The Positives and the negatives

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked the episode today. The enactment was done well. It wasn't OTT! Yash's dialogues at the end were bang on! The silent look between Yash-Aarti and SP was another highlight of the episode! I also loved the precap...everything said and done, Aarti and Yash, inspite of their very noble intentions, have been wrong in rushing with this PV! They should and could have waited a little. And SP's decision to go to an ashram will make them guilty, and it should! However, after this phase, SP will also realize that AArYa r right. So, a fair deal for everyone!

I just have one complaint...not regarding just this episode, but in general. The dialogues given to the characters in PV tend to become very melodramatic and boring at times! I was very impressed with the dialogues given to Yash in the wednesday episode, as well as in yesterday's episode, but I have no idea why Aarti's dialogues don't improve. I was very happy when Aarti spoke like normal people, to Bua when she made her apologize to Radha, but sadly after that once again her dialogues seem more like lectures! Yash's dialogues had also suffered from the same problem at times, but recently, they have been fantastic! I really wish we can see the change in those given to Aarti also! Let the dialogues sound like normal ones, instead of speeches...PLEASE!

And for Heaven's sake and TRP's sake , please change Yash and AArti's monotonous individual background music! They have the ability to KILL a perfectly brilliant scene!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hope your positives and negatives are taken in a good way and show importance in writing natural dialogues...if not - ARYA can manage the scene without dialogue- as they can talk thru their expression and presence.

Good one !😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab post Ria 👏👏👏

Agree about the negatives ... background music needs to change asap and those heavy dialogues for Aarti's character can b avoided ... she can say it in just one sentence than using so many potetic dialogues to say the same thing ..

I loved her dialogues to bua and also to Ishita in yesterday's episode .. practical and to the point dialogues without any lecture tone ... thats the Aarti which we need to see ... seedhi baat and no bakwaas 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Fab post Ria 👏👏👏

Agree about the negatives ... background music needs to change asap and those heavy dialogues for Aarti's character can b avoided ... she can say it in just one sentence than using so many potetic dialogues to say the same thing ..

I loved her dialogues to bua and also to Ishita in yesterday's episode .. practical and to the point dialogues without any lecture tone ... thats the Aarti which we need to see ... seedhi baat and no bakwaas 😃😃


Exactly Jyo!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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agree, but some occassion speech work better than dialog
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic post ria loved it, agree with the negative points mentioned by you the dialogue more simple makes more interesting.

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