AarYa FF:O Re Piya..|Prt 2/Pg 7|6 May

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So girls,here I am to bore you to death with another stupid idea of mine😆
O Re Piya is actually a real story that happened in the late 1990's at Salem Medical College,TamilNadu.I came to know about this story through my maasi who had played a pivotal role in bringing the couple together😳I hope you all will enjoy this one and keep supporting me:)
Sari Umar Ankho Me Ek Sapna Yaad Raha
Sadiyan Beet Gayi Par Wo Lamha Yaad Raha
Na Jane Kya Baat Thi Unme Aur Hamme
Sari Mehfil Bhul Gaye Bus Wohi Ek Chehra Yaad Raha

Mauhabbat ek ehsasson ki pawan si kahaani hai
kabhi kabira deewana tha, kabhi meera diwani thi
yahaan sab log kehte hain meri aankhon mein aasoon hain
jo tu samjhe to moti hai, naa samjhe to paani hai

(Thank you shubika for these amazing lines.Love you😳)
Yash comfortably rested his head on the head rest of his seat.The moment he closed his eyes,her face popped up in his mind.Her eyes..
They were the first thing that came into his mind.
Her eyes..they always drove him crazy..
Her nose..which would always twitch in anger..
Her lips...their sweet taste..
His thoughts were broken when someone patted his shoulder.
Yash opened his eyes to see a girl standing whom he guessed maybe 17 or 18.She wore a cute pink t-shirt and leggings.Her hair was left free and it touched her shoulder where the girl had curled them.She was having her Apple-I Pod with her headphones dangling in the air.
"Excuse me,mister.The seat is mine"she told him.
"Oh sorry"Yash said as he got up and exchanged his seat.
He bumped into the girl and hadn't noticed that his wallet had dropped down.He sat on the seat next to her and again closed his eyes when the girl called out,"Is this yours?"
Yash opened his eyes,this time rather angrily,and snatched the wallet away from her hand.
The girl showed him a photograph that had fallen out of his wallet and asked him,"Who's this?"
Yash was placing the wallet in his pocket when his eyes fell on the photograph the girl was holding.
He gently held the photograph in his hand as an automatic smile crept along his lips.
Yash looked at the photo smiling and said,"Aarti"
To Be continued
Preview:An insight into the past😉
*nervous*
*biting nails*
*sweating*
Gals,please tell me how it is..I would continue only based on the comments I receive..
Love you..
Sally
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The Characters:Dr.Yash 'Pa(u)l Sindhiya:Dr.Aarti ReddyProf.Shobha SindhiyaGeeta TyagiMr.Suraj Pratap ReddyChetan PanditMrs.Gayatri ReddyJyoti mom PadmaPrem Sinha
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Vidhi SinhaSamragyi NemaPrateik AroraDishank AroraParidhi MerchantLeena JumaniDev KashyapAbhinav ShuklaNaintara KashyapKarishma RandevaArpita SinghaniaShweta MunshiVridant TokasAnkur Verma(Girls more characters will be introduced as the story progresses😛)Prologue--Scroll up
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey girls😊
I am shruti and I've offered to help Sally in sending out PMs.So if u wish to receive pms,please add this id to ur buddy list.
To make things easy,please press the buddy button below adjacent to the like tab.
Love,
Shruti
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept
add me to pm list pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jassi1212

nice concept
add me to pm list pls

added😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love gurmeet
and he is perfect wth DD only
but urway of wrtng s cool
i would love to read part1
thn decide :-P :-P ;-)
never mind
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOWWW Sally nice concept and that too real story

waiting for u to update

keep rockinggg girl👏👏👏

and per sure me in for pm list😉😉 rt😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FOR THE NEW FF...
DO CONTINUE SOOONNN...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting...

who is the girl met him in airport...

eagerly waiting for u to start updating parts...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely concept!!
Continue sooonnn!
Thanxx for the pm.

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