Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

Waitin for another super update pls gv lots of area moments

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

Sabarina... 'You're impossible' 😆 when can we expect your update😊

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Part 18

Ooh.. This part is too cute, Sabrina !! ❤️ I was feeling so sad when Aarti was crying for Vidhi babhi since she had told her what she supposed not to.. I know it hurts but I felt too good when Yash was all the while there looking after his princess.. 😳

And finally, he tried to calm her by telling her what had happened before they married.. Sort of synopsis from Vidhi's life and how he moved on with life actually !! 😊 Hmm.. Why is the need of Aarti thinking of Arpita ?? 😆 And LOL.. Yash all the way using crazy words which really made Aarti mad on him.. 😆 😛 So cute nok-jhoks !!

Issh.. Just about to begin the romance and kiss.. The two barged in !! 😡 🥱 😆 Even Yash was hoping that those two disappeared from their room ASAP.. 😆 LOL.. Aarti was laughing on Buaji's remark and the way they react knowing Yash came back early !! 😆 😛

Just when they left, our Payal came in !! 😛 And ussshh.. Teddy bear !! 😛 Hmm.. Yash asking her to take off the teddy bear with her as he wanted Aarti to hug him as her teddy bear !! How cute !!

Part 19

Yummy Hot Update, Sabrina !! ☺️ 🤢 Oh wow.. You always wrote your story beautifully I must say !! 👏👏👏

Hmm.. I'm glad Aarti and Vidhi had some time in the kitchen !! Yes, they are so adorable as sisters !! 😃

😆... LOL ! Pratik pulling Yash's legs at the dining table.. 😆 This guy is so naughty !! Pity Yash and Aarti.. They were so embarrassed.. 😆 😳 Love the family moments !! 😃

Damn ! The next thing was so very hot !! 🤢 Not writing much as you know what had happened to me.. 😆 😛 But I really love the way Yash placed his fingers on Aarti's lip to tease her, shushed or kiss her !! 😳 She and the lamps and Pratik story which came between them at the night.. 😆 Hot hot scenes !! ☺️ 😳

LOL Morning was not less than the night.. 😆 Yash was so in mood to be with his Aarti... 😳 Again, they kissed and nearly loss control !! 😲 😆 Hmm.. Finally, she remembered to ask him about Pratik.. 😆 😛 Thanks to God that finally she stop asking him after he tried to get over with Pratik's topic.. 😆 😛 LOL.. Again, he spoke about the lamp !! 😆

Isshh... Wow updates !! 👏👏👏 Superb Job dear !! 👍🏼

Isya first of all thank ypu so much for reading this story and commenting on the updates! I just feel so encouraged by your response as you would always leave a comment for each update and let me know what you liked about each chapter!

Haha...I am glad you enjoyed the romance cause I think you write hot romance very well!

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: anonee
Akui - thanks for the beautiful story and the humorous writing style!!

Now before you bring it to an end - I want to know what was Arpita thinking when she got Yash to teach her play golf.

Did she want Yash to get into close physical proximity with her (although she was married) - I mean was she just unsettling Yash or is she at some level still in love with him?

Does she feel Yash rejected her and does she want to prove that she still has a hold on him?

First of all thanks so much for your comments! I feel that your comments always provide me with insights on what you think of this story and it has always been thought provoking for me...I always have to take a step back and reassess the story and discover something about this story which I did not realise initially...

Anyway, to be honest, I have not presented Aprita very well in this story nor did I explain the golf bit satisfactorily since actually my intention of including that particular flashback was just to draw a constrast that the attraction that Yash felt for Aprita was different from what he felt about Aarti...But I could see how one could inteprete there were tinges of something romantic in what Aprita felt for Yash cause of Aprita's actions in some of the scenes that they shared (like the dancing bit and that golf incident etc)...

My thoughts on your queries are below...But you are always free to disagree cause I feel that everyone is entitled to their opinion and as I have mentioned above, I could understand where you get those thoughts from!

1. When someone teach you how to play golf, the person have to stand close to you actually to teach you how to swing the club...At least that was what I mean what I mentioned the proximity bit in the update...Cause learning how to play golf depends on how you swing the club and your control and the person would typically be standing behind you to correct your motion and arms movement...But I do realise now that I was not clear thinking everyone knew what I was talking about based on my experience!

2. Actually Aprita was not married then...What I meant when I wrote she wanted to impress Aman, my thoughts was during their dating days and you know how both parties would always want to impress each other and try to find out about each others' likes and you know sometimes pick up a few things that the other party like and try to like them or at least get involved in them...Like I have friends who would started going to the gym cause their boy friend is a fitness freak or some guys who start going to karaoke cause their girlfriends love singing...Back to the story, since Aprita was the competitive sort, she would not just want to be participate in whatever activities Aman like but wants to also be good at it...But this was obviously not clear cause I wrote that Yash realised that he was in love with her then and he thought he was in love with Aprita when she was engaged to Aaman...

3.By the way, I potrayed Yash and Aprita friendship how I felt best friends behave with one another based on what I have seen amongst my friends and colleagues...I could have intepreted that wrongly or put my ideas across inadequately so I apologise for the confusion! Anyway, I wanted to share something which my best friend's sister said which is relevant to your qn... I have two best friends in secondary school (one guy and one girl) and the three of us were very very close...And my best friend's (the gal) sister said that it is just not possible for a guy and a gal to be best friends cause you always end up romanticing the friendship somehow and we always told her that she was wrong...And when the years past, we all realised that at one point in our lives funnily we were attracted to one other (like I was attracted to the guy in secondary school days but he was attracted to the other gal best friend then and the gal best friend was attarcted to him in college days and he was attracted to me after college...) We did go through that phase but I guess none of us were attracted to each other at the same time and finally you just outgrew the attraction since it was probably not real love and finally after some time you can talk abt it without all the akwardness...

I do not know if I ans this to your satisfaction but I want to say thank you so much for this question cause you would only have asked this if you were invested in this story and you made me think and realise what is lacking in my writing which is the only way I could get better!

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@ tharuma - Thank you for reading and commenting!

@sara1990 - thanks for your appreciation!

@tleshni- hey thank you so much for always also providing me with thought provoking comments that makes me rethink and explore my story and writing skills! I did reply to anone's queries. Please let me know if you have further queries or comments so that I can try to address them or even just be mindful of them in my furture writings! 😊

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#896

@ chichi220 & chitsri65 - Thank you for the interest and patience...I may try to update by next week ok! I am bad at juggling if it is not apparent!

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#897

hey sabrina now I understand your version of Yash Aarpita better..😉.. but another question.. So was Yash actually in love with Aarpita all this while or he just got confused of being lonely without a best friend and mistermed as love..

about his feelings for Aarti..im assuming he already fell for her on the night of their wedding when he realised how beautiful her eyes were?..Or was his feelings a gradual process? or was he more physically attracted..? sorry for all these questions..just curious😆

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divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#898

awesome update finally they take next step

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#899

sabu darling i guess you missed my comment on pg 130 n update soon will wait wht next is there for impossible aarya

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chichi220

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Posted: 12 years ago

#900

Pls sincere request I know u r endin this story but I love. Your. Work n style of writing hence req jest u to w rite a ff again for a yash n arti n also for Assad zoya of quboolhai as I think u wd be able to gv them justi

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