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Posted: 12 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: freya123
grt part

Thx freya😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Superb Update! 👏👏

I loved the way Yash tried to spend some times with the kids although he is still in dilemma.. 😊 But somehow I did felt that he felt alone..

Ow my.. he saw Aarti kya? 😲 Firstly, I really liked the man but slowly my mood changed! 🥱 He was all after the money.. 🥱 And before I could read his name.. I already know he was Aakash! 😆🥱

Nice one! So, Aakash is in now! Please bring Aarti back! I'm missing her a lot! 😭😭

Thank you Isya.

You are a very sweet reader. You manage to cheer me as a writer always.

Yes children can fill the loneliness that Yash feels but only to an extent. His life is complete only with Aarti.

Sky is opportunistic. But why he wanted the job is still a mystery. And his friends laughed off the fact that he got a job. Now why would they do that for? GOK at present I am still thinking on how to take Sky character forward.

Yes as Sky has made his way into SM, Aarti or a girl who looks like her is soon to come too. Especially with the marriage deadline fast approaching.

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kdsubs
😆 - oh Deepti. You had me grinning with Akash's entry. So true to form - 😆. Waise i just wish you had given some more details on how Yash won his kids' love and trust over again. Kids are very forgiving - way more than we adults, and often, more forgiving than we deserve. But he hurt them so much and at the time they needed him the most that the sadist in me wanted to see him talve chato-ing.

Have fun with your little one. My second one has already planned that every 2nd day of her summer vacation is going to be girls'-day-out with mom. Lord knows where i am going to find the time to do that...

In PV I always wondered how Sky managed to be a kidnapper and a driver at the same time. I seemed kinda weird for me.

So i tried to make him a driver using a more palatable logic (atleast for me I guess)

Hmmm,...you are right I should have given some more time in between to show how he won the kids over. But then how many Aarti less chapters can the readers stand???😆

Oh I am going to have lot of fun with my lil one. Going off on a looong holiday shortly.

You too enjoy with your children. This time I precious for any mother I think.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: Leevi05
awesome update

Thx leevi😃

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Superb chapter, thoroughly enjoyed =)
Thanx !

Thx Naureen.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: prettyji
awesome update

Thx Pretty and thx for continuing to comment😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: KrantiGuru_JKR
again i missed many updates that's y i hate to be away from IF

went through last some updates just now

poor yashu in grief but loved finally he start taking care of children
oh ansh leaving house was heart wrenching but finally yash found him

aakash entered SM as driver now oh so that's how aarti again got connected to this house
poor aarti away from her family and that too between terrorists

but i still wonder y aart hugged aakash who is terrorist i know she would be unaware of this but did aakash made her to believe that he is her husband or BF something like that 😕

-miti

Cool new id miti. But I will still address you as miti. Hope its OK.

Believe me I know staying away from IF is proving to be tough for me too. See i have got this huge backlog of comments to respond to.

But all are so sweet that everyone are still commenting even though I am being THIS late.

So thx miti and thx everyone else too.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: lulujjj
Two months grace period hash has to get remarry the girl of his parents choice very interesting twist Omg loving it thanks for the update.

Phew chapter 37 over and done with.

Thx for liking chapter 38 Naeema.😃