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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 2

sorry for the delay😭😭

Then prvithi goes to the darbar and finds out that he has to leave for something really important. He couldn't say no to his father so he said yes. Where he was going or why that was not told to anybody in mahal not even his mom.

Next morning before the sunrise he went away really far form the palace, his friends try to search for him but failed.

Prvithi came to this old village name "hata", when he came to the village, it quite as mouse. So he just rides around the village on his horse but then when he was about to leave, a bucket of full kahra came down straight on him. He was like what is going on when he was about look up, the a young girl about his age in house started throwing things at him. he lost his temper and went into the house. The girl said to him, "pagal, pagal, pagal ghar mein agia".

When the girls mother came out the and was shocked to see a guy at her house and started saying to her daughter mohni," yeh kon hai". mohni was about to say something when someone from the back said"app ka hona wala damad".

Monhi was shocked and fell onto the floor but before she could fall prvithi held her.

And prvithi ws shocked as well.


hope u like this part and i am really srry for the delay i had to this english project😭😭 sorry for the delay😭😭😭

Pls do comment

CHing😃




Edited by ching - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
The fanfic is updated 😃

i'll wirte the next part asap

CHing 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
thank u so much it was great
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
no body liked the second part 😭 😭

CHing 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25

Chap 3

Prithvi was so shocked, he did not let go of mohini and kept looking at her so did mohini with evil eyes 😡 😆 (though)

bu then suddenly prithvi droped her and ran away in forest and started praying, kya bagbvan abhi toh meri umar dekho or mein shaddi, naa baabaa naa

So prithvi then decided to go back and get misunderstanding between them and him out. as soon as he walked into the place after couple of hours the people had alredy stratred the wedding decortions and prithvi hid behind a house to start working on his mission which he did mention to no one


what could be the mission, will he be able to tell them the truth?

srry guys again for updating it late 😭

plus no one comment on my second part 😭
well hope u guys enjoy my fanfic

CHing 😃

ps: i'll try to update long parts

Edited by ching - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
very gud job hope u update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no comments 😭 😭

CHing 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i guess i write bad that no one commented on it 😭 😭 😭

CHing 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww dont b sad, it was great! i loved it! keep it up

sara
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
no yaar u worte beautifully its great 😃

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