Always,Only You--(fiction) THREAD 1 - Page 12

Originally posted by: saf24

Gosh this was a really beautiful update Deepti. Love the way the story is unfolding and they way you have written it.

Thx !! 🤗

I tend to neglect this FF a lot. I have more fun with just for laughs thing.

But i had to bring myself to write the next update. Do not like to keep things incomplete.

But maybe i should end this soon. I do not like to drag or do I?? Lets see.😃

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Thx !! 🤗

I tend to neglect this FF a lot. I have more fun with just for laughs thing.

But i had to bring myself to write the next update. Do not like to keep things incomplete.

But maybe i should end this soon. I do not like to drag or do I?? Lets see.😃

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

This is my version of USS RAAT so i kept bhaang out.😆
Thx for going through and for the quick response.

Oh, wow! I can almost feel the sparks kindling into a fire, Deepti!

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Oh, wow! I can almost feel the sparks kindling into a fire, Deepti!

Besides the ending, which honestly left me awestruck, I loved the way Yash and Aarti were struggling to reach each other in the water as Aarti was trying desperately not to give up. The aftermath of the rescue was intense...

Loved the update, Deepti! I hope you're not planning to end this too soon, though...Take as much time as you need, as long as you don't leave us hanging! 😃

Well i have thought of a few ways to take this story forward. One way is much shorter than the other but was not the the initial thing i had in mind, ok now i am getting such positive feedback i shall stick to my original storyline.

Thx for finding it interesting.🤗 And i promise i will not bring it to an abrupt end.

Deepti this was fantastic.. The wait was so worth it...
Now i'm being greedy and willing to beg.. Please update soon.. You stopped just before the most important scene..😳
Update soon please and great work..

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Deepti this was fantastic.. The wait was so worth it...
Now i'm being greedy and willing to beg.. Please update soon.. You stopped just before the most important scene..😳
Update soon please and great work..

Thx 😃

The way they shot this in PV was fantastic and i am heavily influenced by how it was. It must be pretty obvious as i have taken all my inspiration from it. Just tweaking it a bit here and there. You do not mess with perfection now do you? LOL

The next update will just have to wait i am afraid. I had to force myself to write even this one to be honest.
I like my humorous post more.

Awesome update Di! 👏 I loved the flow of emotions!!!

@Deepti: You really took your time with this one. But it was worth the wait. That was an amazing turn of events. Super writing! 👏

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Awesome update Di! 👏 I loved the flow of emotions!!!

Thank you so much!