My first OS/SS' I love you Aarti' update page 25

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: InduG64
@Nikki: Well done! Superb writing. I loved it...loved the entire set-up wherein the family got together to make this night of togetherness so special. 👏

Thanks Indu. It means so much to me to hear your comment.

We all know how excellent you are in writing and analyzing something. 👏

Frankly speaking I was not satisfied by the last update. It didn't came out as I wanted it to be. But still feel good that at least I tried to write something. 😊

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ALEHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

WOW that was awesome loved every bit of it and also liked how te family helped them out do plz write more OS u are fab at it.😊😊😊

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011
WOW that was awesome loved every bit of it and also liked how te family helped them out do plz write more OS u are fab at it.😊😊😊

Thanks for such a wonderful response. ❤️ When I think that now no one is left to comment, suddenly one more comment comes. . I am loving it.

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smileymj10

@smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Oops, soorry dear if I came late, just want to give my full attention while reading this wonderful SS..
Wow, what a nice move by Aarti, giving Yash a suprise with the help of the family.
I love the way you write about how they became one, their togetherness..

And no, it's not boring, it's actually amazing, i loved every piece of it!
You should write more dear... 😳

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Mula
Awesome dear,enjoyed reading. :)

Thanks dear.😊

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Oops, soorry dear if I came late, just want to give my full attention while reading this wonderful SS..
Wow, what a nice move by Aarti, giving Yash a suprise with the help of the family.
I love the way you write about how they became one, their togetherness..

And no, it's not boring, it's actually amazing, i loved every piece of it!
You should write more dear... 😳

Wow when I think that now no one will comment, suddenly such wonderful comment comes. 🤗 ❤️

Thanks so much for appreciating my first work on writing a short story. At first I was a bit scared but the way you all encouraged me, makes me to want to write more. Which I'll definitely try. 🤗

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villager00

@villager00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

finally got to reading it😳

gawd! that was something else👏👏👏..

Nikki, you ended it really well..

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

I'm so sorry! *Holds ears*

Nikki this was AMAZING. I love this story, it's super adorable! I absolutely loved the aisa waisa, it was mindblowing. I'm in AarYa heaven after reading the last part. Great work!

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: villager00
finally got to reading it😳

gawd! that was something else👏👏👏..
Nikki, you ended it really well..

Thanks Enid for appreciating my first attempt to write something and also for this lovely bouquet 🤗

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
I'm so sorry! *Holds ears*

Nikki this was AMAZING. I love this story, it's super adorable! I absolutely loved the aisa waisa, it was mindblowing. I'm in AarYa heaven after reading the last part. Great work!

That's ok Saffi, I understand. 🤗 Please don't appologise dear or else 😡

So happy that you liked it. . It really means a lot, the way you guys have appreciated it. 🤗 ❤️