Kal: A PV Story (Chapter VI, Page 23) - Page 4

Omgosh!!It ended!😲😡 You are such a meanie Samana!! 😭 I was so into it!! Eeekkk I wanna read more!I really like it😳Tbh, I Don't think PV will show Palak, Ansh & Payal as grown Ups. Cuz then I'll have to see a grey haired GC 😳 But I Don't mind reading it through your writing 😳You seriously need to start writing I swear! Even better, write a novel LOL😆You're Excellent in English, the words you chose...i guess they come naturally to you. I've said this before about myself, I dont use big words cuz I'm kinda weak in english [Better to keep your Izzat than see it getting ruined 🤣 ] So um, am I gonna see another part?😳 I wanna see / Read Ansh boasting about his win while eating an Ice cream 😛Though It's kinda silly considering both got almost the same marks.. But I can see why they would do that😆I can't stop but imagine how they would be like when they grow up.I hope the PV makers Don't read this!😆

Cuz then I'll have to see a grey haired GC 😳

Awesome Samana ji 👏

Absolutely LOVE Your Writing Style 😳

Sadiie x

Originally posted by: Samanalyse

@Sadie: I am new to this, so don't laugh at my baby steps!

@neetusidhu: Thanks!

@Sadie ji: I was telling you not to laugh at my baby steps in PMing, which you did quite a lot of in your initial reaction. 😆

Anyway, thank you very much for liking the story so much, and after all the encouragement I got for this part, I have decided to continue the story and see where things go! So look out for updates and I will try to follow your lead and be more ruthless with my PMing. 😉

PS: I think GC would look hot with grey hair! ☺️ Like not all over, but just a little bit at the temples.

Oh My Gosh! This was an awesome update!

Another one of the talented writers!

WOWZERS. 😳

incredibly well written- I love how Ansh and Palak keep their competiveness even as they get older, I can see that happening for both of them, pushing the other to be better just because they consistently compete, very well done!

Samana, you have stunned me with this beauty! Seriously I am completely speechless after reading this perfection! 👏

Sometimes I really do wonder about what goes on in your head and how you are able to churn out such masterpieces. This was absolutely brilliance right from the word go. I love how you have etched Palak and Ansh's characters with you much clarity and attention to detail. I could literally see the scene unfolding in front of my eyes with all the nuances included! The relationship that you have shown these two to share is beautiful beyond words and completely realistic when you take into account everything we know of their given natures so far. The infallible bond they share with each other is absolutely precious and their pre and post exam rituals totally endearing!

I found it so appropriate how the competition only lasted till the night before the results were posted and that how once they were out they both went back to being their inseparable selves without a hint of animosity or jealousy! This is definitely the kind of relationship I want and I can see them growing in to and so this was a treat in every sense of the word. And I also find it extremely appropriate how Ansh wants to be a lawyer because like Palak said he is going to be a complete natural at it. The guy is a born charmer and if there is anyone who can sway the jury of their side with one argument it has to be Ansh, so major props for that one!

Gosh, I wish I could do a scene by scene breakdown but circumstances won't allow that right now, so all I am going to say is that this NEEDS to be continued, no two ways about it. You have given us such a tremendous teaser that it needs to be followed through! I cannot wait to see what Payal is like 10 years down the road and where AarYa is at in their relationship! You have opened quiet a can of worms with this future track FF and I can't wait to see how you bring it all together! Eagerly waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: Samanalyse

PS: I think GC would look hot with grey hair! ☺️ Like not all over, but just a little bit at the temples.