FF - |As Fate Would Have It| Chapter 9 June17 - Page 9

Gahhh I HATE busy and long weekends! I haven't been able to come of IF for long intervals for the past two days and had to resort to reading your updates from my phone at the very first chance I got!

And my god, I have SO much to say about the EPIC BRILLIANCE that were the last two chapters! Chapter 4 completely bowled me over and I was waiting for later today when I had some free time so that I could leave my lengthy review, but you pleasantly surprised me with another update which was just as flawless and now I have two beautiful chapters to write my own thesis paper on 😆 If you have looked at any of the comments on Mira's FF, you will see just how CRAZY Borna and I can get when we come across something that is this beautifully written!

Last chapter tore my hearts to shreds, I felt tangible pain for Aarti as you went through her thought process, and I just wanted someone to hold her in that moment! She has been through so much, life has made her mature beyond her years and the way she holds herself with so much strength and courage even in the most heart breaking situations is completely staggering! You have done a brilliant job with a character that I already adore so much and you have made me love her even more, if that was possible!

I am glad that we don't have to deal with the Prashant nonsense here, and if I may make a request, please do keep Arpita at a bare minimum, we'll already be dealing with too much of her this week in the show and I want this to be my AarYa respite as we go through all that! You have structured an amazing story here, and I am sure Yash will continue to surprised at every turn by Aarti! He has no idea what hit her and I am sure very soon he will completely mesmerized by her, even though she will do her level best to maintain her distance because to her his heart belongs to another!

You have left us with a very, very, very deliciously enticing cliffhanger and I am dying to see what Yash's reaction to Aarti's bold proclamation will be! Yash is way over his head at this moment and I am impatiently waiting to see Aarti completely starting to consume him and hopefully that happens soon enough! The show is making us do enough of the waiting game, which is why this FF couldn't have come at a better time! So please do update soon, and if I get an opportunity, I will do a para by para analysis of last chapter because it just struck me deeply! Keep up the wonderful, wonderful, wonderful work!

Fari, that was AWESOME!! 👏👏👏 I let out a whoop of joy when I saw you had updated. This was another beautiful update. You are gradually killing me with your writing, dear. 😳 I absolutely love the Aarti you have sketched here. So strong, so resilient, mature, independent... Loved that part where she confined herself to the bathroom. I was almost expecting her to tear up, but once again, you surprised me.😃

In the locked premise of the bathroom, Aarti could let her emotions free. Had it been any woman, any logical woman, she would have cried. For tears are meant to heal, to offer a release of emotions before maturity levels, but Aarti knew the importance of her tears and knew there would be a time when she would rely on her tears for support. She would however, like any girl who knew the importance of having an investment, save her tears for a better day. Looking at her reflection, she saw the remains of her makeup applied many hours before, perfected to make her look like a doe eyed bride. Washing her face, perhaps as a way of clearing her thoughts, she glared back at the reflection. Seeing her old self - a part of her she could still relate to - reflected back added to her composure.

This para proved she is absolutely different from any other random girl. I loved the sheer strength and self-control she displayed. The bold part really pulled at my heartstrings. I can almost feel her agony reach out to me with a pair of hands and shaking me up to acknowledge her pain. How she had come into the house with a dream of an ideal husband, and how cruelly fate had capsized the boat she was sailing in...

And that is how he saw her, with her head resting on the dressing table. Taking long, purposeful strides, he went to check up on her. He had a long, and tiring night, he did not need more drama. But if she was crying - and if he had caused those tears - then he would also stop them. This entire mess was his fault, and he would not let AartiJi, an innocent bystander, shoulder all the pains.

Hmmm... This para sort of gives an insight into the Yash that you have painted. He is not heartless for sure. He might have messed it all up but he owns up to it, acknowledges his fault, but sadly can't undo it. I love how he decides that he would not let Aarti ji endure all the troubles herself. 😳

And the end was a shocker ! 😲 You threw us off the cliff but you held onto our hands as well. Now we are absolutely hanging in between.😆 I want to know Yash's reaction to this unexpected reply from Aarti. I am waiting eagerly for your next update.😍

P.S. This FF of yours just came at the right moment, cuz I was really getting impatient with the show and their digressions. But your FF is like a breath of fresh air, cuz the story revolves around the only 2 whom we would like to read about. 😉

P.P.S. I am so glad that this has no Prashant, Bua or G3. They are really an eyesore.

after he heard her dialogue i think this will b his expression😲

Originally posted by: scripted

@MelodiousDreams: I am TERRIBLE with names, PLEASE forgive me if it takes me a very long time to stop using your IF ID and start using your real name.

I wrote out a huge message to you, but i had quoted you, and my message vanished due to the fact that i am less than 25 post old on IF, and there was a link in your message that i had quoted. In an effort to stop spammers, I lost what i had written.

Calling me Fari is perfect, most people usually do. I will certainly try and comment on DC, but i am very shy. I hope i don't lose my nerve on the last moment.

I wish i had read Mira's story while it was still up. It intrigues to me learn what she had written, especially after reading the comments on the first few pages!

-ZsterMG- : Zahra right? (refer to comment above about my lack in the skill of remembering names =() Even though I wont take TOO long in building their story (for I hope to finish it before my cousin's (week long) wedding in a couple of weeks, where I will most likely not get to be online much, I still hope i do the character's justice.

Mamita: Thank you! I will try and join DC, but hopefully i wont shy away. By the time i get home after work, it has already reached many pages, and everything i want to say is usually said. I really hope I do my story justice! Aarti is such a sweetheart that I want her to find her happiness, both in the show, and outside.

@Bold -1 : Of course, you will not, cuz we all know you are brilliant with words. The confidence actually reflects in your writing. And even if you are gonna lose your nerve, we will never let that happen. 😃

@Bold -2: YAY!! I am so happy that you will not stretch their love story, cuz even I am free only till the first 3 weeks of July. After that I will have my college. So I will be missin out on all the fun in I-F, the DC and your wonderful FF. 😭 Thank you so much for this. And don't worry, your characters will never go astray, because you sketched them out so well. 😳

And please do join the DC, I know you will be included in one of the best writers there. And the DC is for everyone, whether you say something already said or not. All we want to know there is how you feel about the show, its episodes, and so on. It is such a treat to read all of those. So please do join whenever you get time, cuz it is a 24x7 open thread. 😆 Anytime you post something, and you will find someone or the other replying to it. 😃

Awesomeee update!

Wow that's great update. Nice going. Thanks for updating soon, so u don't have to go to last part to see what the story is about.

Lovely update. Would really love to see how this story progresses with the trials Aarti would have to face and how she handles them.

Fariii!! I can't even begin to describe just how obsessed I am feeling about this FF!! Its been only 5 chapters but I'm so sucked into this story already that's it's impossible not to feel every emotion because you describe them to the T!! Love it!

I was literally smiling at my computer screen when I saw that you updated again .. amazing update..