As Long As I Live Thread 1

sita_rama

@sita_rama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Awesome update .
I really loved ur way of writing.
It s so nice.
It s going very well.
I am early waiting for the next update.
These time they are going to meeting after 3 month I am early waiting to know what s going to happen.
Thank u so much for the pm.

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villager00

@villager00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Oh Aarti, no, don't call him anymore. 😭😭😭 ..

Better the "i told you so" lectures than hope for Prashant again..

Thanks Saffi for the update..😃

guess Yash and Aarti are still behind with their pyaar 😳

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Short but it was a wonderful update. 👍🏼

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Leevi05

@Leevi05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

beautiful update safi plz update next part😉

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Saffi - first clear my confusion about Yash-Arpita status. Arpi has/had a boyfriend, her parents want her to be with him, but now she wants to be with Yash - did i get that right?

Poor poor Arti - what a setback to her already low self-esteem. But must say you are portraying her reactions very well. I wish she would let go of Prashant and move on - but its so difficult for her. He was her world, her family, her everything. And her wanting to call him again, texting him - all very natural reactions. Kudos to you for portraying this difficult phase so well.

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amandasookoo

@amandasookoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Great writing Saffi. Anxiously awaiting for the next part.

Edited by amandasookoo - 12 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: kdsubs1
Saffi - first clear my confusion about Yash-Arpita status. Arpi has/had a boyfriend, her parents want her to be with him, but now she wants to be with Yash - did i get that right?

Poor poor Arti - what a setback to her already low self-esteem. But must say you are portraying her reactions very well. I wish she would let go of Prashant and move on - but its so difficult for her. He was her world, her family, her everything. And her wanting to call him again, texting him - all very natural reactions. Kudos to you for portraying this difficult phase so well.

You've got it right Kat, Arpita has a boyfriend that she told her parent's about. But later on, her boyfriend and her start to fall apart. It's a tough job to convince her parent's that she doesn't love him, she loves Yash since they're really attached to her boyfriend!

Thank you so much! Aarti has very low self-esteem right now because she's grown up without a family. She's really clingy about Prashant, as I'm sure you can tell, so she is more than willing to take him back.

Edited by ilovepyaar - 12 years ago

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