Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 26

thanx for pm

another great update di.

awesome update

It's fabulous. Nice that Yash punched Prashant and throw him out of the house. Yash come to live in outhouse. Naanimaasi was so relaxed as Yash came to live there, as she was so scared of Prashant and she wants to save Aarti from that monster. Yash found similarities in journal and Aarti's words, but he was not able to relate that maybe the journal was written by Aarti.

Aarti and Yash did dinner together, and they are becoming formal. Waiting for Payal to come, and the interaction between Payal and Aarti. Let's see what she want from the Mountain Fairy.

Oh no! Naanimaasi's house on bid, Aarti was really sad that Naanimaasi have to leave the house because of her. In the last Aarti is trying to call someone. What she is up to? Is she sacrificing her life for Naanimaasi by going to Prashant? She is calling Prashant. I hope she didn't make any wrong decision. Yash have to do something fast to save the house and to save Aarti from that monster.

Indu this was another fantastic update. Loved every bit of it especially the Yash and Aarti moments where he wasn't giving her a chance to think and so she had to make choices immediately. It was heartbreaking that she thinks of herself as bad luck on others though and I hope Yash makes her realise that this is not the case soon. Fab job as always.

Indu after a sad day reading your update gave me something still to go on with your story wonderful update

Can i have a copy of Arti's journal Indu? I love the bits and pieces you intersperse in the story. The bit here "friend is a feeling forever" - i adore that!! It is PERFECT - that is what a true friend is. And whether you friend is near or far, he/she is a feeling forever.

I love the rest of the update too - but Arti's written words captured my heart, just as they did Yash's. And one day, tubelight chamkegi - the reason she keeps reminding you of the journal-girl is because she is Yash, she is - the one and the same.

Oh goodness Indu *holding my ears* I'm extremely sorry for not commenting for the past two chapters. Uni has been too hectic with tests and assignments.. Anyways so let me start...

FINALLY Aarti has started feeling stirrings of emotions. Though she'll try to avoid it and shrug it off, Yash will be there to enforce her feelings and make her realise that it's LOVEEE. I felt the voltage when I read that part 😆, butt the thing that worries me is aarti's reaction when she finds out that Yash was actually lying to her that he was jobless and poor.

I screamed out a loud YES THAT'S THE WAY when Yash struck Prashant to the ground.. What a useless man to be harassing an old woman to get Aarti and by the end of your chapter 15, somehow I feel Aarti might call Prashant or vice versa and she might agree to marry that creep to save naanimaasi.

Brilliant work again and again Indu.. Here's my jhappi for your fantastic work... Absolutely loved it 🤗

Wow!!!!! that was a fabulous one indu di,that was vvery gud that yash gave that moron a bit of his own medicine, he needs a lot of lesson from yash, feel pity for Aarti she is still blaming herself again , hope yash helps her out :) continue soon dearie