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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: palindrome


ok..i would like to share it with you..when i was writing this line,i actually imagined buaji and dubeyji in all those postersin yash's room..especially the bigger one near the door where yash is holding arpita's pallu from behind and she is blushing...🤪



OMG now yuh guh giv meh nightmares how will I sleep tonight wit tht image in my head... ugh!!😛😆
Edited by 16021983 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: palindrome

First of all thank you to each and every person who have read,liked,and was kind enough to comment on my story...Ok,,news is that this crazy cum illogical Os of mine is going to end very soon{may be one or two parts more..} and now there are two ideas going on and in my mind for my next writing, which are as following-

1} Arpita and Yash are happily married.Story is about how aarti enters and gets her life interwoven with them.Arpita is pretty much alive in this story.It has a tinge of mystery in it.
2} Aarti and Yash are getting married.Its an arrange as well as their first marriage. There is no arpita{dead or alive} in it..
Kindly help me to choose one..I shall be highly thankful to you...😊


I prefer the second one if u add some humor to it lyk this OS
Edited by 16021983 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: palindrome

First of all thank you to each and every person who have read,liked,and was kind enough to comment on my story...Ok,,news is that this crazy cum illogical Os of mine is going to end very soon{may be one or two parts more..} and now there are two ideas going on and in my mind for my next writing, which are as following-

1} Arpita and Yash are happily married.Story is about how aarti enters and gets her life interwoven with them.Arpita is pretty much alive in this story.It has a tinge of mystery in it.
2} Aarti and Yash are getting married.Its an arrange as well as their first marriage. There is no arpita{dead or alive} in it..
Kindly help me to choose one..I shall be highly thankful to you...😊
Once again thanks for all the appreciation and laughter you gave to "Her punarvivah"...


I'd love the second option with a tinge of romance and lots of comedy in it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
@palindrome Call me Pearl...and I'll go with the second one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Pearl_27

@palindrome Call me Pearl...and I'll go with the second one.


ohk..pearl..thanks for anwering...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: SarahRam

I'd love the second option with a tinge of romance and lots of comedy in it 😆


tinge of romance and lots of comedy..hmm...I am done with my "comedy quotient"😆..still i will try my best..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: palindrome


ohk..pearl..thanks for anwering...😊



Anytime...I want a lot of Romance...comedy too if you can.
Edited by Pearl_27 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
u r awesome ..writter.. plz upd8 soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Was it the heroine in this OS is,Bua ji?😲
A disbelieving blink that this OS "Her Punarvivah" is actually Bua ji's punar vivah🥺
Ha!Really a wild thing😆
Yash ji🤣🤣
*Claps*
Nicely Done👍🏼
Waiting😉
And about the "Note" I will go with option 2😛
Edited by swizle - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's soo funny and full of laughter.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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