When Destiny Has It Its Way-AarYa SS-EPILOGUE PG16 - Page 7

Originally posted by: palindrome

Thank God..She said it..

Not like the show where things are kept hidden till secrets are being unveiled in very wrong way..

I just hate that..

Just loved the way you portrayed aarti's pain..

Waiting eagerly for yash's reaction...

PS- I love your dp alot..😊

Originally posted by: pal_maan

I love the innocence in your stories yaar. And I guess, every PVian whould the way Aarti spoke her heart, although she was scared like hell. Even though Yash had stopped her from saying anything, but she thought, 'Its Now of NEVER'. I really loved that yaar. And I know, after reading this part every PVians must me wishing, 'Hamari serial wali Aartiji ko bhi itni sad buddhi de do bhagwanji (CVs😉)'

The Yash here is so like our serial wala Yash in terms of care (Love toh abhi hua nahi hai na). But his care is so heart warming...

And loved the teasing session also, though it was a little too short but I enjoyed it thoroughly.

And when he entered the room and you described his suit, I was immediately taken to that period when he wore that full suit, oh, he looks DAMN HANDSOME in full suit yaar. And the way he opened his first two buttons reminded me of the ZRA promo. After this, I was again in my Gurmeetland. And for few minutes, I didnt read the story further (was busy drooling over his looks😳😆)

But it was indeed a very emotional update Zahra.

P.S - Now, its weekend so I expect daily updates from you, ok

Originally posted by: villager00

ok dear, promise me you won't leave the story hanging when i fall too deep for it😛

looking forward to the next update😉