As Long As I Live Thread 2 - Page 61

wow exciting promo dear.

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Res...😉

Will un-res tomorrow!...Psst...TODAY!😉

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So I wanna cry because of many reasons...

1. I have 2 essays to write for you.

2. Yash is being mean to Aarti ( but the next chapter is over-powering that)

3. I wanna write the other chapter first but I go in order

4. You are too awesome for giving this suspense.

So point 1, I will kick Mansi in her fr**ing a*s if she tells Yash about the pregnancy as I kinda wanted to see Aarti seducing Yash. I know! I think I'm the only person who wanted that to happen but I might end up giving some of you a dose of that.😉

Point 2, What did Prashant tell Mansi?????? Did he tell her that Yash had told Aarti all that years ago because he asked him to? Because Arpita was feeling wronged as she really did convince her family?

SO here I come back with my predictions...WHY DID YASH TELL AARTI ALL OF THAT??

1. He loved Arpita and well Prashant ended up brainwashing him telling him that he had a chance to get back to her and well he would take care of Aarti.

2. He made love with Arpita that night right? Why? Why did Arpita finally agree to it that night? Is it because her family agreed because they knew of that night? Is it because Yash was feeling betrayed at the fact that Aarti still loved Aarti and he actually loved her? There has to be a reason for this.

3. Prashant convinced him that they would both get their lives back?

4. Are these stupid?

Now, next thing, point 3 the Scindiya family and their orthodox thinking? Can they stop! Ugghh!

Point 4, Buaji and RD?? Please no CON for them! Please!

Point 5, I loved Aarti's response to Yash! So that kick isn't coming up any time soon huh? But I loved the way she answered him!

Point 6, Gayatri, Bua , I have some advice for them. You have your lovers! Sleep with them and please DO NOT poke your nose in my Aarya's life! Please!!!

Point 7, Yash you sh**ing LOVE her and your marriage with Arpita was the compromise right? If you weren't acting like a male b**ch,...meaning...a...DOG...years ago due to reasons my dear Saffi might answer above, you may have had a better life right now! Blame yourslef, no one else! Or maybe it's Prashant's fault! Urrggghh!

Point 8, So Aarti said no to abortion, NICE!

Point 9, Loving SP in your FF man! Loving him!!!!

Yash...FINALLY GET A LIFE!!!

So I loved this chapter, this reply may be short but the next one ( for chapter 17 that's already up) WILL be longer!! I promise!!

BTW- I can't say continue soon as the next one is up so I will say Keep up the great work and I loved your comment in MHS also.

Roll up your gloves, you have another comment to write as well, the next chapter will be up soon-ish. I left some hints in this comment as to what will happen as I felt nice today,

Okay, well, I want to post chapter eighteen so I'm going to reply as fast as I can.

1) Thank you <3 You didn't have to do that!
2) No worries, well... you have to worry for now!
3) Lmao... take your time! =D
4) Thank you :D

Mansi said things that would only be in Aarti's favour. She's truly Aarti's friend, but she might know more than she's letting Aarti know at the moment. Whether she's hiding it from her for her own good or for some reason, we still have to find out! Aarti seducing Yash? Maybe some other time!

Point 2 - maybe, very likely, very very very likely!

1) He did love Arpita. Prashant brainwashing Yash? Errr... not quite.
2) That could have been a lie! He might not have made "love" to her, he could have simply been lying to Aarti.
3) Lmao, Prashant convincing him of that? Okay, it was Yash who did the convincing!
4) Nope, they're entertaining!

Point 3 - No they won't stop! Orthodox thinking makes it more fun! We can't always get a laidback family, come on, imagine their reaction after they find out about Aarti's pregnancy. How much fun will that be!

Point 4 - No con for Buaji/RD? Awww, I was planning that! Just kidding!

Point 5 - No kick yet. =(

Point 6 - But you just said no Buaji/RD con, so how can Buaji sleep with her lover?

Point 7 - No no no no nooo he loved Arpita! But his feelings for her were getting overpowered by Aarti.

Point 8 - She said not yet!

Point 9 - Thank you! *Bows*

Thanks for the sweet comment! The next chapter's written and the next promo has been made. I just need to upload the promo and post the chapter... Ooohhh exciting! I think I should make an uncensored version of the next chapter too though... =O

Yes, I'm going to unres on MHS soon!

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

OMG Saffi you nearly gave me a heart attack with the ending. When Mansi called Yash, I got this feeling that she will tell Yash about Aarti's secret, which I kinda want to happen as it'll help Aarti out of her predicament.

But when she said " Prashant told me everything" now I'm sacred, what if she tell some kind of a lie about Aarti, that it was Aarti who tricked Prashant 😕

Psst. Saffi when Vidhi says to Maya Bua that RD is looking for you, it reminded me of Bua's and RD's scene drom your OS, " Tonight I Went To Heaven" 😉 🤣

Nope, she didn't tell about Aarti's secret. =( She's a faithful friend to Aarti. She didn't lie to Yash, she was being honest with him, now the way she got this out of Prashant might be uh interesting though lol!

Lmao, it reminded me of that too!

Thank you <3

but saffi its better aarthi knows why yash ditched her and married arpita..

Originally posted by: pvejani

ch 16 wow...superb update⭐️.twist pe twist😎👍🏼,your are too good 👍🏼 in giving twists😆.(beautifully merging with the story and that too at right time)😛.

i m confused 😕 and curious to know abt mansi. whatever she will reveal will be in favour of aarti or not.is she aarti's true friend?

i liked atleast she saved(adviced not to do) aarti from abortion😃.

you are very talented writer saffi 👏.love this ff🤗. every time i read your update you amaze with your beautiful (update) writting skill.

loved the promo.can't wait . pls continue soon if possible.

thanks for this beautiful update and pm😃.thanx for wrtting this beautiful ff.i enjoy reading this ff.

Thank you so much! This is a very sweet comment! She's a true friend, what she says will only be in Aarti's favour. She "saved" Aarti for the time being... who knows what'll happen afterward? Well I do, but I can't tell. =(

Originally posted by: Gkathria

OMG!!! I was right! Yashji is totally in love with Aarti, and Arpita was just a compromise!!!!!!! 😲 and I knew Yashji won't think Aarti is Arpita during their CON!!!! okay I'm very excited Saffi!!! Update chapter 18 SOOON! or I might go insane! 😛

Nah, he loved Arpita too, but his feelings for Aarti started to empower his feelings for Arpita. He'll think it's Aarti, not Arpita... but that's if the con ends up finishing right? 😛 Chapter 18 will be up soon, it's already written!

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

*stunned silence*

So...right now, I'm sitting here staring at my screen, with my mouth open in shock, trying to process whatever I just read. So much happened - new pieces of knowledge were obtained, new empty spaces of unknown facts are being defined a little more clearly, walls appear to be breaking, and emotions are resurfacing...I'm in a daze, honestly. And that last line. I can't see beyond that line right now.

Fantastic stuff! Loved every word, even if those words have increased my curiosity even more about the things that haven't yet been revealed! 👏 Saffi, you need to hurry up and update the next chapter! 😆 All this suspense and the mystery surrounding the details of the Yash-Aarti-Prashant equation...I really hope you update soon!

Thank you Borna! I always love reading your comments, you make the story sound better than it really is in all of your responses. The next chapter is written and I'll be posting it soon, along with the new promo!

Originally posted by: villager00

OMG! my insides are churning 😲😲😲..

did not expected Mansi and Prashant's lives to be enterwined this way but that was really a very good shocker👏👏👏.. love , love, love that surprise..

Thanks a lot, Saffi..

Thanks Enid!

Originally posted by: zahra15

OMG you updated so fast :O

Eeehhh that was awesome.

So, basically Yash loved Aarti but broke her heart because of Prashanth xD

Which means he still loves her but maybe doesn't want to admit it and even Arpita was aware of it.

And I guess Maansi also knows this.

And the ending, OMG, all is happening the way Aarti wanted it, I mean what Maansi had suggested.

Eeehhh can't wait to read the next part.

Thanks for the PM .

I'll update the next chapter fast too, but I hate spoiling everyone with fast updates because then my other updates seem like they take forever.

He does really feel strongly about Aarti, he broke her heart for a reason, and Prashant is involved in that reason. Mansi has found out, yes!

Thank youu!

Love can make wonders...saffi..

I agree...Yash loved and always will have arpita in his heart...But his love for aarthi is so intense , deep which he always had and same for aarthi..

Aarthi will realize what yash did to her is ultimate sacrifice..Prashanth is a selfish guy..

Relationship always is a challenge..Selfless love , sacrifice , misunderstanding , pain and more

Originally posted by: ForeverAarYan

😲 Awesome update Saffi.

Things are about to get worse and I'm loving it😈. So many jhatkas...

You very cleverly omitted Yash-Mansi conversation.

Mansi is keeping some info from Aarti about Yash...😔

Very interesting FB of Yash and Arpita

Never thought Yash will confront Prashant this early. So P knows that because of Yash , he and Aarti got back together but Aarti is unware of it. I can't wait for the day when she will find out about it.😈

Wonder what will be Prashant's next move.🥱

I absolutely loved both of Yash and Aarti's self talk. ❤️

I cannot wait for the next update. Thank you for the pm.

Thank you!

Yes, things will get even worse... =/ Yes, it was very clever wasn't it? 😆

Exactly, P knows that Y is the reason he got back together with Aarti, and Aarti is still unaware of all of this. I wonder what her reaction will be when she finds out.

Prashant chapter isn't closed... yet. 😛