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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..nice one...
good to see that u try to show the relation of all the couples...
honestly am no able to relate to the note of aarti...i mean i can understand her wish to talk to her creation but then if she will outrightly refuse of having a baby..isn't it signifies that she is losing hope of having her voice back?? and also she is well with palak and payal...so where is the problem...am sorry its just wat i felt and wanted to share with you!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ksfan2

it was nice..i completely understand aarthi's emotions...love it so much


Thank you so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

worried for paridhi-prateik, they need to sit and talk thro' this issue. probably that is some underlying psychological damage for arthi after the loss of her voice. hopefully yash will bring her out of this inhibition as well.


Paridhi Prateik...yes they are the youngest and need some kind of thinking and talking...agree...

Aarti well lets see what happens to her...

Thanks for your comments...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

Wow dear...Again u proved it yar👏👏

that You are such a fast updater👍🏼
The story is moving so interestingly in its silent way.😉
I wonder did Aarti will ever change her mind or Yash will accept her decision?😕
Will wait for ur update dear.😃
Thnx for the PM yar❤️
Take care always🤗


Thank you...for your quick response as well...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

And now that I'm finished reading this new update, I can say that I enjoyed it. I see and understand all of their perspectives, and at the moment it seems that some people are forgetting compromise is a two way street. This will be a bit troublesome. Since I already think Aarti is pregnant, she and Yash are about to have an even bigger issue...though I don't think an unwanted pregnancy is a bigger issue than marital rape. At the end of the day, Aarti loves children, and she will love her own child. It's her fear of being unable to give her own child everything that she thinks a child needs that has bound up her heart like this against the idea. It's after all every future mother's dream to be able to sing to her child, and tell the child stories, and whisper words of comfort when they are needed. With Yash's children, they are old enough to understand written words, and other forms of communication, but an infant can't do so. It's an unfortunate situation to be in. If being unable to tell stories to Palak and Payal had troubled her so much on that day, it will be interesting to see how she reacts to the upcoming news.


I really wanted you to come up with some feedback and I am glad Chapter 13 of mine got me that...😆

Did you read Chapter 14, 15 ,16 and 17?? Maybe it would have given you an insight into Yash and his not so bad intentions towards Aarti too...

As for Paridhi, she's a journalist. There are really no set working hours for that career. Even a news anchor who normally sits behind a desk can be called out at strange hours to report on breaking news or a major disaster. She and Prateik are going to need to think long and hard about a way to make the family see eye to eye with her on her chosen profession. Prateik has struck nerve with me though. How dare he consider the family's image only? He made a choice to make Paridhi a part of his family, at a time when he already knew what her work schedule was like. It is not as if this is some major surprise which popped out of nowhere. What he should be concerned about is his wife to be's safety and reputation. When they are married, he can either chauffeur her around, or get a driver/bodyguard for her. They will obviously need to think about family planning, etc. At the end of the day though, I hope Prateik realises that his wife should not become a housewife just because of his family's traditions.

Prateik - Paridhi will face some problems and Prateik as a character does have an issue here...lets see how I deal with that...later on...

I love the " How dare" part of yours!!!!!😆

For now, Ananya and Anand are the most level headed pair. They are emotionally prepared for embarking on the life journey together, and are also taking the time to get to know each other. They are slowly beginning to understand each other's professional limitations and are taking the time to communicate rather than talk at each other or simply be conventionally romantic. Whether or not they will have issues later on due to their temperaments etc., and her long work schedules will be seen.

These two are characters that I had to bring in to show mature relationships in my story---Aarti with her limitation --I can't get her to talk as most of their conversations are expected to be one-sided and/or silent!!!!😊


Thank you so much for your amazing feedback...Being my first FF...which I plan to end by this thread, feedback such as this is quite beneficial for me to know how to take the story into a logical conclusion. Thank you so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the understanding between all the couples in this update. I understand Aarti's POV when it comes to having children and i'm pretty sure even though Yash is stunned at this point he will understand her view as well. Fab job as usual.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update. Loved Anand-Anaya's maturity. Pradhi's discussion ends up in argument. I guessed totally opposite for why Aarti had tears in her eyes. Yash is stunned reading the note about she can't bear his child, as she said that she hate it if she could not talk to her creation. Maybe as time goes, she will be ready.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

hey..nice one...

good to see that u try to show the relation of all the couples...
honestly am no able to relate to the note of aarti...i mean i can understand her wish to talk to her creation but then if she will outrightly refuse of having a baby..isn't it signifies that she is losing hope of having her voice back?? and also she is well with palak and payal...so where is the problem...am sorry its just wat i felt and wanted to share with you!!!!!!!


Thank you dear...
Aarti will have some problems as she is upset about her inadequacies and limitations...with Palak and Payal it is different...they know about it...
Having a child is a dream for any woman and maybe she feels she is not complete because of her inability to speak...
She will overcome it ...with time...these fears are quite natural...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing and Superb ...very nice update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
I just hope Aarti changes her mind soon
please update soon

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