Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 45

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Such a beautiful story and wonderfully presented👏👏👏... i seriously felt touched when Yash run here and there to find and ensure if it was his Mishti... And Mishti, how hard it would have been for her to withdraw voluntarily from him still knowing that he is around her... My heart surely reaches to both of them...

Indu another great update! I love your endings, they always put me on edge! I can't wait to see how Yash and Aarti's meeting enfolds.

Wow Indu another touching update.

Originally posted by: SarahRam

Ohh Indu! What a twist you're creating...I'm just lovin' it!

Just got time to sit and read your last two updates when suddenly your latest update pops up...what a delightful treat for a warm Christmas hols!

So, Yash is getting close to un-veil Mrs.D's real self? Hmm...interesting! Now that Mishti got her burning questions answered, will she give a second chance to her "almost thought as dead love"?

Can't wait for your next update...will she want to meet the waiting Yash at home?

@Sarah: Thanks...I missed you after the last update.😊

Hmmm, Yash and Aarti on a collision course, yet not!! I have no clue what new game destiny has begun with them...😳




Friends...Thank you for the wonderful responses. I want to respond to everyone individually. Please bear with me if I take the whole day. The workplace is a killer field at the moment.😛

Indu..again this was fantastic. I really don't know how you do it but you just do.. I freaking loved this updates. It's the exact feeling of how I can't stop reading and turning the pages of a really good book to see what happens next and how it unfolds. You've got me fixated on this work of yours that I just can't get enough of it and just need more and more of it. Indu mujhpe rehem karo and please update soon. Will Aarti be able to stop the marriage? Will Yash finally for sure know that Aarti is indeed his Mishti? Will Aarti gather the courage to face Yash and disclose the truth? The suspense is making me quite restless. You're really so good at this Indu and great job once again..

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

WOW WOW WOW !!!!

Great progress !!!

Loved how you made Aarti get to know the truth about Yash.

Loved how you made Yash hear her voice and rush to Arpita's parents home. That HOPE that desperation was very well conveyed.

Beautiful update Indu.👏

Can we expect a reunion in that glass room with them looking at the stars together ????

@Deepti: Thanks dear friend.😊 I've always found your responses to be unbiased...and so this one drew a big "Whew" from me...I was quite tentative over this one as there was a double bend in this. As for your last line...hmm!! I enter my heart zone and find you have already visited it.😉

Originally posted by: freya123

superb part

Thank you Freya. 😊

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

*dies*

INDU!

One heart attack after another...this story is incredible!

*RESERVED - I was so overwhelmed by the last line of Part 8 that I forgot to reserve this spot!*

@Borna: I hear you my dear dear friend. It's just that that final frontier is always the most difficult to cross...even in life...and especially when the line of control is drawn by you only.😭

I'll be waiting...as always.🤗