ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 93

Originally posted by: alekhika20

wonderful update,cnt soon.

waiting.

Thank you Alekhika.

Originally posted by: maha9

wow dear amazing emotional part !!!

u made me cry my heart out for yash and arthi !!!

for me they are the rab ne bana di jodi to be made in heaven !!!

fantabulous work dear ❤️

Thank you Maha. I am overwhelmed that the part touched the hearts of so many of you.

Rab ne banadi jodi huh? I like that 😊.

*Sigh* Kat, 🤗this FF is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.I LOVED it...loved every bit of it.You again made me SPEECHLESS!


Marvelous work darling!👏

Originally posted by: Alamelu

That was one emotional update...lovely...hopefully ansh will be the one to bring them closer and fill the needs of each other

Thank you Alamelu.

Ansh is the catalyst in this relationship - and story actually. I just have to figure out all the ways and means 😊.

Originally posted by: rutu83

that was...amazing👏

first off the gift of sketch really got to me but the bird of paradise, such a hopeful and pure wish, really left me speechless...and then jealous. i don't know how you or indu or deepti or any other gifted writers do this. i have hard time writing even a reply post that truly conveys how beautiful the writing is. sometimes i get so aggravated i have to count to ten before trying again😆😉

really though- fantastic job👏

Thank you Rutu.

I was stumped on what to use to show the paradigm shift within Arti. I wanted to capture a feeling of soaring up in the sky - and then i remembered the little bird i am named after (the petname my mom kept for me). Lol - the weirdest things work sometimes i guess. But don't be jealous - you have no idea how long i have to slog over these...😕

Aggravated? Why? I looove your comments 🤗

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Chapter 9A

What has Yash done that Vidhi n Pankaj sent Aarti to him ? 😕
He had drunk for 4 hours 😲
What came over him ? 😕
So he forgot Arpita's b'day !
Poor guy ,I wud say !
Thanx 4 the chapter 😊

Poor guy is right! A bit silly too - but that's just my personal opinion. I don't think drinking or any kind of overindulgence solves any problem - but do know that people resort to it. So used it to show Yash's breakdown and clear a way for him to start moving on. Ek tir se do shikaar 😉.

Thanks Naureen!

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Chapter 9B

Embarrassment isn't allowing him to confront Aarti !
Yes. Can you imagine his situation?? Bechara 😆

Can imagine what Yash must b feeling on 4getting his love's b'day.. Guilty !
How sweet ! Sherwani 4 little Ansh 😊
A mother-son sketch 😊
Loved that one last picture love 😳
LOL 😆!

The whole scene after that was beautiful Kat 👏
Thank you 😳.

Aarti cud feel a sense of helplessness , vulnerable at not being able to stop what occured in her lyf , had it been known she wud'nt have allowed him to drink as much as a drop of alcohol !
Yes, helplessness and anger. I hadn't touched on the anger part yet - but really you can't move on from grief like hers till you deal with the rage that comes with it. I barely touched it here, but it will have to do.

Fighting wid her own self to live the precious life she had or just to breath 😕
Survivor's guilt is a terrible thing to live with - the guilt you have for the mere fact that you are still alive 😭

I think she should give her lyf a chance now 😊 Or at least try 😊
Agreed. About time too - at least from a story point of view and the time i am spending on it 😆


All the three chapters were beautifully penned Kat 👏
Esp Aarti's thoughts, Yash-Arpita memory 👏
Thank you again Naureen. 😳

Thanx 😊

Thank you for the detailed comments Naureen. You make me go through my whole thought process again - helps tremendously to move the story forward. So thank you 🤗.

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Kat I read this after a long day and I changed from 😔 to this 😃 after I finished the update

So THX🤗

My pleasure Deepti. Your story has done that many times for me - so i am thrilled i was able to return the pleasure at least once 🤗.

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Beautiful, very beautiful! 👏👏 I don't know Kat, but I think this is the best update so far from you! 👏👏👍🏼

I'm speechless! The emotions happening in Yash and Aarti's heart are very well balanced written here! 😊

Wished this part didn't end! 😆😛 You wrote it beautifully until there were tears in my eyes as well as smile! 😳

Thanks for the PM and wonderful update! 🤗

Thank you Isya.

If i managed to make you cry and smile, i achieved my goal - thank you for investing your emotions into this story along with me.

Originally posted by: princess121993

awesome...mindblowing...loved loved it very much...u have so beautifully shown emotions of yash n aarti...

buddy...great work...please continue soon

Thank you Charmi. This was overdue, so am glad it came over in a way that connected with you.