Part2 - Father and Son Talk - OS (my version) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start please contained 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start to the OS do plz continue soon atlast aarti paid her over due tax.😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yep .. she payed tax! aha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you everyone ... can't quote on my phone so this Is for all of you!! ... thanks guys ... might continue ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so lovey OS liked the tax scene.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great work.. Got confused when i was reading to her... But awesome

Xiao Hei
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really cute one really felt good on tax submission 😉😆😆😆
Plz do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry.. about not updating but I have been trying to get on a laptop/computer to write part 2 but dad keeps taking the laptop so I am unable to update sorry! on my phone atm .. hoping to update soon sorry !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 updated - Father and son talk









Yash - Blue
Ansh - Green
Aarti - Pink




Yash and Aarti in an eyelock. Yash was holding Aarti's hand, Aarti smiling, there was suddenly a loud noice coming through the door, as they looked behind they saw it was their Ansh.

''Papa tum teek ho na?'' (dad are you alright)
''yes beta i am fine now, because your super hero will not let anything happen to my kids!''
Aarti walks away from the bed and pushes Ansh from his back to talk to his papa, she gently stroked Ansh's hair.

'' I am going outside.. ok Ansh?''
'' Yes mumma, i want to talk to papa''
'' ok i am outside ok with PayPal, do you want me to call them?''
''No mumma, i said i want to speak to papa''
''ok''

Aarti goes outside the room, giving Papa and son time to talk :) (this father/son thing suggested by someone thanks for the suggestion) !





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Ansh sat on the gurney/bed ( is that what its called ? ahaha ). Yash gets up slowly from the bed and hugs Ansh stroking his hair, Yash closes his eyes and thanks God nothing happened to his Ansh.

''Love you Ansh''
''Love you Papa''

Seeing Ansh, Yash felt like breaking down, Yash had a tear at the corner of his eye, these days he was becoming more softer and softer.

''Papa don't cry i am fine.. that dost Uncle, he isn't my 'dost uncle' no more, he hurt my mumma, you were there to save Mumma, with the dishoom dishoom henai papa?''

Ansh wiped his Papa's tears.

''Papa''
''Yes beta?''
'' You know my dost uncle, well i don't know what to call him now because he isn't my dost but he said that mumma loved him lots, i said she loves yash papa, did he love mumma? ''
'' Ansh mumma loves me, Prashant does not love your mumma the way i do! i love your mumma more than him.. '' ( go Yash !)
'' Is prashant uncle my papa? I am confused''
'' Ansh i told you before, who is your superman?''
'' you''
'' Then that's you answer'
'' Papa, mumma loves everyone, me, Palak, Payal and you ''
'' same beta '' (with a smile on his face :))


''Ansh i need to tell you something''
''yes papa''
'' You and me because we are men, we need to take care of Mumma''
''why mumma isn't ill''
'' because Ansh,( Yash took a deep breath and said it )mumma is having a baby, you are going to be big brother !!!!''
'' Really and PayPal older bens ? ''
'' Yes, we will help Mumma yes? ''
''Yes Papa, i will do what you say''
''Keep this from Mumma ok ?''
'' Yes Papa''
'' I love you Papa

Yash gave Ansh a long squeesy hug and kissed him on the head lightly


Precap - Part 3 - SP and Yash talk ( again Father Son talk)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Great OS dear, love it

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