SS: Palki Part 8 Upd July 20th - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

This was another great update. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Lots of different layers of the main characters came out.

At the beginning they were stuck in an akward moment with Yash walking in on Aarti but I like the comfort between them still exists after all this time as even though they both feel uncomfortable, Aarti still lets him stay in the room.

Yash then changes to being protective as seen where he starts questioning her with respect to the problems she might have faces while he was away and she in turn blurts out that he didn't need to go playing the role of husband hints that she is still confused and doubtful of their new relationship so I'd really like to see how these doubts get cleared to make way for the romance.

I really liked that Aarti wanted to include Payal in their trip. I think she initially included her so that she won't be stuck alone with Yash but somewhere deep down I get a feeling that she just wants to spend time with her friend. I have a feeling that Payal might be the one to really bring them closer though.

It was really nice of Yash to bring back something for her. He says it is because he didn't want her to be questioned by the family but to me it seems as though he gave it some thought.

Looking forward to the coming updates.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: saf24

This was another great update. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Lots of different layers of the main characters came out.

At the beginning they were stuck in an akward moment with Yash walking in on Aarti but I like the comfort between them still exists after all this time as even though they both feel uncomfortable, Aarti still lets him stay in the room.

Yash then changes to being protective as seen where he starts questioning her with respect to the problems she might have faces while he was away and she in turn blurts out that he didn't need to go playing the role of husband hints that she is still confused and doubtful of their new relationship so I'd really like to see how these doubts get cleared to make way for the romance.

I really liked that Aarti wanted to include Payal in their trip. I think she initially included her so that she won't be stuck alone with Yash but somewhere deep down I get a feeling that she just wants to spend time with her friend. I have a feeling that Payal might be the one to really bring them closer though.

It was really nice of Yash to bring back something for her. He says it is because he didn't want her to be questioned by the family but to me it seems as though he gave it some thought.

Looking forward to the coming updates.


Bingo! Thank you for the summary :) A neat one at that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
awesome update ... loved it !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
simply fab...
i just loved it...👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Hi Hasini ... just chanced upon this today ... and needless to say ... I'm extremely impressed and bowled over by your SS... 👏

I had read your story in Na bole tum .. forum ... and loved it ... (BTW , r u continuing that ? I stopped watching that serial, and so dont go to that forum either )

This is a beautiful exploration of the changing relationship between 2 friends,

Just meeting an old pal ... especially of the opp sex... after a few years, is quite disconcerting, especially if you shared a special bond earlier !

And here, A & Y find themselves married even without having time to analyse their feelings for each other.

Am eager to see how this will pan out ... how they come to terms with this wedding ... and how they will realize that they had something special all along !

PS: I can just imagine Gurmeet and Kratika doing full justice to the various expressions you have portrayed here !

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: rusha4003

I had read your story in Na bole tum .. forum ... and loved it ... (BTW , r u continuing that ? I stopped watching that serial, and so dont go to that forum either )

and how they will realize that they had something special all along !


I will finish all my stories. So keep tabs on Will-O'-the-Wisp too...

Ah! isn't it a bit too early to tell if they had shared something special all along? What if they are only going to begin to fall in love now?

That is a possibility too, right?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Can one ever tell when friendship has turned into love? Easing into each other's space nicely. Looking forward to more.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: had2bu

Can one ever tell when friendship has turned into love? Easing into each other's space nicely. Looking forward to more.


I do think its easy to tell if that person is self-aware...As they say its a fine line and to me once you cross that line, there is no going back.

But that's my take...

I take it, you are not into Gaurav and Aditi...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6th.Element


I do think its easy to tell if that person is self-aware...As they say its a fine line and to me once you cross that line, there is no going back.

But that's my take...

I take it, you are not into Gaurav and Aditi...😳

I do like Yash and Aarti and since I started with that it would be hard to switch. I don't know the others.

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