Originally posted by: castrafa
thanks piyu for the quick update.
part 18 wow yaar that was gripping one. romance, masti and serious stuff all in one. cool yaar. i was expecting a bit more MU clearance but guess our writer has more good stuff stored for us. 😉 kahani ma twists 😉 😆
the best was pri mehandi design 🤣 🤣 oh god swords and dhanush. 😆 😆 wah kaha sa ata hai tumha itna pyara ideas😳 . good going girl 👏 👏 👏 and teasing couples part was beautifully written with dialogs.
aur apka songs selection are just to suited to the situation 👏 especially the devdas 👍🏼 songs "more piya "
😳 😳 piyu dear u r just getting better and better with ur magic⭐️ which is spelling on all of us here. ⭐️ ⭐️
thanks for the upcomings
pls pls do continue yaar. will be waiting for ur next magical script.😍 one request can u pls add some more ❤️pri-sanyo❤️ romance scenes 😳 if possible.
ur magical script fan
sash 😊
Hey Sash thanks😊. Hmmm i know u must be disappointed with Pri-sanyo fight in the end, instead of MU clearance and no romance. Sorry, for that, story ko push karna thha isliye all that serious stuff, there was no space in the story for romance. But in the coming parts more of all u want to see will be added😛 MU puri tarah se clear toh story ke climax mein hi hogi.
thank you so much for updating 😉 😊
i have finished my exams and this was a treat for me thank u so much 😳
great work 👏
keep it up, looks like ur a born writer 😛
i wish i could write like u and get my English marks higher 😆 😳
Once thanks again 😳
CHing 😃
Thanks dear 😃, and nice to see ur reply after long time😉. Where were u? Was Missing u😊
Originally posted by: Pruthaxi
awwwwww part 18 aa gaya. 😛 😛 . thak u sooooo much jiii
i will read it in evening...
😛I like all ur script, all parts posted befoer.. u r really very good writter.. keep it ur.. can i ask u some thing.. is this ur hobby or what.. i mean writting is ur hobby?
Thank u dear 😊 and Yes, Writing is my hobby since childhood.😛
Originally posted by: lakshmim_84
aww.. piyu. part 18 was as brilliant as others.. but i am feeling sorry for sanjam... pls let chamki know its sanjam
Thanks Laks for that suggestion😊. Hmmm even i noticed that, Sanjam ki kuch jyada hi khichai ho rahi hai. Now, Sanjam will not sit quite without telling Chamki about himself. Chamki will come to know soon.😉
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