As Long As I Live Thread 1 - Page 64

Originally posted by: Saralicious

Awesum update n superb saffi!!!!!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: zahra15

I really liked the 21 questions part.

This actually helped them in a way to know more about each other.

P.S the calculus part was very nice. I remember going through the same situation like 3-4 years back except I was in Yash's place and my best *boy* friend was in Aarti's place. Role reversal 😆

Thanks for the PM.

Thank you Zahra! I'm glad you liked it. That's cute. I hope it ended up well. 😳

Originally posted by: tharuma

Fantastic update.. Love it a lot!❤️

Thanks!

Originally posted by: miti16295

excellent part saffi👏

it was worth waiting

continue soon dear

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: shalini28

wow lovely update dear.

u r just mindblowing.

loved the game between them😳

thanks for the pm😳

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

waiting dear i love your ff please update soon saffi!!!!

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Let me tell you something...

The last chapter was so well written and I had shared that with you...

Coming to this one - what a well written piece...of work...

The characters in your story are so realistic that I can well imagine something like this could have probably happened somewhere..

Whats the other thing I like is the build up into a chapter that you create and then slowly move on into the story telling...

The romance too is not only about the physical aspects but a fine blend of comfort wrapped with a lot of secure feeling in the closeness of the characters!

All in all - a super duper work...I am in love with this story and your story telling!

Sorry for this long comment - but had to make you feel great as you deserve it!

My Sunday is made!

Loads of love...

All I have to say is ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️!

Thank you so much! You don't know what comments like yours mean to me! I'm on cloud nine. Wow, thank you so much!

I actually got really scared reading it at the beginning, when you said "Let me tell you something"... I was like oh no, I probably disappointed you. Then I continued to read and I was pleasantly surprised! Thank you so much! It's reviews like your which give me the most motivation to keep writing.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! 😳

Originally posted by: Gkathria

Wow saffi that was beautiful! and yes truly worth the wait, but don't make us wait too long!!! last part was just hot, hot, hot and too hot!
I'm looking forward to seeing how Yash and Aarti deal with their new found attraction and love towards each other with their past baggage's (Arpita and Prashant)

Thank you so much! I probably won't be able to provide updates sooner than once a week... but I'll try and update as soon as I can!

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Saffi oh saffi.. You made me smile like a psycho today...
You know when you said the word derivative, the only thing I could think about was the financial instrument..LOL. I was like huh how is that maths..ROFL.
I could feel aarti's and yash's pain in that 21 questions game. but holy moly, they kissed and that too passionately.. haila.. absolutely fantastic.
I had the stupid smile on my face the moment yash said that he started to like someone else. I was like yash beta tu toh gaya. lol.
beautiful woman and do update soon.

Thank you! 😳

I didn't know there was a financial instrument called derivative? I guess there are two meanings, probably even more!

I knew you'd be happy! I KNEW IT! 😆 You were on my mind while I wrote that... I knew I had to spice things up a little exclusively for you!

Lol, let's see what'll come next. As for now they're more physically attracted to each other than anything else. 😆

Originally posted by: Yaarti

great chapter saffi .. it was deffo worth da wait !!! I loved the 21 questions aww that was sweet .. and the last bit deffo suited the scene .. great update .. cont soon !! waiting already !

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! 😳