thruth getting revealed

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am writing for the first time so please bare with my mistakes
background:
( prateek left his phone accidently in yash's room and yash still missing arthi with all his attempts to stop forget her fails each n every thing in the room reminds him aarti just the way the bindi reminded him about aarti)
prateek's phone ring n yash comes out of his thoughts. he looks for the source of the ring and finds out that prateek forgot his mobile in the room.
he moves towards the mobile and by the time he reaches the mobile the ring goes off
on the other hand aarti who gave the first ring didnt have the patience to wait so she called again.
yash was getting out of his bed to return the phone to prateek but the phone rings and yash sees AARTI BHABHI calling.
out of anger yash cuts the line...
impatient aarti calls again as yash took lots of time to cut the phone and aarti thought prateek was not responding ...
yash was abt to cut the call but makes his mind to speak with aarti ji
as aarti was impatient she didnt wait for other side to answer and started blabbering as fallows:
aarti:"hello prateek bhaiya ghar me saab kuch tik he na...apne phone utane itne dher kyun kiya...yashji tik he na ...payal aur palak kaise he...ghar me sab log tik he naaa..."
(and she ask n number of questions non stop just the way she spoke to yash regarding issue of returning advance of bulbs long back)
meanwhile yash couldnt understand aarti's behaviour if she is so much corcerned why did she leave him and why did she return arpita's bangles and lot of questions raising in his mind
aarti realises that she spoke for long time and prateek bhaiya(according to her) didnt respond so she asks
aarti:"bhaiya aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho kya aap bhi apne bhabhi se naraz ho..."continues another long talk...
mean while yash decides to speak up and asks
yash:"aarti ji "
thunderstuck aarti becomes speachless for mins..as well as yash was silent (both busy in thoughts)
finally yash breaks the silence and decides to question aarti
yash:"aart ji apne arpita ka kangan kyun lota diya aur aap apne ghar kyun chalegayi besides everyone stoppin u "
aarti silent
yash:"aarti ji jawab digiye"
(meanwhile prateek remembers and comes to yash's room and hears yash's conversation)
yash:"aarti ji jawab digiye"(second time and yash notices prateek and gives a questioning look)
prateek:"bhaiya phone bhool gaya tha "stamersss "toh phone lene aaya"
yash:"aarti ji mein aap se baad me bhat karta ha hun"
(and cuts the phone)
yash:"(curiousand demanding tone)prateek such such bata kyan huya aarti ji ke saath"
prateek:"bhaiya stamers wohhh actuallyy"
yash:"mujhe such janna he prateek jaldi bol"
prateek:(narates the whole story and lastly)"sorry bhaiya maine aap ko ye pehle batana chahta ta lekin bhabhi ne aap ko kuch batane se mana kiya"
yash felt sorry for aarti and remembers her promise and way she said she will try to return his 10 crores
aarti on the hand wondering what would yashji think about her etc...
(this is my own story and i would be happy if the story goes this way)
i would be glad if u could share ur feelings regarding the story line.
Edited by hima1991 - 13 years ago

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hima1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys please do leave ur comments as i am writing for the first time i would like to have ur feedback
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may be possible , love it your idea
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hope it happens in the u wrote !!
but your idea is nice !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wOW IT REALLY SOUNDS GOOD DEAR...
wONDERFUL...
iF IT HAPPENS I WOULD BE HAPPY TOO!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really hope this happens and Yash realize Aarti is innocent and bring her back home😛...Waise nice script👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good imagination from u. hope it happen😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one dear.im too hoping dat sumthing like dis happens.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice!
I hope so too that something like this happens!
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Nice idea it sounds awesome

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