CAN any1 WRITE FF on VISA SR...??? - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Indu2666, awesome post yaar.loved the entire scene. I just posted my views on adiff post and cotinued your scrpt with my thoughts. Its almost the same and i feel your story and mine can be mixed . Here I am sharing my thoughts again in continuation to to you part 1 :

Vikrant is getting ready for office and a his servant bring a packet
he asks what is it.. servant replies its for madam
Vikrant thinks" for saritha?"
he says"Give it to me"
He open uo the packet and sees passport in it with Dubai visa
he is shcoked and thinks about how she cancelled his call and she shoudl be there too
he is heart broken when he finds out that she has been lying all this time and want sto go with Raj to Duabi
Vandana's words revolve in his brain.. he is angry and goes to Saritha's room.. but then he sees abhi and saritha talkign very sweetly n to each other

Vikrant is in confusion whther to get in fight with saritha.. he goes to his room and think he need to be storng for his son.. and no one can make him feel abandoned..
and thinks may be saritha loves raj and after all he forced her to marry him
he breaks down comepltely when he thinks saritha might leave them for ever..

** My thought's continued for this part 1 **:

while vikrant breaks down about sarita leaving with raj, he will extremely be worried about Abhi and decides not to confront Saritha and thinks to deal it in his own way. Being a matured and thouhtful person he is he does not want Abhi to be affected by this. So he will stop talking to Saritha and keeps ignoring her. He will also try to keep Abhi as much away from her so Abhi doesnt have to breakdown all of a sudden when sarita leaves, so he tries to spend most of his time with abhi. Sarita wonders what happened to him but doesn't understand what's going on although her instinct tells her that he might have known the truth.while this contnues for sometime, sarita keeps visiting divya on their plan and here vikrant thinks that she is going to meet raj. Once such day when Sarita is out, Vikrant comes back home from work and Vandana keeps poisonng his mind which angers him and he leaves from the house ( goes to his guest house or something).

When Sarita returns home she looks for Vikrant in the house and then finds Vandana who taunts her and tells her vikrant left angrily while she is enjoying with her Raj ji. Sarita as usual ignores/back answers her and goes into her room and keeps restlesly wonders where Vikrant is. Meanwhile she happens to check hi cupboard/draw and finds the cover which has her passport and Dubai visa. She understands the entire thing and decides to talk to Vikrant and clear the misunderstanding. While she runs to meet Vikrant , raj stops her on the way and keeps ranting about their plan. Unable to bear anymore Sarita gives him left and right and says she moved on in life and wants to live with her family - her husband and son ( NO she doesn't tell raj that she loves Vikrant bcoz it will be nice if you expressed your love first to the one whom you love :). Raj is boggled by Sarita's behavior and stay calm.

Here Sarita , reaches the guest house where Vikrant is and Confronts him. Vikrant does not say anything and they start indirectly taunting/blaming each other. As usual they start fighting,tu tu main main, cheezon ka tod phod due to Vikrant's anger and then at last they end up saying to each other that they love each other and cant live without each other or does not want to live without each other.There will be a silence when they express theri love (hawa blowing, curtains flying and a romantic mood). They progress towars each other hug, kiss and then follow the most romantic consumation scene ever on Indian TV and and awseome background song)...Subah hote hi starts their pati-patni wala romance etc etc...


But yours is awesome yaar.. Loved it
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Edited by preiti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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preiti that was awesome can you write another one ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Indu-your write up was awesome..I totally loved it..you should post it in a fresh new post in forum so everyone can read it!!..it was so romantic and so well written!..👏loved it❤️
my fav part
she repeats"you love me"
he says i can't live with out you⭐️
and they both look at each other and she says I also don't think i can live with out you..
vikrant is overwhelmed with happiness and they both hug tightly..😳😳😳

Edited by Bul3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@preiti-another lovely scenario..loved the idea totally..Vikrant-Sarita away from home...fighting and then confessing!!awesome👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks guys for the encouragement...
I will try to think of some other scenarios too..
I liked what preiti wrote too.. it very funny.. true to them..

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