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kmfan_2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Wow!! Part 15 was so cute and lovely!! 😳👏👏

I loved their feelings they kept for each other which had actually make them became closer later on.. 😳 Lovey Dovey Poem!! 👏

So glad you liked it...Thanks dear...

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
i just read all the last three parts continuously...and its awesome...
the way he feels guilty...she feels scared...his apology..his hesitance...her understanding bout his guilt and state of mind at that night...her way of making him feel better via kids...her trust that he loves her...his applying balm on her arms...his tears for hurting her...her taking the initiative next time..his action of reading her expressions next time ...all was superb...
also i loved anand and anaya's part too!!!!!!!!
continue soon!!!!!

What amazing comments...I am so so happy!

Thanks a ton!

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: guruandkratz
Both update were amazing...do continue soon!

Thank you dear...

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: Kavi5873
your writing is really good. it brings us a picture of the scene in mind.
i love it. awesome ...

waiting for ur next update... hope it be a long one.

👍🏼

Thanks a lot for all your appreciation...Thank you!

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

atlast i got time to read ...yeah i read all ch 13,14,15,16 in one go...

ch.13:shocking update.i was shocked😲 reading that part and ya bit angry 😡on yash for doing this to aarti as i never thought yash yash could do something like that.poor aarti😭

shocking twist i must say.yeah like this unexpected twist in the story👏👏👏.

thanx for update and pm😊

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

ch14: my anger last only for sometine as i read next chaperimmediately after ch13.

superb update👏👏 loved very much.loved yash realising his mistake👍🏼 and feeling guilty and embrrased for being insensitive to aarti👍🏼.

and aarti is too good after all this horrible experience..she is still serving food and taking care of yash.she has very kind heart.

loved his message for telling sorry to aarti.i liked that as that message clearly said he is feeling guilty for his did .he was saying sorry through his heart.

thanx for update and pm😊

Edited by pvejani - 12 years ago

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

ch.15;fabulous update 👏👏...loved very much...loved every word of that card and yash taking care of aarti and applying balm on her scars.

i liked yash decides to stay away from aarti selected sofa as he don't want to scare aarti more because of his presence near her.

also liked sobha comforting aarti(their conversation).thanx for update and pm

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

ch16:

superb update 👍🏼👏.loved very much😎.loved yash for noting aarti's expression before procedding this time.loved aarti for understanding his needs too , forgiving yash for his 1st mistake ,and realising yash is a good man with kind heart.

loved aarti for guiding yash this time sensing yash will now not do anything by his own this time and making yash feel comfortable to touch her.

loved this time there feeling was beautiful.and both got close physically and emotionally too.

thanx for all quick updateand pm.continue soon.

all four parts are written beautifully👏⭐️⭐️.loved every part😎..loving this story very muchyou are very talented writter⭐️.

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: pvejani
ch16:
superb update 👍🏼👏.loved very much😎.loved yash for noting aarti's expression before procedding this time.loved aarti for understanding his needs too , forgiving yash for his 1st mistake ,and realising yash is a good man with kind heart.

loved aarti for guiding yash this time sensing yash will now not do anything by his own this time and making yash feel comfortable to touch her.

loved this time there feeling was beautiful.and both got close physically and emotionally too.

thanx for all quick updateand pm.continue soon.

all four parts are written beautifully👏⭐️⭐️.loved every part😎..loving this story very muchyou are very talented writter⭐️.