*UPDATE Pg3*Aarya FF: Tum!!! Just You! - Page 2

its really nice pls keep writing. if u can ,pls pm me when u finish the next part😊

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Yay, Me first! Lovely beggining! Very different, wonderfully written! Please Continue Soon! And do you plan on sending PM's?

EDIT: I realized I wasn't the first, sorry I lied. There were likes before me. But I guess I get the first comment, no? 😆

Thank you so much. The very first comment means alot to me😳😳

Actually i didnt think of PMing, but thanks to all your request, I'll start a PM list soon.

Thank you for your support.

Do look out for the update this week.

Originally posted by: sexyheels

nicely done

Thank you so much. Hope you continue reading all the future updates and do give your comments.
Truly appreciate it

Originally posted by: rohini973794

heyyy its too gud yaar...nice concept...pls continue ...looking forward for it

Hiii... thanks alot. Really glad to hear that you like it. Yup, will update it soon.

Originally posted by: teju1816

wow superb update ~~ !! seems different and nice would love to read more of it update soonnn !!

Thanks... love thata you like the update and yup, i'm definitely going for something different. Hope to keep the momentum going. Do look out for the update.

Originally posted by: Loveforlife

WOW great first part...pls continue.. loving it!!👏

Just one request, if possible kindly can you use a larger font? 😊

Hi, Thanks. Appreciate that you like the beginning. Will def update it soon.
& Also, as per your req, have increased the size. Do comment if its okay.

i'm kinda the person whose used to small fonts😳😳.. so i cant really tell which is gd font😳😳.

Originally posted by: pankhudi11

superb i like it waiting for next update !!

Thanks alot. Will update soon. Do keep a lookout.

Originally posted by: SarahRam

Love it...great concept!! Please continue soon...looking forward for it.

Just a small request...could you use larger font...I had to squint my eyes to read the story.

And hope you could PM once the next update is ready...that is if you don't mind!

Thank you alot. My next update will be up this week soon. And as per reqs, i've increased the font. Do say if its appropriate. Thanks.

& yes, will PM the next update. Thank you again.

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

@ bold: plez2 do some favor for me...plez larger the font (4 ur info im wearing glasses)

but still to open widely my eyes to read it...Plez do not be offended by what I said...

i really looking forward it,plez cont soon...😉

Cheers...😉

Hi. Thanks. And yes increased the font😳. n comon yaar, no offence taken. In fact, thank you for the suggestion. It helps me improve further...

Will def cont it soon and looking forward to your comments. 😊

Originally posted by: rasheedha

its really nice pls keep writing. if u can ,pls pm me when u finish the next part😊

Thank you. Will def PM you when the next update it up.


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Side note: A huge huge thank you to everyone who has liked and commented. Means alot that you've taken time to read and comment on my FF. Really hoping to update this soon.

& for those who would like to be in the PM list but had not commented. Do like this post.
Will PM the update once its up.

Thank you guys again...😃😃

Interesting first part, pls continue.

Hi everyone.

So yea.. Aarti is pregnant. She doesnt know she did it. God bless she hopes its Yash's kid.

okay so yea.. PV is on preggy track now. No offence, i dont hate the track. I find the fact tt the CVs brought in the pregnant track very unpredictable. What i disliked was Aarti and her ghajini moments.
Like srsly who has this a bad an amnesia moment to not even remb u did it.

like sequentially, the last night before returning to bhopal with a angry and dumb (dumb=not able to speak properly) Yash, Aarti was with Aman till 4am.. so in like tt few hours, following the sunita call n angry Yash.. i doubt much can have happened without her knowing... n srsly a drunk Aarti at 4am??

So i decided not to ponder much and let the track flow and rather update my FF. My planned time was initially friday.😃


Anyways as usually do give ur comments. And to everyone who have commented. HUge thanks.

I'll update the PM list soon.

*****************]*Scene: Coffee Bean @ Nariman Point***********************

Aarti: Yash! I'm really sorry about your shirt.

Yash: Its okay. Dont worry about it.

Aarti: 😳. Please have a seat. Were you here from 11?

Yash: Yes Aarti Dubey. The Scindya family are very particular about punctuality. We always keep to our time.

Aarti: 😡... well.. thanks for he heads up Mr Scindya.

Yash: its Yash

Aarti thinks to herself "OMG, what's wrong with Mr Saddoo here. All so serious. I'm just 20 mins late."

An awkward moment of silence passes through the both of them. Yash is busy checking his phone. While Aarti just looks around. Aarti cannot bare the silence any longer.

Aarti: So Yash, urm how did u figure out its me in this crowd.

Yash: Your mom told me you were wearing red top and blue jeans. And well, look around and your the only one in red and single. So not much to figure. In fact, i would've figured it easier, but your little accident had me confused for a moment.

Aarti: Do you always speak like this???

Yash: Speak like?😕

Aarti: This...

Yash:. ...😕

Aarti: Nevermind, so you spoke to my Mom. So what did Mrs Dubey tell about me?😳 Hopefully good things 😆

Yash: Nothing, she just you were late and wearing red top.

Aarti: That's all??????>? Anything else???

Yash: Nope. That's it.

Aarti: Ermmm...


And another awkward silence between the both of them. Yash is just looking at his watch and his phone.

Aarti looks at Yash and is wondering...For a moment then, he was this charming patient guy. And 10mins after talking, he's this all too serious guy.. But got to admit, my mum does have a good taste. Such a handsome hunk. But a boring one nonetheless. Sigh, how can i let him off easily. I need to somehow tell him this...


Aarti: So Yash, would you like to go anywhere else?

Yash: No. This is fine.

Aarti: urm okay. Would you like another coffee...?? My treat 😃

Yash: I think i've had enough coffee for today.

Aarti just looks at him and gives him a faint smile. She goes thinking "This dude has a serious langauge problem. Dude needs to expand this vocabulary. What's up with his yes, no answers" When suddenly she notices that Yash is looking at her staring at him.

Yash: Ms. Dubey, anything wrong.

Aarti: 🥱. Aarti, Yash ji. I dont like to be called so formally. & No nothing is wrong. Just thinking of what to say. So Yash ji tell me about yourself. But yea, let me introduce myself. i'm Aarti, i'm sure my mom would've given you my biodate. But for refreshers. I'm a 87 born baby. *7 born kids are brilliant, funny, smart and cute. Oh, an AWESOME 😃. Anyways, i graduated from Delhi university and am working for a Media Advertising company as a Brand Marketing Associate. I'd tell you about my work but that'll bore you to death. I like hockey and going out with friends and i like to listen to songs and...


Yash: Aarti ji, i'm not interesting in this.

Aarti: What?

Yash: I'm sorry, i mean i'm not interested in this meeting set up by our parents. Actually i was forced by my parents and as a Scindya, i've been told to always obey elders and follow orders. But i'm not interested in marriage.

Aarti stares at him 😲

Yash: Sorry aarti-ji. I dont mean to hurt you. I only agreed to meet you to tell you this. I was hoping you would cancel this proposal. I just feel that i'm not ready for marriage. Its not you...


Aarti : Hurt??😕 I'm not hurt. Infact i'm super happy. I was desperately thinking of ways to drop the bomb. But i wanted to let you off easy. But now that you've said it. I'm not interested in marriage either. I lost a dumb bet to my mom, so had to meet you...

Yash: Bet?😕...

Aarti: Long story, dont bother. But thankfully, we both are the same page. Awesome.

Yash: Yes, good news i guess.*Finally a smile from Yash*

Aarti: So now that we have cleared things, can i get you the coffee? Just treat it as a last meeting treat.

Yash: 😆😆. Yeas, sure. I'll have a cuppa.

Aarti: One cappucino it is. *Aarti walks to the counter to order a cuppa*

Yash is looking at aarti. One hand, he is relieved that he told Aarti he's not interested and likewise her. On the other hand, that's a first he ever got rejected by a girl. I mean, cmon i'm Yash Scindya, bhopal's most eligible bachelor and here, a girl rejects him. Wonder why thou.

Yash looks on to Aarti and realises, she is indeed really pretty. Lovely lips, as smile. Expressive eyes. Cheerful and talkative. Extremely talkative. But sweet. He looks at her and just then Aarti turns back with his cup of coffee and looks at him looking at her and smiles. Yash smiles back, he had to. Such a sweet smile, no one, not even THE Yash scindya can refuse. So Yash, just smiles back.

Aarti: Here Yash-ji, your coffee.

Yash: Thank you Aarti.

Aarti: So yash, i kind of spilled everything about me. What about you? What are you doing?

Yash: Actually the Scindya family owns a Wedding Planner company. We are extremely famous there and even in Mumbai. A client of ours is have a wedding here, and i'm incharge of it. So will be here in Mumbai for another week. This is when my parents, thought of making me meet you.

Aarti: Ah, i see. And you are 26??

Yash: 27 to be exact.

Aarti: If you dont mind me asking, why are you not interested in Marriage?

Yash: Actually... i prefer not to say it. Lets just say, somethings cannot be let go off.



Just then, a voice is heard from distant corner.

Voice: Oh behold the heavens, Look who we have got here. Aarti. The Aarti dubey with a guy. So all this while, this is the secret you have been hiding from us, your secret Boyfriend!!!!

Aarti turns backs...


Aarti: TUM?

***to be continued: Comments please***

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