Saas Bahu Aur Prithvi-3!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey after long this lazy gal has been gud enough 2 complete da script....

Recap....

Sanyo n Prithvi cum back home after marriage.Prithvi z mom decides 2 take revenge n then she starts playing tricks on Sanyo!Pratha finds out abt it n decides 2 support her bhabhi.Unwantedly sanyo ends up hurting prithvi n so decides 2 end up da saas bahu war....wahan saasu maa apni bahu ko one set 4 all khatam karne k baare mein sochti hai...Ab aage....

In da morning prithvi z mom seriously thinks abt her plan n then ends up mixing poison in sanyo z food!This is sighted by pratha....

Sanyo cums 2 her saas and says:"Maaji...aaj hum aap se maafi maangne aayein hain...ab hum is sab se thak gaye hain....humein ek saas nahi maa chahye....aaj humein maaf kar dijiye!"

Prithvi z mom:"Beta....galati tumhari hi nahi humari bhi hai!Khair choro ab yeh lo...prasad...is rishte ki shuruwaat prasad se karte hain!"Devilish smile that she gave....isi mein to zeher hain...o no sanyo...mat khaana!Jst in tym...pratha came:"NAHIN BHABHI!YEH MAT KHAYEGA!Is mein zeher hai!"

Sanyo:"Pratha.....bohat hoa ab hum tumhari koi baat nahi suneinge!"

Pratha:"Bhabhi aap nahi samajh raheen!Yeh...aap..."

Sanyo interrupts:"Bas ek lafz aur nahi....agar is mein sach mein zeher nikla to bhi hum tayaar hain!"

Pratha:"Bhabhi....?"

Sanyo:"Hum jaante hain pratha...is mein zeher hai...."

Prithvi z mom is shocked:"Bahu rani....kya keh rahi ho tum?"

Sanyo:"Nahi maaji aaj nahi....hum jaante hain k aap ne is mein zeher milaya hai...sach kahein aaj humein aap se koi shikayat nahi....maa ji is mein aap ki koi galati nahi kyun ki....yeh sab ek singhasan ne kia hai.....yeh baat aaj humari samajh mein aa rahi hai jab kal humne prithvi ki aankhon mein aansu dekhe...."

Are yeh kya twist aaya....pathar saas ne bhi aansu bahaya😉....go on sanyo..."Haan maaji kal raat ko humari waja se prithvi ki aankhon mein aansu aaye!Sanyogita to prithvi ko kabhi rula hi nahi sakti....woh aaisa kabhi kar hi nahi sakti.....kal raat humein ehsaas hoa...k is jung mein prithvi ki kia galati....lekin maaji is sab mein humari bhi kia galati....?"

Prithvi z mom cudnt stop her tears....😭

Sanyogita continues..."Aap hi bataye maaji ek rajkumari aazaad hone k liye apne mahel se door yatra par jaati hai...wahan use ek ajnabi milta hai aur dheere dheere woh ajnabi ajnabi nahi rehta...use ehsaas hota hai k woh usse pyaar karti hai...lekin singhasan k rehte woh us se door pehchaan chupati hai...aur ek din us se door bhi hoja ti hai!Hum to prithvi se door hi hogaye the par kehte hain na jodiyan wahan upar banti hain...prithvi aur hum bhi ek hogaye.....ajmer aate waqt humne prithvi se kaha tha k agar hum ek achi bahu naa bane to...?Aur usne hum se kaha k usse hum par poora bharosa hai...usi bharose par bharosa kar k hum yahan aaye....lekin yaha....khair shaid hum hi ek achi bahu naa ban paye!Hum maafi chahte hain hum yeh prasad nahi kha sakte is liye nahi kyun k HUMEIN apni jaan ki fikar hai balke is liye kyun k humari jaan mein prithvi ki jaan basti hai jo hum kabhi nahi le sakte....lekin aap ki khushi k liye us se door zaroor ja sakte hain!"

Saying this she leaves da room....pratha gives a scornful luk 2 her mum:"Maa aap bohat matlabi ho...."

But da mother was 2 emotional at that moment 2 speak!Pratha:"Maa...aaj bhabhi yahan se chali jaye gi!Ab to yeh jhoote aansu bahana band kijiye!Ek baat zaroor sochye ga....delhi ka singhasan naa milne par maharaj jaichand ne ajmer ka saath nahi dia aur aaj aap ne bhabhi ka...phir un mein aur aap mein fark kia reh gaya?!"

Saying this pratha leaves da room n prithvi z mom sits down n contemplates wat just happened....Sanyo z n pratha z words were continuously echoing in her ears.....:"AAP BOHAT MATLABI HO!" "IS SAB MEIN HUMARI KYA GALATI?" "AAP MEIN AUR UN MEIN KIA FARK!"

She stood up n knew wat 2 do....She goes 2 sanyo z room n talks 2 her:"Beti....aaj ek saas nahi prithvi ki maa tumse baat karne aayi hai.....inke ghuzarne k baad prithvi poori tarah toot gaya tha....woh khud ko doosh deta tha....talwar ki awaaz se....se kanpne laga tha woh!Aur pratha woh to aasmaan k sitaare ko dekh kar rooti rehti...Lekin ab humein samajh aaya k is mein tumhara kia kasoor...humein maaf kardo!"

Sanyo:"Maaji...."

Prithvi z mom:"Nahi beti aaj humein bolne do...aaj humara bajh kam ho jaye ga!Humein maaf kardo!"

Sanyo:"Nahi maaji..."N da 2 hug each other....

Aur here cums THE END!Sorry if u guyz didnt lyk it!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Kiran,

well must say, story ve indeed been well niched. Also u gave a bit unique spectrum to the story...
but on a humurous note, since when PrithviRaj Chauhan followd Saas Bahu Track.... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx da 2 of u!
Well...43 views 2 replies! 😭 Bohat naa insaafi hai!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey,that was wonderful! 😆 Even the topic title is just...APT! 👏 😆

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