Originally posted by: gmhatcher
Well written and very intriguing. There's a Raymond Chandler, "Film Noir" quality to the writing that makes me think Maltese Falcon and I LIKE it. Looking forward to reading more.
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Originally posted by: gmhatcher
Well written and very intriguing. There's a Raymond Chandler, "Film Noir" quality to the writing that makes me think Maltese Falcon and I LIKE it. Looking forward to reading more.
Thank you! Happy to hear that I've piqued your interest. With all the fascination I've managed to pull in for this story, I may regain that old habit of nailbiting.RES
Just read the prologueSounds very interestingI will write more after reading your 2 beautiful updatecoming back soon
Originally posted by: gmhatcher
This may actually be my favorite F.F. ever. If you do look into Chandler look up "Farewell My Lovely" and if you have time and just love to read Walter Mosely's "Devil in the Blue Dress" is a more modern version of noir
I only compare "Never Again" to these because it strikes me as being pared down, elemental and gritty... Not a writing style that I would have expected to find, but a gem I'm glad I stumbled across.Thank you.
Wow its nice part very interesting. Thanks for the pm Insha Allah we can meet in next chapter. Till then see you dear.
PROLOGUE...
sounds interesting..im feeling as if it is a sad story..but i was interesting..PART 1awesome..is aarthi dead.??..is yash planning to be dead kya??...it was really nice kadeen diPART 2i loved the father-son convo..it was really nice..i can understand yash's sadnessloved all the 2 part..waiting for more..
Originally posted by: gmhatcher
Kadeem (if I may call you by name),
I managed bookstores while I was in college so I love books and a well-turned phrase. To say what I read and have read is eclectic is an understatement. A single beautiful sentence can make a chapter, and a lovely paragraph can make a book.I started reading "Rescued" and enjoyed what I was reading, but somehow I find the fact that Yash is being introspective, on the roof of a building and apparently suffering some form of burn out much more satisfying than a depressed, deserted and suicidal Aarti.And as an artist I understand subject shaping style ( paper tells me what to do all the time).