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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter Sixteen was amazing...catching up on all your chapters...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Mansi rightly said Jerk 😔
Now plx reveal wat Mansi knows n Yash doesn't wnt Arti to know about it .. Wats the secret about Yash that Mansi knows n he literally begged her to not tell it to Aarti ? šŸ˜•
Loved the way Aarti rejected his pleads n sorry 😈
Thanx Saffi =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! It's fantastic. You have so beautifully woven each and every feeling, emotions of the three of them; Aarti's pain and sadness and hate due to lost of her child, Yash's regret of not understanding her and doing wrong with her even she don't deserved to be punished for Arpita's death and unintentionally be the cause of her child's death, and Maansi's anger on Yash making her friend's condition like this.

I am so drowned in these emotions, that I am not able to get out of the effect it had on me. It's just so painful to read all that. So wonderfully written, the words, the emotions, all is just perfect.

And now Yash came to conclusion that he will free Aarti from this marriage. How could he think like that after all this happened with her. How could Aarti now go to Prashant, and what she will say to Prashant that they lost their child due to Yash. Yash have to win her heart and trust again, and it would happen only when she stays with him.

Desperately waiting for the 20th chapter.
Edited by Shashi1984 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update. I think I was crying the entire time reading it. I want to say deserves this for the way he treated Aarti but I can't. This promo is amazing. I can't wait for your next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter Seventeen - fantastic...is the word!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter Eighteen was so traumatic...

So sad for Aarti...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiul...saffi..loved the way u wrote...feeling sad for aarthi...waiting for ur next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 19 -

Will Aarti still want to go to Prashant even if Yash allowed her to?

Beautiful update but very sad and emotional...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow saffi what a speed updatešŸ‘
my heart is crying for Aarti😭
poor Yash doesn't know what to do...
he just want to let her go to PrashantšŸ˜•if she prefer.
OMG...can't wait more after saw the promodo update soon buddy..
Thnx for the PM yar.šŸ˜‰
Edited by disha_rajdev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
again you made me speechless ... I feel really bad for aarti .. yash is a pig a piggy pig pig .. I saw chap 20 promo arpita ? a ghost ???? she isn't dead ?

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