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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey praty....lovely work...especially the poem
sounds good...more than good

thanxx jani 4 ur support😳😳

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
BY GOD jaaneman, awesome start!
this sounds soooooooooo terific!

do continue and pm me!

by god jaani..i ll pm u sure..

thanxx sweety.....................

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: niyaati
haila praty... nyc concept..
frendship..love...revenge..sounds gud shona..do continue...........n plzzz..mail me all d UDs..kk..take care..all d best!!

thanx nitu jaan..

i ll mail u all d ud..u dnt worry😳

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maria

@maria_awan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

its really nice continue dear and pm me when u update it 😉

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Nandini

@Nandini25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

ya the poem and intro is really nice dear. plz continue.

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: maria_awan
its really nice continue dear and pm me when u update it 😉

thanxx sweetheart😃😃

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sweetshera
ya the poem and intro is really nice dear. plz continue.

than sweety.......😃😃

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

~*part-1*~

in d park....some kids are playing''😃😃'.
Shreya-reema..pass d ball'
Reema-ye le'jaldi se goal kar'''.
Avi-common shreya..aj in boys ko dikha dege..ki gals bhi football khel sakti h..n in sabse jeet bhi sakti h..
Shreya-yeppe'
Goal!!!

Rohit-aww'''.😡.huhh..kya guyz'aj tum sabko kya ho gya h'ache se khelo..hum ladkiyo se haar nhi sakte'
Chetan-kya kre yaar..aj khel me maza nhi arha'
Shreya-hahah.😃😃.haar gye to bahane marr rhe ho..jst accept it..ki ladkiya bhi football khle sakti h..n tum ladko se jeet bhi sakti h'

Rohit-huhh..
Rehne do..
Aj prithvi nhi h..tabhi tum sab itna chilla rhe ho'
Ajay-par aj prithvi khel kyu nhi raha'
Itna chupchap kyu betha h

.Rohit-pata nhi..ise kya ho gya h'
Huh.,..
Chalo'ab ghar chalte h'
Prithvi..prithvi'.
Chalo ghar chale'
Prithvii..
Ajay-rehne de..vo nhi ayga..chod..chal hum chalte h'

In d park'''at one side'prithvi was sitting.lost in his thoughts''''''
Prithvi-uff'
Kya hua hoga'
Sab theek to hoga naa'
5 bje kaha tha aane k liye😭😭'7 baj gye'
Billo kyu nhi ayi''''
Uske ghar jau..nn..nhi'damini aunty phir billo ko gussa karege..
Kya karu..kaisa pata karu ki vo theek h..
'hmm'
Idea!!

At singh's house:

A lady is standing in front of mirror..admiring her beauty..
Ohh..i m soo beautiful'so gorgeous'😳😳''.agar mere shadi naa hui hoti to aj me miss india hoti'
Par..is sanyogita ki vajah se mere SARE SAPNE MITTI ME MIL GYE'.😡.
Nhi chodugi is ladki ko'
D lady is sanyogita's tep mom damini singh

(sanyogita's real mom and damini were sisters..due 2 sudden death of sanyogita's mom'her father married damini'.tab se hi damini sanyogita se nafrat karti thi'use lagta tha k agar sanyogita nhi hoti to jai use shadi nhi karta..n uske model banne k sapne sach ho jate'vo sanyogita ko bht pareshan karti thi'..usse ghar ka kaam karvati thi')

Damini-karamjali..😡kaha marr gye..mera facepack bana ya nhi'''..
In d kitchen..
Sanyogita was cryng & trying 2 make facepack..
Sanyogita-arrey'
Choti ma ne kaha tha ki pehle haldi daalni h'nhi..nhi..pehle dahi''..
Nhi haldi..dahi..uff..me bhul gye ..ab kya karu..choti maa se puchugi to vo muje phir marege'hmm..
Peeche se 1 awaz ayi..
Arey..haldi daal ya dahi daal..kya fark padta h😃😃'

Sanyogita-ha..ye baat bhi h..thanx..
Ahh..
k..k..kon''😲😲'kon k khidki pe..
saamne aao'

suddenly..
prithvi khidki se upar chadta h..
arre..billo.😃😃.me hu'.
Sanyogita-piku!!!
Tu..tune to muje dara hi diya tha..
Tu aise khidki k peeche kya kar raha h..
Prithvi-me kab se park me tera wait kar raha hu..kyu nhi ayi'
Sanyogita-kya karu piku.😳.choti maa ne bht sara kam de diya tha
Prithvi-tere choti maa ki to😡😡😡
Sanyogita-chup'ab ja.aur muje kaam karne de..choti maa agye to bht maar padege'
Prithvi-acha theek h'par jaldi kaam karke chat pe ana..
Tuje aj bht sari baate batani h'
Sanyogiota-theek h baba..ab tu ja'
Prithvi-theek h..jaldi ana

Sanyogita damini k paas jati h..
Sanyogita-choti ma..ye lijiye aapka facepack''''.
Damini-nalaya..kaamchor..😡😡itni der se kya kar reh the kitchen me..
Itni der lagti h kya facepack banana me..
Hah..
Bol..
Hmm..isme dahi itni kam kyu h..
Ab samajhi.😡😡.tu dahi kha reh the na..
Chatakkk!!
She slapped sanyogita..
Sanyogita'cryng'😭maa..maa..mene dahi nhi khayi..sach,'
Damini-jhuti..chal..ja yaha se..raat ke khane ki taiyari kar'
Sanyogita-choti ma..vo terrace se kapde le au..barish ka mausam ho raha h'
Damini-haa ja..jaldi ja..n jaldi ana..samjhi'😡