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@ksfan2

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys. this is my first attempt to write stories.so pls forgive for my mistake.i will first update the prologue.if i get good comment i will continue.

Edited by rasheedha - 13 years ago

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 13 years ago

PROLOGUE

The story revolves around a girl named Aarti.who believes she is an orphan.but the truth is that her family is still alive.and when she finds out about it she is shocked and cant believe that she is the sister of Arpita who is the former wife of yash scindiya. and is 1 year older than her.which is unexpected

guys pls give ur suggesion if u want u can tell more ideas to devolop the story.

part-1: pg no: 1

part-2: pg no: 2

part-3: pg no: 3

part-4: pg no: 4

part-5: pg no: 5

part-6: pg no: 6

part-7: pg no: 7

part-8: pg no: 9

Edited by rasheedha - 13 years ago

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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fantastic twist yaar...Superb...love it...Since arpita is no more...and same love for palak and payal aarthi..has...please include how yash will react to this

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SinalRocks

@SinalRocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

Interesting start.👏

Keep going dear.👍🏼

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-1

It was raining heavily in the city of bhopal, maharashtra.u can hear the sound of laughter everywhere u see.it was very loud especially in a particular house.there was two kids who were jumping and splashing in the rain.they were enjoying very much.one of them was a 3year old kid named Arpita prakash .who is very sweet in nature. she loves rain and has a great sympathy from a very small age.she is always praised by the others for her sweet talks .she loves her sister very much and the other

was a 2year old kid named anu prakash . she is the tomboy of the house.if she not there in the house,the house would look very sad and

un lively.she is so cute and funny and is more like her sister in habits.priya prakash is their mother.she loves her daughter equally . she is very religious and also encourage her daughters in charity and other religious work.and finally Mr. prakash

he is quite a serious man .when it comes to his family he is really the opposite. he is very respected in their place.All this time they were a happy family.until one day...

will be continued...

pre-cap: arpita, priya and prakash meets with a minor accident.and anu thinks her parent are dead..

how was it ????

pls comment.do press the like button

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Suchithra

@im_suchithra

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice yar!! do continue ur work..

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Nisha

@Nisha_abi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice story..👍🏼

Unexpected twist Rasheeda...

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luv_lvndr

@luv_lvndr

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Posted: 13 years ago

❤️ it...Plez cont soon...

if u dnt mind plez pm me ur updte..

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

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Posted: 13 years ago

Pls continue to update this, it's every interesting and lovely story.

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

the next day the family went to a fair which was held nearby , there were many exciting rides like giant wheel,horse riding

etc. the girls enjoyed the fair.

Arpita:Mamma i want to go to this ride.

priya: Ok beta but wait for a few seconds we will go there when its our turn

prakash:i think the kids must be hungry.i will go and get them some snacks,Anu would u

like to come with me?

Anu nods her head,indicating yes

Anu and her papa went to buy some snacks while priya and arpita was waiting

for the ride.

Prakash was busy buying the food, mean while anu saw some clown coming and ran

to the crowds without informing her papa.

prakash runs with the snack to priya and arpita frightend

prakash: priya,anu is lost .

priya: what?? not able to control herself

prakash: I searched for her every where. i cant find her in this crowd

priya: my poor girl. She does not even knows how to talk (breaking down)where will i see for her now?

prakash:i am very sorry priya.i was buying some food and when i turned back she was not there.

Arpita hearing all this started to cry.(Arpita has just started to speak a bit fluently)

Arpita:mamma where is anu??

prakash:anu is alright beta,comforting himself and others

Priya started to imagine wild thoughts

priya:what if she is kidnapped,what if she is lost somewhere ,what if she is killed ?

prakash: no nothing will happend to her, im sure nothing .

priya:why god is testing me like this?lets go and search .

priya and prakash started searching everywhere.

prakash who was feeling responsible for all this. ran here and there

he was not knowing where he was heading until one car came and hit prakash .

prakash became unconcious,seeing this priya fainted.All the peaople gathered in the place where

they were unconcious and arpita started to cry. nobody noticed anu was watching what was happening to her family. she started to cry thinking her family is dead and was leaving without her.But somebody was noticing her crying, came near

her...

pre-cap: beti,what is ur name ? anu looks at them queitly

how was it ??? hope u guys liked it. do comment.

Edited by rasheedha - 13 years ago