Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142 - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
this is my fav FF. please continue. love the story!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akui1984

Thank you so much for taking time to read this story and to comment! haha..you are right abt Yash gonna make sure the kiss happen soon!

I love Payal too since she is so adorable and am glad that you loved the scene with her!


My pleasure Dear! 😊

haha I know that he won't be able to resist his Aarthiji for much longer so she better be prepared but i got a feeling that he will catch her off guard 😳 😉

so true Payal is so adorable ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update! they are both truly impossible! please update soon! I love reading this SS
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Really nice update. Though how hard Yash tried to clear misunderstandings between them he ends up creating one again. Payal is playing cupid.Wow so nice.So Yash has started to have feelings about Aarthi. Very exited about coming chapters.


Hey thanks so much for reading and commenting... haha, Payal is cute n I like her..the next chapter will be up soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

aww these two really need to talk
and does yash really think aarti would let him kiss her when he has declared his love for arpita? honestly, he's such a thickhead


Hey thanks for reading...I think wel...yash cant help his desire rite...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Sabarina...an excellent update. Arti being the birthday planner (😃...Yash self thought) to Payal's idea of kiss-return and the teddy bear hug convo...was entertaining. Yash-Arti's exchange of words and self thoughts were funny.

Hope to see Yash and Arti at Arpita's place for dinner and a dog around😆 ...for Arti's reaction. Can't wait for your next...your natural way of story telling has the reader's smile fixed on face thru out...laage raho!



Thank you so much for your kind words! Your comments brought a smile to my face...Honestly, I know that this story is not even passable in terms of writing and storyline but I just feel that this Yash and Aarti are entertaining and when I think about them in my head, I usually have a smile on my face!
OMG! You have jus suggested a great ideas...I never thought of Yash and Aarti's with Aaman and Aprita and a dog..I can alrdy imagine Aarti making a fool of herself and Yash being irritated and Aaman's snide remarks!😆 Hmmm...I just do not know how to incorporate this into the story though...since I have the next few chapters sketched up..Let me see what I can do. Thank you so much for this brillant and sure funny suggestion! And seriously, you should start writing cause you can come up with better ideas than me!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roserosey

wonderful update sabrina

really they both need to talk😉
oh they lost the game to arpitha-aman 😭but yash was not upset at that really😲
to certain extent he is impressed i think 😕😕😕

why he is always annoyed with the questions of aarthi😕

so sweet of aarthi she planned birthday surprise for vidhi😃 and taking care of payal too

teddybear wala scene and conversation is hilarious😆😆😆

abhi toh shaadi hui hai ek kiss bhi nahi kiya aur yash bachon ki bare mein soch raha hai😆😆
how he can think that aarti will allow him to kiss her when he claimed that he loves arpitha?????

sabrina aur sabra nahi kar sakthi hun(i cant wait anymore)want to see some spice in their relationship
continue soon
thanks for the pm

great job dear👍🏼

Haha..thank you so much for your comments!
1. Ya, they lost...actually I had to make them lose so that they can talk abt it in the subsequent chapters...it will come up when they are ready to talk!
2. Haha...Yash is annoyed cause Aarti is always assuming things! They have diff expectations of each other you know and they do not voice it out...Which is why they seemed to always end up irritating each other!
3. haha..thank you for enjoying the coversation and teddy bear scene! I love Payal...
4. Hmm..you will see what happens when Yash tries to kiss Aarti...😆😳
I hope to post the next update by tonight or tmr!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaa0_O

loved de way aarti said am i invisible nw..lolz...lovd payal..urgh..!! watz wid aman ...arpita tooo...i kno one can undrstand wen de udr is in love nd all...wat iz she blind..?? awesum update dear...w8tn for romance b/w de two...update soon..

hey thanks so much for your comments! Glad you enjoyed the teddy bear scene...haha..Aman..i dunno man..he is just like that! And the romance bit will start from the next chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sb1410

Love the conversation between aarya, their interaction with the family. Aarya growing attraction for each other, yash impress with aarti handling of payal his acceptance that she will be a good mother to their children. Enjoyed this update For the next

Thank you for your comments! Yup, Aarti is slowly but surely making her impression on Yash! And he is alrdy thinking abt children...😆
The next update will be soon! Tonight or Tmr...

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