Sneaking into the... Bathroom? (Mature OS)

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Oh my my Saffi...😳😳😳👏👏😳😳😳

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

HOT!!

but palak- i can relate 😆

true story->i was actually that age when i asked the same to a family friend's wife in the middle of a get together. everyone looked...EVERYONE. i don't remember but she must have been so embarassed 😳i was told it was a cricket bite by another aunty 😃. where i live, the crickets come out in droves in springtime, so for the longest time i would wrap my palms around my neck as soon as i'd see one 😆

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anusha arja

@anushaarja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

itz hot...😳 well i din't expect it from you... 😲 😆

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MelodiousDreams

@MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Saffi!

*stunned silence*

That was...a very enjoyable read!

I always love reading your stories because they are so beautifully written, and this oneshot is no exception! It was sweetly seductive, which is a little phrase that always comes to my mind when I see Yash and Aarti. It was also more than sufficiently intense thanks to your way with words and because this doesn't seem like an improbable scenario (at least, as one of those "behind closed doors" scenarios) from what we've seen of Yash and Aarti's personalities in the actual show - both Gurmeet and Kratika are fantastic at conveying a mischievous, softly seductive glint in their eyes, and while I was reading this oneshot it was all too easy to remember how those expressions took my breath away the first time I saw them do that!

Beautiful piece, Saffi! Loved every bit of it! As always, can't wait to read your next fiction pieces!

Edited by MelodiousDreams - 12 years ago