CONSEQUENCES (a fiction)-updt Chapter 16 (pg 51) - Page 2

Originally posted by: akui1984

I like it!!! Pls continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

OMG OMG OMG...this was fantastic... I could swear my body was heating up reading this fully loaded passionate update.. For a first timer (if I can ever say that), you were beyond superb. Loving this bold Aarti.. The way you explained the scenes were just over the top.. My already corrupted mind could imagine and picturise everything that was going on (I won't say what I felt but I guess you would already know by now😆😳).. Great job and do continue asap..

Originally posted by: saf24

This was beautifully written and it captured the emotions of the characters perfectly. A great start

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Awesome hot romantic story.. Can't wait to know who is the man.. Continue soon!😉

Wow...I am loving how this story is shaping up...pls update soon!!! you are fast with ya updates...

Rumplefunk. Sarah. Why didn't you PM me?😡 Simply put: HOLY SMOKE!😲 First of all, that was superb writing, secondly, enthralling story telling, and thirdly HOT😉. Cheers to the loss of the good girl image without the loss of the good girl. Please, please, please, please, please PM me? And you can't say no, I'm on your bloody buddy list.😳

Great going! This is an awesome one! Keep updating! PM me if possible once you update! 😉

thouroughly enjoyed it...😊

Fantastic updates which sent chills down my spines and gave me goosebumps all over. Gosh I had to stop reading as I was feeling (again I guess you know what I was feeling😆).. the way you explained it was so sensuous that my heart is still racing after reading it (I imagine and picturise things as I read so I think you can understand my condition)☺️