ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10)

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

@Dona, Anitu, Nuresmeralda, IsYaRoCher, Luv_lvndr, USM - thank you! I am so glad you liked the story till date.

@Taahir - thanks pal! You always cheer me on, and are always biased towards me!! Not complaining - i like it - thank you!

@Hana - thanks! Yes, they did indeed feel something...glad you caught that.

@Vanny - thanks dear. Don't know yet how long it will turn out to be - let's see.

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Old username: salvatore-nina

@FireLordPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Kat that was absolutely brilliant and that was just the prologue! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Aside: I'm glad you made Suneeta's character that of a gossipy sidekick. She always seemed that way to me from the brief encounters of her in the show.

I like how you maintained the essence of Aarti's character, the cheerful naughty girl that she is. And from her interactions with Prashant, we also get a slight foreshadowing into how their relationship will eventually turn out. I loved Yash's entry and that jolt of electricity that went through them both when Aarti put the garland on him. Looking forward to the next part!

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Avi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Can I tell you how much I love reading your stories...*sigh*

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

@Nina - thanks! Its so sweet of you. This one was a fun-write - took me right back to my college days. Re ArPra - Arti is making the same mistake many girls her age make - but that's life and part of life's lessons she needs to learn. I am halfway through the next part - hopefully i can complete it soon.

@Gmhatcher - yes of course you can tell me - greedy for feedback 😉. And don't be reticent with it - feel free to heap both positive and negative input. Seriously though - thank you. It means a lot when you make a comment like that.

@Nuresmeralda - thank you!

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I wasn't being bias , it was true 😊
Plus , em.waiting for next 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Lovely prologue. Please continue soon. Can't wait to read what happens next.

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Piie Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Awesome Kat! Such an enticing prologue...I can imagine how the story going to be like...and seriously, I can hardly wait for it!!

Please continue asap & thanks for the PM!

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Ashwatha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Great start👏👏...

Please update soon😛...

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@Lovely_nikki - thank you! I hope to have chapter 1 up soon.

@SarahRam - thank you! Working on the next part...hope to have it in a readable form soon 😛.

@Jasraj, AshGC_arja - thank you! I am glad you liked the story so far.