AarYa in Mumbai~OS~Anyone want update? :P

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Hi all, After a quite long time, i tried a new one shot of AarYa..just wrote a random scene regarding their Mumbai trip but its about Aart and Yash not about Arpita..So give it a read..
And please forgive me for the mistakes coz i am running sort of time to correct it..

AarYa in Mumbai

After lots of insistence from Aarti, kids and all the family members, Yash finally agreed to give the Mumbai trip a thought. And finally he realized that if Arpita were here today she too wanted the Kids' happiness alike Aartiji. And after Arpita left him, he learnt to live for the kids and sacrificed his grief in order to give them some happy moments and nothing new for him. So he agreed to go to Mumbai for the kids though he was scared to go to the place where he had spent some awesome moments with Arpita.

Mumbai Beach House:

They have reached the beach house just a few hours ego. Aarti was amazed to see the dcor of the house. It was not so big like Scindhiya Mansion but every corner of it has the touch of pure love and romance. It is full of happy memories and full of pictures with cheerful faces. Be it kids or be it Yash Arpita. Then she Noticed that Yashji looking somewhere completely lost in past. She understood and softly called him,'Yashji'.Yash got alarmed that Arti had noticed him and just replied back "Hmm'.

Aarti: Yshji Now when we have come here, so please cheer up and let's enjoy with the kids..Please bring yourself out of the grief and let's live for the kids.

Hearing Aarti, yash just gave a small lough and continued ' That's what I am doing Aartiji from the day Arpita had left me!! If my kids were not there I will not be alive today because I think Dyeing with Arpita is much better option than living without her!" and he left from there. Yash's heart wrenching smile compelled Aarti to realize that how much it hurts to lose your true live. At one hand Aarti felt sad that Yash is living only for the kids and never had he mentioned anything about her but at the same moment she respected Yash more for his pure honesty and truthfulness..

Payel and Palak brought aarti back from her thought and took her to the hall where father son duo making plan of football. Then she heard palak cribbing 'Mamma dekho Papa and Ansh Planning to play football on beach but we want to to build sand houses. Please u will be with us na and tell papa also to be there' Before Aarti responded she heard Yash 'ok ok. We will be doing everything, first we will build sand house and then play football and the will be swimming in the sea. What's say!!' ''YAYAYAYAYA' Kids responded with a loud shout and they all went to the beach..

At beach ArYa helped kids to build sand house and played with them and kids were all happy and they were enjoying very much.. They went with their Papa and played in the water and they all got wet. Aarti helped the kids dry them so that they should not catch cold. Yash also removed his shirt and then with Ansh he went to play football.

Aarti self-thought 'it's good that Yash ji removed his wet shirt coz he used to catch cold quickly' then she noticed a group of girls were looking and smiling at yash and Ansh. She smiled and murmured 'mera Ansh is so sweet and cute, whoever sees him just fell for him. He is such a lovely kid' but then the girls' movement made her come out of her thought and then only she realized that girls are not actually looking at Ansh and their favourite thing of attraction and cheer is her handsome husband Yash who is doing magic with the ball. And suddenly a sense of insecurity, jealousy and possessiveness got into her. She called Ansh loudly making sure that girls could hear her 'Ansh Please come here along with your PAPA'.. And a loud gasp come out of the girls mouth that how can yash be still so handsome in spite of being a father!! Ansh reluctantly come with his father to his mamma , who quickly wrapped a towel on Yash and said 'aapko thand lag jayega so we should go to our house' A confused Yash couldn't understand her sudden urge to go home and so the kids.. and they started protesting'

Meanwhile the girls decided to feel their presence to the lovely family and they went near them. One of them started ' hi all..what a lovely family..' Looking at Yash she continued 'And you are so hot and handsome we didn't think that u could be married let alone be a father ' and she smiled where an embarrassed Yash looked at a fuming Aarti. Then one of the girl said to Aarti 'Hi u r so lucky to have a dashing husband and such lovely kids' Aarti smiled this time then the girls tease 'and don't worry..please let your hubby and son play because we are going and we won't be checking your hot husband out' they winked and left' blood rose quickly to Aarti's cheek and Yash looked amused. Somewhere he felt happy that Aarti ji was jealous for him and She is so much possessive for him.. but he could not understand why he was feeling happy about it and as usual he just ignored it.

Then he noticed Aarti is standing and she is fiddling with her aanchal and started ' aisa kuch nehi hain, Yash ji..I m not wanting to go home for them,, it's just because u will catch cold. I'm sorry' Yash decided to make the matter light and to stop rambling of Arti who were nowhere to stop, he said 'Ansh Payel palak , Aapki mamma kitna bolte hain?!!' and Ansh continued 'ke sir dard karne laagta hain' and they broke into laughter as the father and kids high fived..

A broad smile decorated Aarti's face and she could not thank God enough for giving her Yash along with the wonderful kids!!!

So how is it?!! please comment and tell if i can continue or not..😃

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Please continue. It is really nice.

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Excellent start...do continue dear...😃
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Originally posted by: AmeTz

Excellent start...do continue dear...😃

i donno, u remember or not ,i m 1 of ur fan...😉😛
i loved ur previous short SS...😊
waiting 4 d update...😛

of course i remember😊 its so sweet of u😳
Thanks for appreciating my work😃
if i get enough comment..i will definitely continueTongue
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Too lovely...Plz continue soon !!
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Originally posted by: asmani

of course i remember😊 its so sweet of u😳

Thanks for appreciating my work😃
if i get enough comment..i will definitely continue😛


glad tat u remember...😉😆
yep...i m sure u ll many get appreciation comments...😃
btw dont b lazy 2 continue tis FF unlike ur previous one...😆
i was very dissappointed at tat time u didnt continue na..😳

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glad tat u remember...😉😆
yep...i m sure u ll many get appreciation comments...😃
btw dont b lazy 2 continue tis FF unlike ur previous one...😆
i was very dissappointed at tat time u didnt continue na..😳

yes i decided not to continue it bt later i have completed it
i think u have missed it😃
here is the link😃
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Originally posted by: asmani

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glad tat u remember...😉😆
yep...i m sure u ll many get appreciation comments...😃
btw dont b lazy 2 continue tis FF unlike ur previous one...😆
i was very dissappointed at tat time u didnt continue na..😳

yes i decided not to continue it bt later i have completed it
i think u have missed it😃
here is the link😃

yes yes..😊

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