Happy Ending :A ViSa two shot

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Hey dearies... I know its a way to go till MUs clear so I got another idea how this MUs will clear. So umm hope u like this...😊

Happy Ending

part one

'Yes Its all drama Sarita! My words, my feelings- everything I said is a pure lie. The thing is I loathe you! I hate the fact that you are existing on this planet.. the truth is yes! I loathe you, I hate you with every fiber in my being-'

'then WHY the HELL did you FAKE LOVE? I thought you loved me- that you truly-'

'and it hurt, right? this came as a blow! It hit you hard, didn't it? Just the way it hurt me when you were plotting behind my back to elope with Raj..'

Sarita was in extreme pain and it hurt him to look into her eyes. He hated that he still somewhere had those feelings alive in his heart for her.

'I wasn't plotting anything. I was just- tell me this is a lie! tell me this is a stupid prank.. tell me that you love mee! Please...' she broke down into tears clutching his shirt, pulling out his buttons as she collapsed on to the ground.

And it made him cry. Remorse- that was what he felt, for hurting her, for breaking her heart. But no he'd not let it overpower the joy coarsing through his veins for achieving his task.

'you better not try tricking me again Sarita, I'm letting you stay in this house just for Abhi because he doesn't know what kind of a vile woman you are. And I hope you don't show your true side to him- because I somehow managed to survive, but he wouldn't be able to take it..'

And he was gone. Sarita felt like slapping Vikrant for playing with her feelings and let him know that he misunderstood, but that look on his face told her everything. He wouldn't budge. Abhi's exams were coming close and she should take good care of Abhi and then she'd think of something. She made up her mind to avoid Vikrant and take care of Abhi.

xxx

It was back to ViSa acting like strangers, hell it was even worse. There was not a single day when she'd not cry and this made him feel broken inside. His taunts had less bite and he was even worried once when she slipped from ladder catching her in time to save her and even advised her to be careful while cleaning.

'the truth is you love me Vikrant ji.. why dont you show it? Why dont you speak up so that this silence ends for ever..'

'Mammaa...' Abhi came running pulling her out of her thoughts.

xxx

Abhi's exams were over and sarita took his help to corner Vikrant.

'Abhi isn't still home? OK I'll get him..' Vikrant reached his school to find out that everyone had left.

'It was me...'

He heard a voice from behind. Sarita was standing behind him her back facing the entrance gate to the school.

'I made that call.. because you won't talk with me and I want you to-'

'Didn't I ask you not to play tricks anymore Sarita?"

'This NOT a TRICK Vikrant ji. why would I keep playing tricks and ruin this marriage as well? I can't afford another punarvivah..'

'May be because you won't find a fool like me to play with..'

'No. I may find someone. But may be I can't love him like.. I love you..'

Her genuine eyes made him fidget.

'I'm leaving..'

'No you can't. You need to listen to me.. clear this misunderstanding you got..'

'I dint misunderstand you-'

'Why are you so stubborn? Give me chance to speak.. listen this is- this whole thing of eloping was a plan! Divya was aware of it.. we had to hide it because-'

'Stop lying..'

'I'm not lying; let me complete this. See, you love me, I can see it in your eyes. If this misunderstanding is cleared then we'll be-'

'I don't love you..'

'That's a lie!'

'No.. I dont love u and its true!'

'You cant bluff!'

'SARITA..'

She tried to hold his hand but he backed off shouting at her.

'God yes! I love you.. I've loved you more than anyone else! And you betrayed me.. I wanted to take revenge but hell! Every time I hurt you.. it hurt me here.. right in my heart.. but now I don't love you. Even though I do.. I wont tell you..'

'Mr. Suryavanshi..'

'Stop calling me that way.. You will drive me crazy with your sweetness! Why are you doing this.. why cant you admit that you betrayed me, that you love Raj..'

'that's not true! I dont love him.. Vikrant ji... you are in the middle of the road.. come over!'

'Stop caring for me! I hate you,, I hate you Sarita. I hate that I cant hate you. You make me feel helpless.. GOD! I loath you..'

'Vikrant ji.. there's a truck coming from-'

'I said stop caring for me.. Don't act as if you love me! I dont want to see your face!'

Vikrant wasn't listening and Sarita watched in horror as truck zoomed closer.

'VIKRANT JIII...' she ran pushing him aside but got hit by the truck herself..

'SARITAAA...'


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So did u like it?? Next part will be coming soon. Hit like n pray tell me how u all felt.. Next part will have the MUs cleared. I hope u liked dis

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow .. full of emotions !!
This is how it would be .. when the MU will be cleared.
Waiting for the next part pls update soon :)

Priya awesome work
Edited by crazy_218 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was beautiful😳.. though i feel bad that its always sarita on the giving side!! cant wait for part 2!!😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priya this is awesome yaar !!! 👏
I really love it ... ❤️
Do continue soon ...
Can't wait for chap 2 !!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is beautiful...update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is awesome loved it so much very much in char and full of emotions
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG, Priya! This just too good! ⭐️ 👏

This is sooo intense! You brought life into the characters! 👏

Simply amazing, dear! Just awesome! Love it! ❤️

Update soon please! 😳

You are fantastic! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just loved it baby...

Keep it up Priya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_218

wow .. full of emotions !!

This is how it would be .. that MU will be cleared.
Waiting for the next part pls update soon :)



aww thanks so much dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolbakes

it was beautiful😳.. though i feel bad that its always sarita on the giving side!! cant wait for part 2!!😛



yeah but this is what should happen to make him realize.. you learn to value things only when u loose. Aww thanks😃

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