As Long As I Live Thread 1 - Page 65

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Chap Saffi 😉
They share dere secrets 😳
Loved The Kiss ☺️
Awesome Loved It 😉
Cont. Soon

Thanks! 😃

I'll update soon. 😳

Originally posted by: Mula

Superb Saffi!!👏 Keep it up!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ns1970

WOW Saffi i think this was worth the wait👏 marvelous job. Very interesting were things can lead these two.update soon

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wonderful and Superb Update! 👏👏

Felt good during AarYa's interaction but later on... ☺️ I was blushing! It was a surprise! They are attracted to each other! 😉

Update soon.. 😃

Thank you!

Yeah they are attracted to each other! 😛 I'll update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: sanj1905

😉AWESOME UPDATE DEAR...😳😳😳

Thanks

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

OMG!! Yash likes her I figured tht out since the beginning but I was confused cuz he always kept defending Arpita but hehe I was correct can't wait 4 ur outher update really liked this one 😊

He's attracted to her! 😛 Not in love with her or anything. 😆

He still has feelings for Arpita though. Let's see what happens next.

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: MissPurpleFreak

That was a long update Saffi and I LOVED it <3 I liked how they played 21 questions so they were able to find out more about each other. Waiting for more...

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Originally posted by: RA17

Saffi.. thanks for pm and long update.. yes now after reading it it was worth waiting… the gap in 2 updates was like a silence AARYA had in theyour FF getting away from their past their ex yet feelings exist deep down n then sudden meeting bringing a lost spark they share into fire…

one thing I really like to say I love about your writinhg is detail that yash and aarti not the show one but I wud saffi one I can imagine and feel each emotion from their hurt emotions of past to new feeling they are coming up for each other than the college innocence n feeling to go ahaead and miss right and wrong for that particlaur moment just to feel blessed in embrace of eac other.. aww how this new journey begin …. With lil hestation , awkwardness, yet honestly with lil unsaid and unhidden emotion then united for raw passion they feel for each other… great update dear… but now this makes me greedy to read your next…PS sorry kuch jyada hi lamba comment ho gaya😉

Thank you so much! I'm glad you were able to understand the depth of their feelings for their ex's.

Thank you so, so much! I'm so relieved that you like this Yash and Aarti, even though some of their characteristics may not match the ones shown in the show. I really like how you described their feelings for each other. It's spot on! I don't mind long comments. I'll post the next update soon, thanks for motivating me!

Originally posted by: Ssmmnnaa6

Ohhh my God i cant explain how much i love it dear! Thanx 4 it n it was marvellous... N hoop u will update next part soon:)
anxiously waiting 4 that...

Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this chapter.

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Superb Chapter Saffi 😃
Beautifully written 👏
The last part was a surprise 😳 n pleasant one 😉 😳
Want more 😳
Waiting 😃
Worth waiting it was 😉
Thanx for updating n PM 😃

Thank you so much! I'm glad that the last part was a pleasant surprise! That was my plan! I wanted to give all of you a special surprise! 😳