ARYA OS : CRAVINGS...PART 2..UPDATED ON PAGE 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay!! ok waiting...🤓

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls update the next part


waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lively-piia

updating...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃...

want one??????????😉 😉 😉...


uhhh... duhhh!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os dear
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
sorry...sorry...sorry...
i mean i disappeared giving updating tag..
actually my dadi is admitted 2 hospital...nw she is fine so here i m completing my promise...
here it goes the second part...
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PART 2:-
it was early morning in the scindhia house..
yash slept little longer and was still sleepy when he felt something heavy on his stomach...
he opened his eyes to see his not so innocent son ansh sitting on him...
ansh: wake up pa...u r late...mom says its bad 2 be late in the mrng...bad boys do that...stop being lazy bum...
yash eyes widen at his son's comment he tickled him when ansh laughed his heart out n pleaded him 2 stop...
yash: ansh where is ur mom?
ansh: she is with payal n palak ...they r getting ready with for school and she asked me to wake u up...
yash: y didnt she came to wake me up?
ansh said she is busy wid our daughters gettin them ready...BUT..
his trance was broken by ansh voice..
ansh: pa u can dream abt mom later...
now i m gettin late 4 school..
wid that he winked at his father and let the room..
yash[st]: oh man! ansh bhi kitna badmaash ho gaya hai..shsitaan kahi ka..but the cutest devil alive...mera beta hai...and yup he was right i was thinking abt aartiji...m i dat transparent????
uff...
yash gt frreshed and came dwn for breakfast..looking for aarti ...
he sat on his table...but his eyes were searching for his biwi...nt aware of the fact his family was keenly observing him...
to his bad luck food ws already laid in front of him...served by vidhi...n he was least bothered..
prateek: kya baat hai bhaiya ?? kisi ko dhoond rahe ho ??
yash: haan...nahi toh...i mean woh bachhe..
vidhi: arrey bhaiya they hv gone to school ..
pari:- bhaiya khayiye na..i made pasta 4 the first time...dn't worry aarti bhabi ne bola tha ki aap koo spices kum pasand hai...i made it blend just the way u liked...
[she smirked at yash expressions at the name of aarti...its so fun she thought]
yash: its nice pari...ur teacher is gud..where is she?? i sud complement her to...[he felt like a teenager] i mean i hv to also ask her abt some color scheme...woh kya hai na unki color scheme achchi hoti hai...mein woh...
[all the while he was nt lookin at his food n stammering..yash scindhia stammering...gosh]
suddenly he heard the sound of giggling from all of his sides...
prateek: bhai y r u giving excuses or explainations .. she is ur wife not of our neighbours...u dnt need an excuse to meet her..
yash was embarresed on being caught...he glared at prateek ...but it was of no use..
vidhi: devarjee woh aarti is gone with kids...
unhe school chodne...
yash[st]: y did she went??woh khud kyun gayi?? driver toh th naa...mujse bol deti..
i mean i want to ask her if she is alright .. i hope she is nt avoiding me...yash come again..tu phir ulta soch raha hai...woh aisa kyu karegi...she was ok..she came back with me...oh god this is so darn confusing...
his self talk was ended by the shrill call ring ofland line..
vidhi: hello...haan aarti bolo...kya??????? haan thik hai...mein bauji ko bol dungi...tum aapna khyal rakhna...shobha anti ko mera namaste kehna...bye.
yash: woh bhabhi kiska call tha?
vidhi: jiska aapne suna devarji...
[yash made an annoyed face]
ok..ok..aarti ka call tha ...she'll be going to meet shobha anti...she is goin to their house kids will be joining her later in evening ...i think she'll be staying there for tonight..
yash: NOOO... i mean ...matlab unka khyal kaun rekhega ...wahan par?? aur bache bhi...
yahan aap ho...pari hai...aur mein...woh ...aise kaise...
vidhi: tum bhool rahe ho yash woh arti ka pura khayal rakh sakti hai...so dnt gt hyper..
n if u r missin aarti..u can admit in front on me i'll nt tell anyone...
she smirked n left the room...
yash was angry...frustrated...he wanted to see her...talk to her..at that very moment...some unknown fear started clinging onto him..
like aarti is drifting away from him...
and its unacceptable...he was nt liking it...
he was again feeling guilty...
for being rude to her...
for being unreasonable to her...
for being jerk to her...
for being angry on her..
for calling their love a SIN... that struck him..
did he called their love???
a thought came across his mind...
KOI SAMJHE TO EK BAAT KAHE...
ISHQ TAUFEEQ HAI GUNAAH NAHI...
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to be contd...
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i know u all r ready with galis n chappals 4 no arya scenes...but i want to potray yash feeling deeply so that later on u can relate to his emotions quite well...
hey i hv a question 4 u all...
i m planning to turn dis os into short max 10 shots ss...
should i do it???????
do tell...
now thanks 4 pressin like n commenting...
lv u all...
do press like n comment again on the part 2..
enjoy reading...
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
You updated quite well...Sorry for your Dadi maa...You can taks the story as long as you wish
Edited by Frozen007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Loved the OS...I can feel yash ka tension in terms of love😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Loved it. Please continue soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's lovely. You can elaborate as you like, but please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
it would very nice if u turn it into SS !!
and the update it was very nice dear !! 👏

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