CONSEQUENCES (a fiction)-updt Chapter 16 (pg 51)

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Sheema Rajoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Your reactions are cracking me up Sheema😆

What to do Kadeen!!! I have an imaginative mind that when I read something, I immediately picturise it. So whenever I read my mind will form images or more like a film (if you can call it that) according to the explicitness of the story. Sarah's story was very much details (i think she didn't miss out anything) that I could see whatever that she wrote and thus my reactions were ummm over the top.😆😳. That's why at times I avoid reading love novels in public and prefer more mystery/fiction and non-fiction books so that I don't embarrass myself in public😆☺️

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

What to do Kadeen!!! I have an imaginative mind that when I read something, I immediately picturise it. So whenever I read my mind will form images or more like a film (if you can call it that) according to the explicitness of the story. Sarah's story was very much details (i think she didn't miss out anything) that I could see whatever that she wrote and thus my reactions were ummm over the top.😆😳. That's why at times I avoid reading love novels in public and prefer more mystery/fiction and non-fiction books so that I don't embarrass myself in public😆☺️

LOL! Believe me when I say I know what you mean. I think I even added a few touches of my own to the mental pictures I ended up with from this😆. Therefore, like you, I never read intense content in public, I usually have the desire to burst out laughing for some strange reason, while struggling not to blush. I was definitely doing the "goofy-smile" thing in reaction to this, and I think I blushed when I got to the sounds she was making...😆 Like you said, it's like watching a movie☺️

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Oh my goodness...

Three parts of this FF and I have been struck speechless by each and every one of them so far! Fantastic writing, Sarah! This story has a wonderful mix of just about everything that one could hope for in a passionate romance!

The characters are well-defined and I am really eager to learn more about them through the details you insert into the narrative. What I love most about your writing so far, besides the fact that everything is so beautifully described which makes it impossible for me to push away mental images of what I'm reading, is that the emotions of the characters flow from your words in ways that resonate and make me feel for them and feel with them. That's not usually something I come across in stories that have a whirlwind romance in them...But I know that this is definitely not going to be one of those standard "good girl rebels" and "one night stand" stories. I can tell that this is going to be much, much more sensitive than that.

I'll be back with more detailed comments later, because the mix of emotions in these first three parts is just begging me to revisit this story!

P.S. If it's not too much of a hassle, would you be able to PM me with future updates?

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Sheema Rajoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

LOL! Believe me when I say I know what you mean. I think I even added a few touches of my own to the mental pictures I ended up with from this😆. Therefore, like you, I never read intense content in public, I usually have the desire to burst out laughing for some strange reason, while struggling not to blush. I was definitely doing the "goofy-smile" thing in reaction to this, and I think I blushed when I got to the sounds she was making...😆 Like you said, it's like watching a movie☺️

OMG exactly... I'll have this stupid smile plastered on my face and though no body will know that I'm blushing, they'll know something is going on seeing the reactions on my face. I cannot hide that stupid smile and the worst goosebumps. The more I try to hide, the more it doubles up and embarrasses me further. Sometimes I curse myself for having such a mind but I just love it as it gives more feel and somewhat makes reading so much more pleasurable and wonderful as we can see what's going on..😊

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saf24

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter three was beautiful and the way it was written is addictive. Loved that you showed Yash's POV and his feelings and can't wait to see what you have in store next.

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

OMG exactly... I'll have this stupid smile plastered on my face and though no body will know that I'm blushing, they'll know something is going on seeing the reactions on my face. I cannot hide that stupid smile and the worst goosebumps. The more I try to hide, the more it doubles up and embarrasses me further. Sometimes I curse myself for having such a mind but I just love it as it gives more feel and somewhat makes reading so much more pleasurable and wonderful as we can see what's going on..😊

Goosebumps? Wow. I don't think anything I've ever read in life has ever given me goosebumps Only the cold weather does that. I can completely relate to wondering if they can guess from my face that something is up. Since I am one of those people who laughs along with a character, cries with them, or feels everything to a certain extent, it can certainly create moments for awkward stares. I've often had people stare at me as if I've lost my mind because of my reaction to something I was reading.

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drmhp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

I am loving how this story is shaping up...pls update soon!!!

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Sheema Rajoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Goosebumps? Wow. I don't think anything I've ever read in life has ever given me goosebumps Only the cold weather does that. I can completely relate to wondering if they can guess from my face that something is up. Since I am one of those people who laughs along with a character, cries with them, or feels everything to a certain extent, it can certainly create moments for awkward stares. I've often had people stare at me as if I've lost my mind because of my reaction to something I was reading.</font>

Yup unfortunately each time when I get excited or really shy, my goosebumps appear. It's the way I blush 😆. Exactly... I've had many awkward stares thrown at me for my reactions when I read a book. I can still remember the first time I read angels and demons, I literally jumped and screamed when my mum entered the room when I was reading a suspense filled scene. She panicked and called me psycho. Even ar times I get so overwhelmed that I just tear up actually more like cry my butt off. However stupid or ridiculous it may sound I'm actually really happy to have this gift as it makes reading so beautiful and enjoyable..