new os the first meeting - Page 2

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

a beautiful OS...
D emotions u captured in ur writin wer vry correct...

I loved d way u showed Yash's frustration wer he saw d pallu hanging out...

N d cliff moment.. Dat ws amazingly written...
Hw Maan cud relate so much with Aarti...
Hw he saved her...
N den Aarti lied in his arms...

I loved d last line...
Framed rly beautifully...

Nice one...!!!
Cheers...!!!

Originally posted by: priti11

awesooome..

loved d OS dear..

simply too good..

do write more plzzz..

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

What to say no words. U r really good writer.i havn't read ur works.But this is first one.Hop u ll write more.Jst my imagination is not working how u started to write in such an advance where still M waiting for devil 😆GC.so tp think about him

Originally posted by: Allbut1

That was absolutely WONDERFUL Vibz! Truly a pleasure to read, and despite barely knowing the characters, I could really picture it!👍🏼

Originally posted by: vibz88

thanks dear!yup we hardly know the characters so dint write much about the feeling s or thoughts in their head . 😆so just wrote the scene.

Originally posted by: vibz88

thanks abby!!yup yash was frustrated with the carelessness if i write more i will reveal the reason. The last line has a hidden meaning!

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

awesome OS..

Originally posted by: shruti_ms

awesum os

not even 24 hrs since the episode was telecasted and we have the first os

amazing

loved the os

write more soon

waiting..