...

See I know you too well, that's why I wrote only your name 😳

Like I said I had to cut on few scenes, otherwise it would've been a long update. But while writing, I felt that some of those scenes were unnecessary. And some will be better if used in the next chapter.

This whole update was basically on Yash confessing his feelings, which was so needed in PV.

Rosey, in PV, Yash never told her "I Love You" on his own. He only said it once and that also, when Aarti had insisted 😕. I so wanted to see the intense scene where he said those three precious words on his own. Followed by an equally emotional, yet romantic, passionate scene of AarYa. That's why I wrote it here.

Regarding Aman, I wanted to show how he'll convey it to Yash that she's awake and is avoiding him. Initially i thought of using hand gesture, but I wasn't confident if I'll be able to write that. So when that text idea came to me, I was so happy that I immediately used it 😃

As for the NAGUN, I felt that this was the best punishment, rather than killing her. Anyways that punishment was already given to Python, so I didn't wanted to repeat it 😆

Rosey ma'am, Itni Sari Tariff Ke Liye Shukriya. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: jayshu17
Part-5
waiting for the next update

Thank you so much Jayu 😳

Chapter 6 is already up. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: caller123
Hey Nikki, Yes your stories are long and detail and that's what makes it special and we all love that specialty. Each writer has her/ his own way of writing. I love your writing and Shanthi's writings too. You both ave difference styles and I love those styles a lot.
About you and me I think we both discussed about it earlier.
I wanted to write long updates like you but couldn't and you the other way.. Can you remember how we discuss about the matter.😉😆
Again HIi 5 as we both updated on same day.😆😆😆

ok coming to the update - It's really wonderful as I earlier said this is what I wanted to see in PV and I think most of the viewers and if they have shown like this TRP would have raised and the show is still running,
I love the way Yash confess a lot. Truly I wanted Yash to convey his feelings like this to Aarthi but we were unlucky not to see that but we are lucky as you came up with this story.
I love the advice SP gave and how he wished he should have apologies to G3.
Really he should have done it in Real PV too..
OH that great Dubey also asked forgiveness. Great Nikki⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hey you sent Ishitha to Aakash's(Chandu's) mental hospital. Must say Chandu to take care of her Aakash as sometimes she also send him there🤣
Ishitha going to mental hospital part was🤣
At last she got the punishments for what she did.😡😡😡
Bua...😆 her dialogues about nagun😆

Nikki Thank you so much for updating this ..OH should I pray that next one should be the last one. I think no as I love this story.😳😳😳
Oh I have started to give you long comments now which is unnatural of me.😆😆
Thanks again and love you Nikki dear🤗

How can I forget our conversation Kate. I said if I write short updates I feel like I'm writing a promo 😆

It's just that writing long updates takes so much time and energy and need so much patience. That's why it takes me so many days to write one update. 😕

Honestly Kate, I also feel that had they shown exactly like this, our show would've lasted a little bit longer or at least would've got a proper and decent ending. But they had to show that NAGUN till the very last episode and left with a bad taste in our mouth 😡 😭

Even Bua was so happy about the mental Asylum 😆

Sorry I don't know anything about Chandu sending Aakash to mental Asylum, as I hardly visit CCC. But I'm sure whatever it is, you guys must be having a blast on that topic 😆

Thanks for a Long comment 😳