As Long As I Live Thread 2 - Page 90

Originally posted by: J12L85

Beautiful promo Saffi...wow jab tak hai jaan...sigh can it get any more romantic. So eager to read what you have planned:)

Thanks, I like the poem! 😊

Originally posted by: shalini28

wow saffi great part.😳

loved the promo also . wow jab tak hain jaan.😳

eagerly waiting for next part😳

Thanks!

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

OMG! All the chapters that I haven't commented on were fantastically written!!!! 👏 👏

I'm totally smitten by this FF!!!!

I'm loving the emotional roller-coaster ride and I loved the way you redeemed Yash, in my eyes at least! 👏

Eagerly awaiting the other leap! 😳

Thank you so much! 😳 I'm glad I was able to redeem Yash for you!

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Saffi - i stole time from work to finish reading the updates 😆. See what you made me do??

Perfect - this is going perfectly. Arti miscarrying was the perfect solution for her dilemma - and even better that it was caused by Yash, opening the way for his redemption. And Yash decided to play god those many years ago, did he? In your face dude!! That's what happens when you decide to write someone's destiny.

Don't make Arti go back to Prashant. She needs to gain confidence for herself, define her identity with herself, not by some man.

So looking forward to the leap. And thank god for Vidhi - at least Palak won't be completely motherless with her around.

Kat, yay you reviewed again!

I thought the same thing. I think this was the best way that Yash could have redeemed himself, if Aarti lost her baby and he truly felt guilty about it. Mahaanta will never work in this fanfiction. I hate when people try and make themselves Godlike in tv shows, I just keep wanting their plans to work against them.

I think you'll like the next part, not going to say if she goes back to Prashant or not. 😛

Yeah, Palak won't be motherless. 😳

Originally posted by: rachna1970

wow great update dear

Loved every part of it

Eagerly waiting for next update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Leevi05

nice

Thanks!

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Awesome promo

Thanks!

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Superb update...love the promo JTHJ...

Thank you!

Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow that was an amazing part just loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: taahir004

Saffi this is just amazing loved every bit of it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: taahir004

Yash treating Aarti like she's an object so painfully but Saffi I'm thinking

its because he hurts so much thats why he treats her like she is some stone

I really enjoyed reading this chapter 20

Thanks! Yeah he is hurt, but that doesn't give him the right to treat her that way. He's facing the consequences now, and he'll suffer for even longer. 😈 Thanks!

Originally posted by: RA17

Saffi wat was yash thinking in so called thinking for forst love is always ur true love notion he made himeslf sideline and sacrificed the soul mate connection

n then aart left yyy nooo safffi sorry for this dramatic effect never ever thot yash will do this stupidity and again aarti n her impulsive nature

He did really love Arpita, he worshipped her like she was God, so he felt like he couldn't do that to her. Arpita always came first for him, before Aarti, so he let Aarti go for Arpita's sake, and he was being very selfish when he made that decision.

Yeah, Aarti left and she won't be back anytime soon. 😛

Originally posted by: amandasookoo

Superb update. Feeling so sad for Yash's baby. Poor baby !

Yeah poor Palak! Thanks!

Originally posted by: RA17

oh saffi the promo is aweome love aarya jab tak hai jaan😳

Thank you!

Originally posted by: anithu

@Saffi:But she will come back??😳😳😳😉😉

It will take time. 😊