ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 94

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

This was really emotional and really awesome! I loved it!

Aarti's gifts were great and yes, Aarti you can dare to live again!

This is really amazing! Please do update soon!

Thank you Carissa.

And with support from friends like you Arti has finally given herself permission to live again 😊.

Originally posted by: -Zahra15-

OMG this was so beautiful.

Aww I totally loved it, especially the last part, the way you made Aarti think that even she can dare to live again, awesome.

And yes the gift, I could never thought of such a thing.

Amazing.

Thanks for the PM.

Thank you Zahra.

Aww, you have an amazing imagination yourself Zahra. I adore your stories.

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update loved

Thank you Levitha.

Originally posted by: RA17

so yash n aarti avoided at ther best hmm intersting
Yes...Yash was too embarrassed and Arti found the whole situation too awkward - avoidance was the easiest, most comfortable option.

loved it kat the way you take us to the flashback of yash how he got reminded n thenn his clear thoughts
Thank you. An Arpita-flashback from Yash was required, hain na?

aww cho cute naa ansh as chotu nawab
I could just see Divyam dressed up as one 😆.

seriously one agin you bring aarpita but the credit for aarti sketch is entriesly goes to you

i love shweta mushi smile she is actually very adorable n then a sketch which was never become reality it is has soo deepth in it Kat beautiful both sketch first one aarti did of unborn n now this one as nevr seen but made be love it to the core
Thank you 😳. Sketching is Arti's strength, that is how she best expresses herself. Both sketches have so many layers of her emotions and wishes embedded in them...Arti herself does not realize it yet though.

coming to aarti side kat it was shocking today you explore the rage she had for P which is offcourse not negative but agian layers of emotions which is suprising n shocking agian lady love your though process a i mention earleir i never thot his ff to be intense but you always suprise me with new thots in each update..👏👏
The rage was much needed. Realistically, till Arti deals with the rage that comes with her loss she can't move on. And i want to keep this story as realistic as i can - though there will always be some ArYa fluff in it 😉.
Oh ho - not intense enough huh? Lol - true that. I try to keep this story balanced with all the different emotions. The really angsty, intense stories - that's not here anymore.

then this is beyound words so taking help of yours n pasting it

To live and to fly...could she dare do that again? Could she dare open her heart to life again?...Could she dare to live and feel again?

Last not the least thansk for update n pm n offcuorse eagerly waiting for next re😃

Thank you Ria. Thank you for feeling along with me and giving me such detailed feedback.

Hi Kat!

first of all s sorry to reply this late. completely lost the track of the FF. I hardly come these days to I-F.
Just went thru part 7A-part 9A.

and as usual the story is turning out to be interesting. Loved the way Yash started working on something which he really loves and also slowly moving on in his life.

Aarti is really selfless and good at heart. Love her and loved her for the patience she showed in the hotel room. 👏

and why Yash? why Yash??? What was the need to drink this much?? Atleast think about the people who care for you and who are there for you???? I really liked the way realistic way u have showed Yash's character and frustration in Chapt 9A. I don't know how it feels to loose someone closest to your heart but i can imagine.

Nice update.

thanks for the pm dear.

loads of love
vinu

Oh wow!! The last para was the highlight of the chapter.

Can she dare to breathe again? yes she can.
Can she live again? yes. she can.

You have very nicely portrayed both the character's feelings, their anger, their emotions and their frustration. This was so much needed at this point of time.

Now waiting for how Aarti would take her decisions and decisions she would take to fly and love like a bird.

thanks for the pm.

loads of love
vinu

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Sharmeen - thank you for the pictures again. They are adorable!!

Arti had to give something special to Ansh, na? What better than a sketch of his mother with him, the mother he will not remember, but drawn by the mother he has known through his little life?

LOL - yes, the phone call 😆. I hope you weren't too disappointed... i do try to keep this tale as realistic as possible.

And...Ansh samjho ki aagaya 😊.

Bs main bht Khush hone wali hun ab Ansh n Yashu

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Beautifully update...

Thank you, Luv_lvndr.

Originally posted by: pankhudi11

Beautiful update Kat🤗

It was so Touchy aarti's gifts were so cute the small sherwani and the portrait of arpita holding ansh

aarti is too sweet.😳 This shows aarti is very connected to ansh . She made the portait of arpita and ansh but deep in side her heart she wants to feel ansh on her own arms i feel . ITs good both are slowly moving on from their past 😳

Waiting for next update ...thanks for PM .😃

Thank you Pankhudi.

Getting the right gift is so important - Arti has a dil ka rishta with Ansh so this one was easy 😊. Yes she does want to hold him in her arms, but also knows its not possible. So she settled for something that he can and should cherish - a portrait of his mother with him.