CONSEQUENCES (a fiction)-updt Chapter 16 (pg 51) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: akui1984

I like it!!! Pls continue soon!!!

Thanks you! 😃
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Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

OMG OMG OMG...this was fantastic... I could swear my body was heating up reading this fully loaded passionate update.. For a first timer (if I can ever say that), you were beyond superb. Loving this bold Aarti.. The way you explained the scenes were just over the top.. My already corrupted mind could imagine and picturise everything that was going on (I won't say what I felt but I guess you would already know by now😆😳).. Great job and do continue asap..

Ohh tell me about it...I certainly know how you feel 😉😆. Well, this story was penned quite sometime back, it's just that I didn't have the time to edit & do proof reading before posting it.
Since, its Christmas hols now...I found some peace & quietness. Hence, the birth of CONSEQUENCES.
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Originally posted by: saf24

This was beautifully written and it captured the emotions of the characters perfectly. A great start

Aww...thanks, sweetheart! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Awesome hot romantic story.. Can't wait to know who is the man.. Continue soon!😉

Hmm...the identity of the man is updated in chapter 3 and thanks for the compliment!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...I am loving how this story is shaping up...pls update soon!!! you are fast with ya updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rumplefunk. Sarah. Why didn't you PM me?😡 Simply put: HOLY SMOKE!😲 First of all, that was superb writing, secondly, enthralling story telling, and thirdly HOT😉. Cheers to the loss of the good girl image without the loss of the good girl. Please, please, please, please, please PM me? And you can't say no, I'm on your bloody buddy list.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Great going! This is an awesome one! Keep updating! PM me if possible once you update! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thouroughly enjoyed it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic updates which sent chills down my spines and gave me goosebumps all over. Gosh I had to stop reading as I was feeling (again I guess you know what I was feeling😆).. the way you explained it was so sensuous that my heart is still racing after reading it (I imagine and picturise things as I read so I think you can understand my condition)☺️

Please update soon.. I really wanna know how this develops.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Your reactions are cracking me up Sheema😆

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